Thanks so much for the advice puggerorhugger1202 :) (sorry if I spelled your name wrong)
Luke's POV
I wake up and scream. Then I realize it was just a dream.
Jessie: Kids, get up, you don't want to be late for school!
Zuri: I do not get paid enough to wake up at 7:00 a.m.
Jessie: Hey, when I was your age, I —
Emma: Jessie, we do not want to not want to hear more of your childhood stories.
Jessie: Ok, ok. Everyone get dressed and go downstairs for breakfast.
(Downstairs)
Bertram: Here's breakfast.
Ravi: Mmm, Bertram, breakfast is delicious!
Bertram: Thank you, Ravi. At least someone around here appreciates my cooking.
Jessie: Ok guys, eat up so you can go to school.
Me: Pretty soon Jessie sent us all to school.
(at school, still Luke's POV)
Jake: Luke, check out the new girl.
(A girl with brownish-reddish hair walks into the classroom. She is wearing a short sleeve turquoise shirt with a dark blue sweater, aqua jeans that are skinny, but not too tight, and blue converses.)
Jake: Talk about blue.
Me: I know, right? Still a cool outfit, though.
Jake: Yeah.
She sits in the empty seat next to me and introduces herself. She says her name is Kylie.
Kylie: Hey. I'm Kylie.
Me: I'm Luke. Are you new to this area or just this school?
Kylie: To the area.
Me: I can show you around after school, if you want.
Kylie: Sure. Meet in front of the school?
Me: Ok.
I go through all of my classes, and it turns out Kylie has most of the same ones, too.
After school, we meet up in the place we agreed on.
Me: Are you ready?
Kylie: Yeah, let's go.
I show her around most of the places she would go normally, and then we end up at central park.
Kylie: So, what do you do when you're not in school?
Me: Not much, but I like to come here and dance.
Kylie: I dance too. That's my favorite thing to do.
Me: Really? Hmm, let me see what you got.
She starts to dance, and she is a really great dancer.
Me: You're pretty good, but not as good as me, though.
Kylie: Oh really? Prove it.
I start to dance, and when I'm done, I can tell by the look on her face that she's impressed.
Kylie: You are really good.
Me: I know. Hey wanna get ice cream? It's on me.
Kylie: Ok.
We go get ice cream, talk some more, and then she goes home. I go home to take a shower because I practically was sweaty enough to fill a bucket. Then I remember the dream. I get home and see mom and dad.
Christina: Luke! Come give your mom a hug. Oh, you are so sweaty. Go take a shower first. Then come down because we have something to tell you guys.
I take a shower and come down. Everyone is already there.
Emma: Wow, I can't believe I was ready before Luke.
Me: It's because I took a shower
Everyone else: Laughter, lots of laughter.
Christina: We have something to tell you guys—
Me: Wait, am I in trouble?
Morgan: No, no one is in trouble. Now would you please let your mom finish?
Christina: Ok, as I was saying—
Suddenly, I remember the dream. I get up as fast as I can and run to push Jessie out of the way. I look up to see the chandelier already falling, and that is the last thing I remember before everything went black.
Hey guys! Ok, I really want to know if you guys want me to continue the story. If you do, leave a review please.
Puggerorhugger, please let me know if I am making the same mistake.
Advice on if I should do: Me:- or "-," I said, would really help.
Thanks!
