kgt97:okay im so sorry for grammer and the plot. if you dont like it dont read it. its moving fast for a reason. this story was planned out i know were its going. no . review please.
Winry:well okay. anyway she owns nothing just the plot the new things and you know the rest.


winry and riza wondered around briggs. man ,not only were their uniforms exsposing more than they were comfortable with. but the perverted guys who havent had a girl scince first grade looked at them.
"so you came." armstrong asked. she too was stuck in the over-exsposing uniform. riza smiled at the woman

"hello ali. shall we go for tea." she said. armstrong nodded and the three girls walked out into the cafiteria.
so what brings frost and you here?" arnstrong asled sipping her spice tea.
"well we need help." riza said sitting her green tea down. her and winry had the same tea.
"oh. with what?" the eldest armstrong sibling asked. winry put on her usual serious face.
"i need help roy's sending me into a mercenary. i am to be gone for a few years. but ill be back.' she said .armstrong sighed.
"That figures common." for the rest of the night the girls prepared winry for what was to come.
_5 years later_
"brother she's gonna kill us!" al yelled running to the run down home of winry rockbell.
"im commin!" the older elric snapped

."why do we have to see her?" ed asked. secretly he was happy to see her. his soon to be wife.
"brother somethings not right.' al said

"what?whats wrong al?' ed asked

"well usually den would have ran up to us by now, pinako would be in an argument with you and winry would be ready to throw her wrench at us then cry." al stated. then the door opened to reveil a frail and sickly loooking pinako,
"oh, so now you visit." she spat" i cant belive she wasted her life waiting on you two." she said walking inside the boys followed

"hey winry can you come fix my automail." ed yelled. there was no answer. the brothers looked at pinako weres winry?" Al asked. ed sat and stared at the woman.
"gone." she said.
"WHAT?! when did she move?" al asked.
"she is dead! dead! in the dirt! gone forever! she never even had the family she wanted!" pinako cried

"how?" ed asked

"she was so worried about you guys she forgot to eat then a train crashed while she was going to central to check for you boys.' pinako said walking up stairs she stopped mid way

"and boys," she called. the two looked at her, tears in their eyes

"its all your faults. I'll never forgive you. you two killed my granddaughter. she was the only reason i didnt kick you out the house. but now dont even utter the name of her in my house." she hissed storming into her room. the two boys sat dumbfound. stricken with guilt.

'she died because of us." ed said.

"we arenhorrible people the minute we got my body and your arm back we left and never wote or called" al said.
that night the two brothers cried, they cried for winry, for pinako,but most of all from the guilt. what they didnt know was that some were winry was fighting a band of robbers.

"riza!" winry yelled shooting the man who almost stabbed riza.

"thanks win." the older blonde said. the two girls ran imto the cave of their 'home' winry sealed the door.

"i wonder if roy knows im dead?" riza asked. winry smiled

"he's most likly locked in his room with hale cring.' she said

"i wonder what the elrics are doing?" riza said

"hopfully crying like babies.' winry spat .

"winry. you hate them now. dont you?" riza asked. winry sat scilently, then she stood

"yes. i do hate them. i hate them for abandoning me. for using me. for lying. and for forgetting about me. but most of all i hate them for what they did to me. for having me waste my life waiting for some ungrateful boy who could care less if i died" she said

"i hope you get ove-" riza stopped as the cave blew up. the girls were burried under rubble.


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