Making Everything Count: A Divergent Fanfic

So yeh. Here is chapter 2.

DISCLAIMER: I still am not the all powerful and mighty Roth. So therefor I don't own Divergent. I only own the idea for this story. Not the characters.

Chapter 2:
Tris POV

As all of the kids filed out of the bus I was pushed and shoved and then run into by many people trying to get in the doors. I had a bunch of seventh graders and eighth graders staring at me. I mean really? I'm not that great to look at. Trust me I live with myself everyday.
Suddenly my arm is grabbed and being shaken very fast accompanied by Chris's squeals.
"Oh my God. Did you see that guy?"
"What guy?" I ask her.
"That guy over there! The one with the sandy blond hair and gorgeous eyes and is FREAKIN BUILT LIKE A FOOTBALL PLAYER!"
She shouts the last part in my ear.
I turn and look to where her finger is pointing. She is pointing at a group of eighth graders that were all built like football players. Only the one she was pointing at was not the one that caught my eye.
He was very muscular for a fourteen year old. He was wearing a Dauntless black jersey with the number "4" on the back. His dark brown hair almost covered his gorgeous dark blue eyes. Blue eyes that were...that we're staring at me!
This really hot guy was looking at me!
I felt my face burn up and I looked away. No one has ever gotten my attention like that!
Next thing I know I see him whisper something to the guy Chris was squealing about then walk over to us, earning us some dirty looks from the girls around us. They obviously thought this dark haired boy was attractive too.
Now Chris was squeezing my arm in excitement digging her fingernails into my skin.
She quickly lets go and turns around to fix her hair.
"Do I have anything in my teeth?" She asks as she turns to face me. I see she does not have anything in her teeth and turn around just in time to see the boys come up to us.
"Hey! I'm Will and this is my friend Four." The blond guy greets us. "Hey! I'm Chris and this is my best friend Tris!" Chris says twirling her hair obviously trying to flirt with Will. I nod my head and smile. I notice the blue eyed boy named Four looking at me and I blush and look down.
"It was nice meeting you guys. Chris and I need to figure out where our lockers are now. We will se you later. "
I grab Chris's arm and walk away from the boys and walk through the doors of the school. Wow that Four guy was hot. But he's older than me and he probably has a girlfriend.
I quickly try to get him out of my mind. I don't need to be focusing on this boy. I need to be focused on preparing to impress the Dauntless. But I still can't absolutely get his beautiful eyes out of my mind.

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Our school is five stories high and only the disabled and the teachers can ride in the elevator. I don't mind. I've always loved stairs. The Dauntless classes are on the top floor so I have about three flights of steps to walk/run up. I'm just about to sprint up the stairs, but my arm is grabbed by five long fingers. Startled I look back expecting to see someone who wants to drag me away but I'm reassured when I see Chris is the one grabbing my arm.
"Oh my God!" She screeches in my ear.
"What?" I ask even though I already know the answer.
"That Four guy was like totally checking you out!" She yells. Wow. Not what I was expecting. I quickly check around us to make sure no one is looking or listening.
"What do you mean?" I ask her feeling the blush creep into my cheeks.
"Ummm Earth to Tris! He was staring at you the whole time! I guess you just don't realize that not only him but about every other hot guy around us was staring at you too!"
No I actually did not notice that. All I noticed was how beautiful Four was and how his blue eyes seemed to be looking into my soul.
I turn away from her wrench my arm back from her grasp and dart up the stair to the top floor where I would finally be the person I want to be. Not the person that my parent or Caleb want me to be. Finally I won't have to live with hiding under the shadows of Caleb. I will start my own life now and I won't have to live up to Caleb or my fathers expectations. Finally I'm free.