Hello, everyone! PHANTOMKNIGHT47 with the second chapter of The Astonishing Spider-Man! Basically, Jacob's new admirer, Max Dillon, becomes a super-villain by the name of "Electro" after a freak accident involving genetically modified electric eels, also Jacob gets a new teammate in the form of Stanley the Echidnahog, AKA Scarlet Spider.

Me and KKSparks owns Jacob and Scarlet, KKSparks owns Lydia, Creepypasta owns Jeff the Killer, Marvel and Stan Lee owns Spider-Man, Akihisa Ikeda owns Rosario+Vampire, Secret-Universe, AKA cmara owns the Sonic TNG Kids, SEGA owns Sonic the Hedgehog

This is dedicated to GamingFictions2013 (KKSparks on DeviantART), Secret-Universe (cmara on DeviantART) and WOLFWATCHER12 (WOLWATCHER12 on DeviantART)

It shows the streets of Japan, where Spider-Man is web swinging throughout.

"Spider-Man!" cheered a crowd

"Hello, civilians!" said Spider-Man "Talk to me, Japan!"

="Police reports indicate of a OsCorp truck containing vials of Isotope 1-8-4-9 is being hijacked."=

"Time to go to work!" said Spider-Man as he web swung after the crooks.

(Opening Song: "Dearly Departed" by Loving the Lie)

Instrumental Intro: It shows the city rooftops, and the Astonishing Spider-Man logo just slides into view.

(Let's skip to the part where you get what's coming, what you have earned) It shows Jacob being bitten by the radioactive spider which gave him his powers, and he is attending classes at Yokai Academy while living the life of a superhero

(You took my trust, annihilated, Dearly Departed) It shows Jacob's enemies as Spider-Man, Mac Guargan/Scorpion, Max Dillon/Electro, Herman Schultz/Shocker, Dr. Otto Octavius/Dr. Octopus, Adrian Toomes/The Vulture, Saizou Komiya/Venom, Aleksei Sytsevich/Rhino, Kraven the Hunter, Beetle, Quentin Beck/Mysterio, Cletus Kasady/Carnage, Jason McEndale/Hobgoblin and Norman Osborn/Green Goblin.

(This is the end of your failed story!) It shows Stanley as Spider-Man, fighting criminals, and saving lives of innocent people

(shovel dirt on your grave, there's no turning back) It shows Jacob facing his friends, and they are cheering him on as he fights thug after thug.

(Conniving friend, you don't get a jury!) It shows all of Stanley's friends ready for action, as Tsukune joins the team as Agent Venom, Jacob's little sister, Scarlet, as Spider-Girl, and Norman Osborn's son, Harry, as the Hero Goblin, with Stanley the Echidnahog as Scarlet Spider

(Make no mistake, your time has passed!) Jacob web swings off, his reflection shown in the side of a building.

(end of OP)

Chapter 2: Electro Suite

The Armored truck was being piloted by a muscular man who resembled Germany from Hetalia, but with brown hair styled like Kira Yamato's hair, and a tattoo of the Soviet Union hammer-and-sickle on the back of his right hand.

"SAY "HELLO" TO ALEKSEI SYTSEVICH!" the man roared, his voice having a Russian accent to it, his voice sounding like the Heavy from Team Fortress 2

This was Aleksei Sytsevich, a Russian criminal who went renegade, and went to Japan, stealing weapons from companies for his troops.

Aleksei had two of his men on top of his truck, and they boarded the OsCorp truck

"The minute the boss sells this on the Black Market, we'll be rich!" said the first goon, and they saw Spider-Man behind them, and opened fire with Spidey dodging every shot.

"What're you shooting with, Super Soakers?" said Spider-Man, as he webbed up the goons, and left them for the cops. The isotopes were now safe.

Elsewhere, a man with pale skin and black hair was crossing

The man was known as Max Dillon, an electrical worker at OsCorp, he was crossing the street, until a flipped taxi was about to OBLITERATE the man.

