A/N: Wow! I got much more feedback than expected… so I decided to write a sequel-ish thing. Nothing else I really need to say here. Ooh, thought of something. Ahem. Basically, this is a GUIDE. You don't have to follow it by heart or anything. I've read many fanfics that break these rules, but basically, you should try not to break all of them. It's okay if you maybe break one.
More things… grammar misspellings within the fic are for a reason.
That's it!
---Edward POV---
A few weeks after the insane writer left (hereby known as the Incident We Shall Never Speak Of), everything was back to normal. Alice was less hyper, Jasper didn't go emo or anything, Esme stopped getting high, Emmett grew some brains, and Rosalie started acting "normal"… whatever that means.
However, Bella had been acting a little odd lately. She hadn't been suddenly telling me she was pregnant or anything, but it was… weird. She had been disappearing into her room for hours at a time, and I could hear her laughing, or sometimes crying. I worried about her, but she always had some excuse- she got a funny e-mail from Renee, she was reading an article about a cancer victim, she stubbed her toe, whatever.
One particular afternoon, Bella locked me out of her room, claiming she needed "alone time". I was shocked, but spent the day hunting and annoying the rest of my family. When I got back, she was both crying and laughing. I was suspicious, but she waved me off. I slept with her, as usual, but kept wondering what she was keeping from me.
I soon noticed the glowing light on her computer and curiosity got the better of me. I turned the computer on, praying Bella wouldn't wake up. The email icon popped up immediately, flashing a new message. I clicked it, and it said she had a "Fanfiction Alert". Fanfiction… wasn't that where that weird girl said she was writing? I tensed and Bella muttered in her sleep… something about evil toasters of doom.
I clicked the glowing link and it took me to some site that I immediately recognized as the insane girl's page. I saw the story, the one with us in it called "Forbidden Love". I quickly read through it, grimacing.
I prepared to X the page out when I noticed another link… to the girl's other horrible tale, called "Forever Young". I shuddered, but clicked on the link once I saw it was the sequel to "Forbidden Love". It looked like Bella had already visited both. Oh dear.
I started reading the offensive fanfic. Lord save me.
Forever Young
By xoxoxVampireLoveGoddessBellaChickAwesomexoxox
Edward cradled my hand in his as he slipped the ring on my finger. "I'll love you forever," he said softly.
I nodded approvingly. So far, so good.
"Oh, Edward!" I cried taking his hand. The priest cleared his throat. "I mean, I do!"
We kissed and the wedding guests aplauded happilly.
He swept me up in his arms and took me back to his house. He set me down on the couch.
"Change me now," I pleaded when he looked away.
I growled. This Edward had as many problems as I did.
"I'm sorry, Bella, but I can't do that!" he begged, looking deep into my eyes. "I can't take away your life. Even if we are married."
I turned away, sighing. "You don't love me."
"I do!" He kissed me deeply. I broke away first.
"You promised."
"I can't," he pleaded again "And if you keep trying to convince me I'll leave."
"But why?" I cried.
"To keep you safe. I can't do this to you." He disappeared.
"Edward? Edward?" I shouted. But he was gone I fell to the floor.
I could only stare at the computer in shock. What the hell? Why would I leave Bella? What was wrong with this stupid person? Bella shifted in her sleep. I continued reading
---------20 Years Later---------
I stared at my beautiful face in the mirror, with my gorgeous topaz eyes. Topaz? you may ask. That's because I'm a vampire now. I had been for the past 19 years, since Victoria suddenly came back from the dead and changed me. She left me to die in the forest, and that's where Jeremiah and Marie found me. They were know my brothers and sisters. Along with Ally and Robert.
Jeremiah and Ally were a couple, as were Robert and Marie. I felt sad that I lost Edward, but tried to get over it.
What. The. Hell. Bella felt… SAD? SAD? That was it?! What was with all the random characters? I scrolled down.
Jeremiah could control the weather. Ally could change her appearance. Robert could fly. And Marie could read minds, like Edward. We still weren't sure what my power was.
And abruptly, the fanfic chapter ended. All that was left was an Author's Note at the bottom of the page.
A/N: Hey guys! Hope you liked it… Edward leaving her made me cry, but I had to write it! Next chapter Bella turns goth/emo- hehe.
And you'll get to meet Bela's new family YAY! Their powers will come in handy….
Also I'm putting Carlisle with Alice, Emmett with Esme, and Jasper with Rosalie. Sorry if you don't like it, but thye toadally belong together! EEEEEE!
Read and Review!
Oh, I would certainly give her a review. I clicked the review button and typed out an anger rant of the reasons this fic was wrong. A few minutes later I got a reply. It said:
"What the hell? Are you just jealous or what? Everyone else said this fic was awesome. And you're not the grammar police. Who the hell are you to say what Edward or Bella would act like. Hello, it's called CREATIVE license. God!"
I smiled to myself and shut the computer down. I could always read the next chapter tomorrow. Fanfiction felt oddly… addictive.
A/N(real one): Hehe! Done! What you should NOT do in a fanfic.
