Disclaimer: I absolutely do not own twilight :[
Hiya!!!! I must say I was overjoyed at the response I got to this story. This is Dedicated to AlexCullen54321 and edwardandbella4evrandevr for your wonderful reviews. you made a happy me there for- I LOVE YOUS!
My friend called me up tonight and she was like wtf did you actually write this?! I was like yeah why? She was like I'm so surprised its amazing! I was like thanks Laura, thanks :D haha just kidding I love my Laura ..
Brining me to my next point- My other story Nothing Without you(which my friend laura said that to) is lacking some serious attention! Share the love people!
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BPOV
The dinner siren rang and we all scurried up to the quad, the big square of grass in the middle of the camp. The boys lined up across from the girls, which gave each gender a great view of the other's attire. I spotted Edward within seconds; his bronze, copper toned hair sticking out everywhere was hard to miss.
He was wearing a black polo with the only three buttons undone and dark khaki shorts, the ones with the big pockets. The big goofball that kissed Rose earlier was standing to his right, he whispered something in Edward's ear, and his whole body shook with quiet laughter. If he laughed out loud, he would be in huge trouble.
It was completely silent except for the camp director, Drew, who was babbling on about curfews for each age group.
"Juniors, ten o'clock. Seniors, eleven. And for the C.I.T's, by 1 am" He continued, "No one is to be out of their bunks after curfew, understood?" he said sternly to the quad full of hungry campers.
"Understood." we echoed back to Drew. He was wearing a white polo with the camp logo buttoned up to the top and faded jeans with white tennis sneakers that were tinted brown with grime from years of use.
"Then let's go eat some tacos, kids!" he yelled and a mob of campers hurried toward the mess hall, to eat food that only tasted good when you're in camp (a/n: like cup of noodles. Lol (Amanda note: I wouldn't use a/ns too much in the middle of the text. But it's not that big of a deal if you keep it in)
At dinner, our bunk's table got up on the chairs and sang a stupid cheer and the whole girls side of the mess hall echoed us. It was so exciting that everyone actually went along with it. Alice lead the cheer, of course, she has such a presence that it's hard to ignore anything she says. After dinner, Alice dragged me back to the bunk to make sure my make up didn't smudge. Rose was already with the goof, who's name I newly learned, was Emmett.
"So are you excited? This is big for my brother, he never asks girls out… he usually waits for them to come to him," she was babbling. "He's only done this once befo-." She quickly covered her mouth with a tiny manicured hand and her eyes were wide with mortification.
"What is it Alice? Or better yet, who was it?!" With a hand still on her mouth she shook her head furiously. Just then, a familiar voice traveled from the bathroom into the main room
"Talking about me, are we ladies?" The clapping of her flip flops against the wood floor alerted me of her entrance. Tanya appeared in the doorway, her curly hair straightened, lips glossed, clad in a hot pink tube top dress. She stuck out her left hip and put a hand on top of it. Her stance oozed sass.
I was speechless; I was frozen in fear. My eyes flashed from Alice to Tanya and back again.
Alice came to my rescue "Oh, get off your high horse Tanya. Just because you dated Edward last summer doesn't mean you own the camp," Alice sneered. So it [Amanda note: clarify what "it" is. It's a little confusing] was Tanya, no wonder she was "all up on him" this afternoon
"Um, actually, Alice" she said her name as if it were the biggest insult a person could receive "I kind of do. Why do you think all of the boys drool over me and everyone wants to be my friend?" she smiled wickedly "By the way Bella" she twisted her smile into an innocent one and then her face was pure bitch. She sneered, "Stay the hell away from my man, skank," and strutted out like she owned the place, which according to her, she did!
I was so shocked I had to write a letter home to relieve myself. I felt a little bad for completely ignoring Alice for the moment but she climbed up onto her top bunk bed I figured she understood. I used one of my fill in the blank letters that take two seconds 'cause I was sure Rose and Angela had started to wonder where we were. (a/n: the italics are what Bella filled in and the bold is the letter guide lines)
DearMom and Dad
Camp is freaky because this girl Tanya freaked out on me for no reason. I hope she doesn't talk to me anymore.
Love,
Bella
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Sorry that was so short kiddies :[ but I'll definitely update soon. I have physical therapy tomorrow night (ew) so bear with me :]. Keep following the rules my fabulous readers :D
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p.s- big thank yous to my wonderful beta and one of my best friends: Amanda!
