Ha ha ha yeah I think everything is going too fast but oh well. I tried to fix it up a bit. Well anyway, I also found out I suck at deciding when a new paragraph should be started in a story. So once again with the weird writing. Sorry. But enjoy~
"La la la!" Janey sang with no particular tune. She was skipping towards the dark castle all by herself through the forest. As she was getting closer she realized the castle wasn't getting bigger, but higher.
"Hn?" Janey said in wonder. She continued through the forest until she found the way out. Once in the open, she saw that the castle was actually a flying castle.
"Woah…" she said in awe. "Flying building! I wants!" Janey started to reach for the castle and jump up and down so she could fly into the castle. She figured since they were in a different place after falling through a well, and survived, she might have flying powers.
"It's not working" Janey said disappointed that she hadn't gained any powers. The girl plopped onto the ground and crossed her arms. Maybe the castle will come down.
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Eric and Ryan were walking in the dark forest, looking for their two friends that had ran into it previously.
"Do you see them?" asked Ryan. He was hardly looking for the girls.
Eric sighed. "No I don't."
"Darn" said Ryan. The two had been looking for the two girls for about an hour now with no luck. Ryan turned his gaze to the left when all of a sudden, a giant, pink, fluffy marshmallow floated by between two trees. As if in a trance, Ryan followed the creature.
Eric, realizing that his friend had gone after what appeared to be a marshmallow monster, called out after him. "Wait! Don't follow it!" Eric grabbed Ryan by the arm. "You don't know what it is!"
As if on cue, the marshmallow turned around and pointed two large guns that formed from its body at Eric and Ryan's faces.
"AHHHHHHHH!" the two boys screamed.
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Janey was still sitting down trying to figure out if there was another way to get into the castle when she heard a scream or two screams at the same time. She smiled in amusement since she recognized that one of the screams was from Ryan. She looked up at the castle and saw what looked like a person jump out and into the forest.
"Woah!" Janey said. She quickly got up and ran into the forest to the direction where the person had jumped to.
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Meghan, lost and scared, had been searching everywhere for her friends. She suddenly heard screaming and ran towards it, realizing that it was coming from Ryan.
As Meghan got closer, she heard a noise from a nearby bush. She stopped and looked to see what it was. It was a pink marshmallow with guns that faced her. She was stunned and didn't know what to do.
"AHHHH!" screamed someone from behind Meghan. She turned around and saw Ryan run into the open they were in. Eric had tripped over a tree rot and grabbed onto Ryan's ankle causing him to lose balance and fall.
"Roar!" cried the pink marshmallow.
"Eek!" cried Meghan, temporarily forgetting about the monster.
"Roa-" the marshmallow began to say again until it got sliced in half to reveal a man wielding a katana.
Nya ha ha!!!~ The meeting begins!!~ Please give me a review thank you