"HELP!" yelled Max at the top of his lungs, until Spider-Man saved him.

"You OK, sir?" said Spider-Man.

"Yeah," said Max, and he saw his savior "Hey...you're Mr. Spider-Man, aren't you?"

"Mr. Spider-Man is my father." said Spider-Man "Nice to meet you, Max."

"You know my name!" said Max.

"It's what it says on your ID, right?" said Spider-Man.

"B-but I'm a nobody!" said Max

Spider-Man faced Max.

"You're not a nobody, Max!" said Spider-Man "You're a somebody! You're my eyes and ears out here. OK, partner?"

Max smiled upon being called "Partner"

"Alright, see ya!" said Spider-Man, as he chased after Aleksei, but the truck stopped

Aleksei ran off, but Spider-Man found him, and leapt at him as Aleksei opened fire, but Spider-Man kicked his gun out of his hands, and whistled "Here Comes the Spider-Man" as he webbed his arms together, and pulled his trousers down. Revealing that Aleksei wore rhino-print boxers.

"THIS IS NOT END, SPIDER!" growled Aleksei as his gun hit him on the head.

Spider-Man heard a voice similar to Edward Elric from Fullmetal Alchemist

"Need some help, Spider-Man?" the voice spoke.

Spider-Man saw a figure who resembled Kaine Parker's Scarlet Spider suit, but with the emblem of Ben Riley's Spider-Man suit, and white eyes on his mask

"You are?" said Spider-Man.

"The name is Scarlet Spider." S.S replied

"Wow...what's up with your suit? Is that a metallic fiber?" said Spider-Man.

"Yes." said S.S "It IS the year 20XX, y'know, with the Humans, Mobians, and Reploids livin' in peace and all."

"And you're..." said Spider-Man.

"A Mobian." said Scarlet Spider "I'm an Echidnahog, half Echidna, and half hedgehog. My dad is Knuckles the Echidna, and my mom is Amy Rose."

Scarlet Spider took his mask off, revealing an 11 year old Mobian with a peach colored muzzle, emerald green eyes, crimson red fur, and shoulder long hair.

"My name's Stanley." said Stanley.

Spider-Man took his mask off, revealing Jacob's face.

"I'm Jacob." said Jacob.

"You go to Yokai Academy, too?" said Stanley.

"Yeah!" said Jacob.

Location: Yokai Academy.

Jacob was studying away, and he saw Stanley, but as a Human.

Stanley's human form looked like Edward Elric with Akita Nero's hairstyle.

Later, Jacob was facing Nekonome.

"Sounds like you've made an admirer." said Nekonome.

"His name is Max, and he works for OsCorp." said Jacob

"Max Dillon?" said Nekonome.

"You know him?" said Jacob

Nekonome nodded

"Poor guy is socially awkward..." said Nekonome "His mother was really protective of him, and got him a job as an electrical worker."

"Wow.." said Jacob.

"Yeah..." said Nekonome.

Location: OsCorp

Max was busy working on some equipment. And he heard Norman's voice over the intercom

="Max, can you work on the bio-electrical filters filters for the genetically modified electric eel tank, please?'=

Max complied, and walked to the room with the genetically modified electric eels, and started working, he then placed his drill on top of a machine, and attempted to dismantle a piece, but his drill fell on the control panel

When Max grabbed the drill, he got shocked with electricity.

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" Screamed Max as he was electrocuted, and the tank then shattered, dousing Max in bio-fluids as he was electrocuted.

Later, Max was rushed to a hospital, his body was continuously emitting a constant discharge of bio-electricity, so he was fitted with an isolation suit.

Max's isolation suit looked like the Amazing Spider-Man 2 Electro suit with an Iron-Man mask with Soundwave's face.

'My life is so over...' Max thought as he sulked

Later, Jacob and Stanley were busy studying away, and they walked off.

