Thanks so much for the advice puggerorhugger1202 :) (sorry if I spelled your name wrong)

Luke's POV

I wake up and scream. Then I realize it was just a dream.

Jessie: Kids, get up, you don't want to be late for school!

Zuri: I do not get paid enough to wake up at 7:00 a.m.

Jessie: Hey, when I was your age, I —

Emma: Jessie, we do not want to not want to hear more of your childhood stories.

Jessie: Ok, ok. Everyone get dressed and go downstairs for breakfast.

(Downstairs)

Bertram: Here's breakfast.

Ravi: Mmm, Bertram, breakfast is delicious!

Bertram: Thank you, Ravi. At least someone around here appreciates my cooking.

Jessie: Ok guys, eat up so you can go to school.

Me: Pretty soon Jessie sent us all to school.

(at school, still Luke's POV)

Jake: Luke, check out the new girl.

(A girl with brownish-reddish hair walks into the classroom. She is wearing a short sleeve turquoise shirt with a dark blue sweater, aqua jeans that are skinny, but not too tight, and blue converses.)

Jake: Talk about blue.

Me: I know, right? Still a cool outfit, though.

Jake: Yeah.

She sits in the empty seat next to me and introduces herself. She says her name is Kylie.

Kylie: Hey. I'm Kylie.

Me: I'm Luke. Are you new to this area or just this school?

Kylie: To the area.

Me: I can show you around after school, if you want.

Kylie: Sure. Meet in front of the school?

Me: Ok.

I go through all of my classes, and it turns out Kylie has most of the same ones, too.

After school, we meet up in the place we agreed on.

Me: Are you ready?

Kylie: Yeah, let's go.

I show her around most of the places she would go normally, and then we end up at central park.

Kylie: So, what do you do when you're not in school?

Me: Not much, but I like to come here and dance.

Kylie: I dance too. That's my favorite thing to do.

Me: Really? Hmm, let me see what you got.

She starts to dance, and she is a really great dancer.

Me: You're pretty good, but not as good as me, though.

Kylie: Oh really? Prove it.

I start to dance, and when I'm done, I can tell by the look on her face that she's impressed.

Kylie: You are really good.

Me: I know. Hey wanna get ice cream? It's on me.

Kylie: Ok.

We go get ice cream, talk some more, and then she goes home. I go home to take a shower because I practically was sweaty enough to fill a bucket. Then I remember the dream. I get home and see mom and dad.

Christina: Luke! Come give your mom a hug. Oh, you are so sweaty. Go take a shower first. Then come down because we have something to tell you guys.

I take a shower and come down. Everyone is already there.

Emma: Wow, I can't believe I was ready before Luke.

Me: It's because I took a shower

Everyone else: Laughter, lots of laughter.

Christina: We have something to tell you guys—

Me: Wait, am I in trouble?

Morgan: No, no one is in trouble. Now would you please let your mom finish?

Christina: Ok, as I was saying—

Suddenly, I remember the dream. I get up as fast as I can and run to push Jessie out of the way. I look up to see the chandelier already falling, and that is the last thing I remember before everything went black.

Hey guys! Ok, I really want to know if you guys want me to continue the story. If you do, leave a review please.

Puggerorhugger, please let me know if I am making the same mistake.

Advice on if I should do: Me:- or "-," I said, would really help.

Thanks!