A Look Inside pt 1

For here am I sitting in a tin can, floating high above the world…

David Bowie's Space Oddities

I was planning to add this on to the story, but I decided to give its own breathing room.

Well here it goes. It may be a little more serious than its prequel….

Italicized words are song lyrics.

Hey you, out there in the cold
Getting lonely, getting old
Can you feel me?

Lina forced herself to open her eyes again…preparing to see the void again…

But this time, she could see something…a small girl walking farther and farther away from her…



Hey you, standing in the aisles
With itchy feet and fading smiles
Can you feel me?

She tried to catch up to her, trying to figure where was…

But she was too slow, and the child disappeared…only leaving the void behind.

Lina fell back, slowly, trying to get her bearings…

Hey you, dont help them to bury the light
Don't give in without a fight.

Lina heard something behind her, and when she turned, the child was standing behind her…



Hey you, out there on your own
Sitting naked by the phone
Would you touch me?

Lina looked at the child bewildered at where she had come from.

She gasped when she saw the child was a much younger version of herself.

Faltering as she was trying to ask the child "Where is this?"



Hey you, with you ear against the wall
Waiting for someone to call out
Would you touch me?

The child smiled, and then proceeded to walk away…disappearing again…but this time into something…


Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone?
Open your heart, I'm coming home.

…right into Lina…

She took a step back as a shock ran throughout her body….and slowly fell unconscious onto the cold black ground that seemed to have formed…


But it was only fantasy.
The wall was too high,
As you can see.
No matter how he tried,
He could not break free.
And the worms ate into his brain.

Lina woke up sometime later…was it just a dream?

Maybe not, as she seemed to feel out of place here…

But a slow, slow feeling of terror gripped her, but as a cause for it, she could not seem to find one.


Hey you, standing in the road
always doing what you're told,
Can you help me?

Meanwhile at the inn, breakfast had finished, and everyone was packing up for the road.

They had all swore that they were going to find what had happened to Lina at all costs.


Hey you, out there beyond the wall,
Breaking bottles in the hall,
Can you help me?

And Xellos sat listening to Xelas Metallium, as the plans were laid out for the coming attack…


Hey you, don't tell me there's no hope at all
Together we stand, divided we fall.

And Lina shut her eyes again…

Ending notes.

Well I'm making the sequel.

Hope you enjoy it so far.

Its going to be concentrating more on Lina then anyone else.

Thus the title.

The song is "Hey You" by Pink Floyd (Album: "The Wall"; Disc 2; Track 1)

Well excelsior.

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