thank you all who reviewed your so nice just a small note I had lots of sugar today and I watched criminal minds so patty will be very creepy

kid : elizebeth does not own soul eater... thank god

me : jerk ... now ON TO THE STORY !

- thoughts-

CHAPTER 2 MAKAS POV


- why is this happening , whats happening to me HELP MEEEEEEEE!- " LIZ THIS CORSETS TO TIGHT YOUR GONNA KILL ME ! " I YELLED ( YES I TOOK THE SCENE FROM BLACK BUTLER XD ) " oh stop being a baby your not gonna die " liz said as she pulled the corset tighter " now im gonna go get your dress patty if she tries to escape tie her to a chair or something " said Liz to patty as she left the room patty got a murderous grin but me trying to escape didn't notice... worst mistake ever ... " maka lets plaay " said patty putting a cloth to my mouth. I was able to scream before I passed out - $*** -

* kids pov *

I ran up the stairs to pattys room to make sure they didn't kill the pig tailed scythe meister when i ran into liz " WHAT IS GOING ON I HEARD MAKA SCREAM ! " i yelled at liz " I DONT KNOW I JUST LEFT HER WITH PATTY! " liz yelled obviously distressed as we ran to pattys room and opened the door

* regular pov *

/ warning the next scene gave the author nightmares read at your own risk /

on pattys bed was a cloth , next to it were two bottles of chemicals , maka was tied to a chair but she looked ... gone. she had wide eyes that looked like glass. a big fluffy ball gown on her , her hair was curled and she had on light make-up ... patty was in a corner murmering " my doll ... all mine so pretty but no one can have you ... all mine all mine " she said rocking herself and giggling " patty what happened ? " kid asked careful when he approached her " she tried to escape * giggles * now shes my dolly all mine " patty said as liz gave her a sedative shot " shh its ok nap time patty " she said " night night " and with that patty passed out

* in makas mind makas pov *

I was in the death room with everyone ... lord death was rapping , spirit had on a tutu singing holabat girl ( i cant spell ) , stein was spinning in his chair resiteing Shakespeare , soul was a scythe being wielded by liz , black star was a girl , tsubaki was a boy , kid and patty were playing texas hold em i turned into a rainbow potato and rolled out the door laughing like a maniac


/ this story has been paused due to the authors lack of sanity ... kid : give me the monster elizebeth

me : NEVER MY MONSTER SJHVIRTBGUJFGMNTUTRGN...

KID : the author has calmed down ... maka hit her with a book

black star : ON WITH THE FREAKING STORY!/


* REALITY *

" MAKA ?! " kid said shaking me into reality " what where am i ? " i asked confused " hell now put this on " said liz shoving a dress in my arms " why is patty unconscious?"i said pointing to patty curled up in the corner " uhhhhhhhhh " liz and kid sweat dropped " my dolly " patty whispered

well that's chapter 2 review please any ideas for the next chapter please pm me

excaliber : fools my ..

me : NOOOOOOO GET OUT OF HERE !