Me:I promise there'll be more Shuichi in the next chapter! This chapter makes no sense! If I can't think of a midle and ending soon, I might take this dwn!
Tsuki has bad grammar, spelling, spacing, etc, stc.
Flames will be used to light a fire under your rear!
Disclaimer: If I owned either one of these stories, my writing woudn't suck so much!
Nana iro-chapter 2:Orenji
Ayame was awoken by the loud sound of a car parking.
"Ughh...my head hurts"Ayame clutched his head and slowly stood up."What happened?"
He bent down to pick up the broken cup pieces. As he got back up, he turned and faced the mirror and screamed.
"So it wasn't a dream after all...I have to talk to Shigure about this"He gasped. He hadn't called Shigure by his real name since high school.
From the other side of the door, a voice called out"Ayame?"
Uh-oh, it's Hatori! What should I do? Wait, what am I so nervous about? he's my friend.
"Coming!"Ayme slowly walked to door and reluntantly slid it open."Why, hello Hator---Tori-san."
"Aya---Yuki? Is Ayame here?"
"Um...I am Ayame."
"Did you get plastic surgery?"Hatori asked staring at the regressed Ayame.
Despite himself, Ayame blushed and pushed Hatori aside."Um, I have to get to Shigure's house. See you!"Ayame ran as fast as he could, towards Shigure's house.
HE was out of breath when he had reached the front door. He rang the doorbell and to his surprised, Kyo was the one to answer it.He looked pissed, and that wasn't a good sign.
"What do you want damn rat?"He growled, but he had already started walking down the hallway.
"Damn rat? I think you have some really bad eyes---Kyonkitchi."
Kyo suddenly stopped and turned around."Ayame?"
Ayame forced a totally fake smile."The one and only."
"What the hell happened to you? I mean, not that I'm interested or anything, its just that I can't stand seeing two Yuki's. Even if one of them isn't actually him."
"I would like to know myself, instead of turning into the snake, I regressed 10 years. I want to talk to Shigure about it. Do you know where he is?"
Kyo still didn't understand, but he wouldn't understand even if it was explained more clearly."The pervs in his room." He paused before he added"The damn rat's in the garden with Tohru."
"Thanks...do you know when Yuki will be back?"
"Hell no!"
"Well, thanks anyways."
Kyo walked backl to the livingroom."Whatever"
Ayame walked down the hallway and knocked on the screen door of Shigure's room.From the other side, an irritated voice called out"Come in"
Ayame slid open the door and gasped in horror. Shigure's room was full of newspaper, paper knee deep, books were scattered everywhere, and amoungst all the trash, there was Shigure, busily scribbling something on a piece of paper.
"um, Shigure..."
Shigure took one look at Ayame and then started scribbling on the paper again."I see you've gotten younger Aaya."
Ayame sweatdropped. He knew what Shigure was up to. He won't pay attention to you if his rooms a mess, therefore, you'll have to clean it for him.
Manipulator(a)Irresponsible;Shigure(c)Irresponsible(b);therefore (a)(c)
Ayame scurried about the room, picking up papers here, putting back books over there. In less than 5 minutes, the room was clean and normal. Ayame proudly rubbed his hands together and turned to Shigure.
"I have to talk to you about something."
"Ooh, Aaya, is that you? What happened?"
"Thats what I came here to talk about. For some reason, I'm not turning into the Snake. And my thouhgts are altered a little. I regonize all the people, but my mind makes me call you and Hatori by your names, like in high school."Ayame looked pleadingly at Shigure.
"Well, what was your last memory before you changed into your old self?"
"Well, I met this singer, um, named Shindou Shuichi. It was a cold day, and I was afraid I'll turn into the snake in front of him, so I tried to hold it back. By the time I got home, the pain was bearable, actually, it didn't hurt much at all. I felt myself shrink, but only a little. When I opened my eyes, I could still see my hands, so I went over to the mirror. when I looked through, I saw well, me now. And then I fainted."Ayame sounded really worried.
Shigure thought for a moment."Well, theres nothing we can do now. Might as well enjoy it. Did you try hugging Tohru-kun?"
"No...I heard she was in the garden with blasted Yuki."
Shigure looked shocked."Aaya, what did you say?"
"Tohru-kun was in the garden with blasted Yuki?"Ayame started at Shigure sheepishly.
"I thought you wanted to mend the rift between you and Yuki."
"Mend what? I always hated Yuki, you know that Shigure."
Me: This story is going no where! I think I might take it down!
