From a distance I see the new girl who they call Isabella Swan according to Alice's premonitions

From a distance I see the new girl who they call Isabella Swan according to Alice's premonitions. Emmett Jasper and I decided to head to our dorm. "Damn another human that's blood looks so good." said Jasper referring to the new girl. "Jasper you know you can't bite the humans here Carlisle would freak or at least be mad no matter how tempting it is." I said. "I feel bad for my Alice she has to "sleep" with the new kid." said Jasper feeling bad for Alice. "Well my Rosalie has to "sleep" with her too" said Emmett. "Let's hope they have the self control to not bite the new kid. Now I'm going downstairs to get my package from Esme. Which I think is a few cd's I left at home. Be back in a few." I told them. As I was coming back from the administration's office I bumped into Isabella. The smell off of her made my throat burn with the venom that ran thought my vampire veins. I ran as fast as I could to stop the temptation. When I got back to our dorm I placed the cds on the table by my bed and followed the guys to lunch where we had to sit and pretend to eat fowl human food that smells horrible almost as bad as werewolf. We all sat together usual lunch table. That new girl glanced at me then turned away. I felt bad about this morning but she is just a regular human nothing special about her. I am the only one in my family not engaged or married it felt weird I mean Emmett and Rosalie and Alice and Jasper. I should explain our different abilities. Alice can see the future but it is possible to change. Jasper can clam down the room. I can read peoples thoughts. Emmett is super strong and Rosalie is to be beautiful. After fake eating we all decided to go to our dorm and watch football. Later in the evening Alice and Rosalie went back to their dorm to "sleep" and I decided to compose so music on piano since I had nothing better to do while Emmett decided to lift weights since we had to wait till tomorrow after class to hunt. Jasper just kind of chilled dreaming about human blood since he had a really bad craving right now. The boy in the dorm next door were being way to loud so I decided to get mad at the humans just for a fun activity. After I went in there telling them to shut up they never made another peep the rest of the night. I went back to my piano for another half hour then stayed up reading some of the text books I already knew all the information out of. Then I decided to read my learning French book and Emmett just watched football and Jasper just closed his eyes not really sleeping since vampires like us can't sleep. The next morning I went to my Chemistry class and then English where I got to sit by myself then I got to Math where I had to sit next to someone who just happened to be Bella. Her smell tempted me as if a monster was telling me to bite her. Only I knew I could do that in front of all these human so I tried to sit as far away as the desk could let me. When we had to do the project together I told her what some answers were. The bell rang. I ran out of the classroom as fast as I could to find Emmett, Jasper, Alice and Rosalie to go off the campus and hunt. We all ran so fast no one noticed us. We all got our thirsts under control. "We'll be ok for a few days now" I said. It was late so we all had went our dorms and we "Slept"

A/N there was chapter one in Edward's point of view! Please review so I can try to improve or have any suggestions for my story. I try hard to put the suggestions into my stories. Constructive Criticism is much appreciated