Back at Japan, Max ordered a coffee, but when he was about to take a sip with the mouth guard opened, a blue bolt of lightning fired out, and knocked the drink out of Max's hand.

"Aw, man!" groaned Max "I CAN'T EVEN DRINK A LOUSY CUP OF COFFEE...!"

Max's body emitted an immense amount of bio-electricity, shorting out the lights in the cafe.

Max then ran outside, but was pulled upwards.

"Look!" said a man "It's Spider-Man and Scarlet Spider!"

Max looked to see the 2 superheroes.

"What in the!?" said Max.

"Now who are you?" asked S.S as he pulled Max's mask off.

Max was now bald, he was electric blue in color, and he resembled Ultimate Electro from the Ultimate Spider-Man cartoon. He had yellow eyes.

"RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" screamed Max, destroying the giant spider web, and knocking both Spider-Man and Scarlet Spider aside.

"YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE DONE THAT!" said Max.

The crowd ran off.

"You really should not have done that..." Max growled.

"Holy smokes, he's mad..." said S.S

"Oh gee, ya think?" said Spider-Man.

"Look at me..." said Max "I'm a freak! I don't deserve to be called "Max Dillon"...! From this day forward...I AM ELECTRO!"

With that, Electro sent a torrent of electricity towards Scarlet Spider and Spider-Man.

"He's super-mad!" said Spider-Man

"I know that." said Scarlet Spider.

With that, Scarlet Spider and Spider-Man then rushed Electro, and hammered punches on the criminal.

"That tears it..." growled Electro as blue electricity surrounded his hands "THE GLOVES ARE OFF...!"

Electro then supercharged himself, and lunged at both Spider-Man and Scarlet Spider, knocking them aside.

"OOF!" they both grunted.

"We have to find a way to stop him!" said Scarlet Spider.

"How about..." said Spider-Man as he walked towards a fire-truck

"Um, Hello!" said Scarlet Spider "He's not made of fire, he's made of electricity, dude!"

"Chillax!" said Spider-Man as he grabbed the hose

"Oh, I see what you're doing..." said Scarlet Spider

With that, Spider-Man sent a stream of water at Electro

"AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" screamed Electro as he shorted out and went unconcious.

"Nice thinkin', Spidey." said Scarlet Spider.

"Not a problem, partner." said Spider-Man as he and Scarlet Spider fist bumped.

Back at OsCorp, Norman witnessed it all happen.

"All because of some faulty equipment and a tank of genetically modified electric eels..." said Norman.

"What are we gonna do now?" said Otto

"It's time to initiate Project "Sinister Six", where we take some criminals, give them powers or weapons, and form a team to destroy Spider-Man!" said Norman

"Not a bad idea, Sir." said Otto.

Norman smirked.

(Chapter 2 End)

(Ending Song: Spectacular Spider-Man by The Tender Box)

(it shows Spider-Man web swinging from building to building)

(Living on the edge

Fighting crime, spinning webs

Swinging from the highest ledge

He can leap above our heads

(ahhhh, ahhhh)

Villains on the rise and the city's victimized

Looking up with no surprise

Arriving in the speed of time

(ahhhh, ahhhh)

Spectacular, Spectacular Spider-Man

Spectacular, Spectacular Spider-Man

Spectacular, Spectacular Spider-Man

Spectacular!

Spectacular, Spectacular Spider-Man

Spectacular, Spectacular Spider-Man!)

(an instrumental take of "Dearly Departed" plays)

Next time on "Astonishing Spider-Man"

A new villain makes an appearance.

Rhino-"I am The Rhino! I told you I would be back!"

Also, Stanley finds himself developing feelings for Kokoa!

Stanley/Scarlet-Spider-"Kokoa...is so pretty..."

Can Spider-Man and Scarlet Spider stop Rhino?

Find out in Chapter 3: Like A Rhinoceros!

Jacob-"Get caught in the web of the Astonishing Spider-Man!"

Well, that was a blast!

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