Hey Guys I'm back again! I know I said I wasn't going to update for about a week or 2, but I have a reason. Ok so I put up the first chapter, shutdown my computer, got some chips, when downstairs to my room, looked at the new story, and it already had a review. A review within 10 MINUTES! I mean, that means so much to me that someone saw I put up a story, and was so excited to read it. ^_^ Just makes me so happy. Anyways onto reviews!
KF-fan- Sorry I will and try not to add any author notes. I just thought it was valid information.
Cloe- I will try and update as much as I can! I'm glad i can right a story you want.
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Now that thats done onto the story!(btw-if you're on a guest account, I probably won't respond, so if you want me to, then put a name under your review.)
LAST TIME: "Can I take your order?" a very high pitched, bored voice says. "Yeah I will have..." I finally look up at the waitress, and my heart stops.
"...Jinx?" I freeze at the sound of my old name. I look up at the person, and see him sitting there. My eyes widen. I try to play it off.
"E-excuse me?" I try to say, my voice shaking. Kid Flash stands up and looks at me. "I-is it... you Jinx?" Oh crap. How did he know it was me!? I mean I know I still look a little like my old self, but I didn't think anyone would be able to recognize me!
"I-I don't know what you're...uh... talking about..sir.." I say. He stares at me for a couple seconds. He's not falling for it.
"I have to go take orders!" I squeak and turn and run into the kitchen. I run into the pantry and sit down. I pull my knees up to my face and start crying.
"He... found me... How did he know it was me! Why is he here!?" I mentally scream. I hear the door open, and look up to see Berry. She walks up and puts her hand on my shoulder.
"Darlin are ya ok? You kinda ran away from that man like a mouse away from a cat!" she says. I feel more tears go down my face.
"Berry its a very long story... that I can't tell you right now. But to make it short, I don't know how he found me." I say. Berry pulls out a little piece of paper, and gives it to me.
"He gave this papah to me to give to ya." she says giving the white folded piece of paper to me. On the front it says "Jinx." I take it and open it.
"Jinx,
I know its you. Don't try and hide it. You might look different, but I can still tell. You can change your face all you want, I will always be able to tell who you are. I will be back tomorrow. You better be there or I will find you. And you better be prepared to answer questions. 'Cause I have lots.
-Kid Flash"
I read it over and over. Knowing him he could find me. Lots of people know me and my address. "LK breath darlin'!" I hear Berry shout. I suck in a breath and breath out. I stand up.
"Berry I... I need to take the rest of the day off. I don't feel well." I say. Her eyes soften.
"A' course sweetie. But be back tommara or you'll have to do 200 push ups." she says walking out. I hang my apron up and walk down the streets. My house isn't that far, so I walk. Finally I reach my small 1 bedroom apartment. I barely make it through the door before I collapse. I just lay there in my living room, crying. I curl into a ball and sob. I stand up and somehow I find myself in the bathroom. I look in the mirror. I see myself, but not Lucky. Staring back at me is Jinx with a sneer on her face.
"You know you wanted him to find you. Don't pretend you're mad." She says.
" I am! I didn't want anyone to find me for at least another 2 years!" I shout back.
Jinx starts laughing. And laughing. And laughing. I pound on the mirror to try and get her to stop.
"Stop!" I scream. I hit the mirror, and it shatters into a million pieces. I flinch at the pain in my hands and see my hands covered in glass and bleeding. I reach into the drawer and find bandages. I clean up the glass, then go into my room and lay on my bed.
"What will I do?" I think. "I'm going to have to talk to him tomorrow." I think.
I hear a faint beeping. I slowly open my eyes. I stretch and look at my clock. I instantly go into panic mode. I hit the alarm button to shut it off.
"Crap its already 6:30! I'm going to have to do 30 pushups!" I scream at myself. I hope out of my bed and slip on my work clothes. "Berry is going to kill me." I think. I grab a muffin and run out the door.
"I'm here!" I say as I run in.
"Thur ya are slacker! What part of "Don't be late or else" don't you undurstand!" Berry screeches at me. "100 pushups!" she says as she walks away. I quickly do my pushups, then get to work. I flip the sign to open and wipe tables. I set out silverware just as people start to come in. I walk around and clean up. I help take orders. I smile and laugh and talk with customers. But inside I am freaking out. "He'll be here soon. What will I do!" I think walking up to another customer.
"Hello can I take your order?" I say in a cheery voice.
"Yes I would like answers." I hear a deep voice say. My heart stops. I don't even need to look.
"Well I'm working right now. Maybe after. I say walking away.
"Hey I still want to eat something! Kid Flash yells.
I sigh then walk back to him.
"Fine i'll answer your stupid questions." I say sitting down.
And there is the new chapter! :D Sorry its short. I have to go to church and stuff. Thanks again for the reviews!
Question For The Story: Do you like Berry's character? I do. I love writing in her accent. I also like her personality. She's tough and unforgiving, but also sweet and kind. I think besides the main 2 people(you know who i'm talking about) she's my favorite character in this story.
Please review read and critique!
