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Dear Diary,

You are never gonna guess what happened today. Lilly showed up at my house today. As soon as I opened the door and saw Lilly, I started to get nervous! As I stared at her, I could see the pain in her eyes. I hurt my own best friend. I was about to open my mouth until she threw something at me and ran off! I looked down to the floor to see what she had thrown. My heart started to twitch. The friendship bracelet I gave her in Kindergarten. I carefully picked it up, and ran into my room. I just sat down and thought "What have I done?" I guess it's too late to change everything now.

Oliver Oken