Yeah. 2nd chapter up =D. I'm rewriting Chapter 1 since tons of readers, both here and not here, hated my first chapter since the character's personality (Saber and mostly Tohsaka) was way. way off..
Anyways, enjoy this 2nd chapter. Reviews are appreciated much =D
"..." Speaking
'...' Thought
"..." Flashback Speaking
'...' Flashback Thought
~Shirou~
Morning sunshine peered through the window and flashed across my face, forcing me to wake up. I sat up straight and tried to focus my blurry eyes and wake my still groggy head.
"Hmm... ah, it's morning"
I grabbed the alarm clock beside me and checked the time.
"Damn. It's past 9:00. I guess there's no more need to rush" I said as I tried to sleep yet again. But now i'm fully awake so I stood up and-
"!!"
Nausea swept through me. I fell to my knees and everything went white for an instant. Once I regained my composure, I stood up once again.
"Ugh. What happened... I can't remember anything last night"
I made my way towards the door.
BAM
And ended up tripping forward to the floor, head first. I stood up again, grabbing my hurting nose.
"Ow! What the hell?! What did I tri-"
I looked at my feet and saw a man with green hair, sleeping in front of the door. A wrinkled futon was laying beside mine. It seemed like he wriggled away from the futon and ended up in front of the door. He was covered in bandages and was snoring oudly while laying eagle spread on the door.
"Who is this an? And what happened last ni-"
Pain spreaded through my nerves like electricity, reviving the events happened last night. I felt like vomiting everything in my stomach right then and there.
'That's right. Before we went to the church, this man fell from the sky and we fixed his bloody body. Then we went
to the church and saw Kotomine Kirei. After that...'
I touched my body. I felt something paper-like, so I lifted my shirt to check. My body was covered with bandages.
Suddenly, the contents of my stomach climbed up my throat again as I remembered more. But I swallowed it back.
'I tried to save Saber and my stomach was blown out by that Giant Servant. Berserker... And then...' "SABER!"
I shook my head and lept across the man lying on the floor.
"Saber! Are you here?!"
I ran around the house to check. The Yard, Kitchen, Living room, Bathroom, everywhere. But I couldn't find her.
'Where could she be... Don't tell me... last night she-'
Then I remembered another place. I ran towards that place and stopped immediately right in front of the door. I breathed deeply and, wishing she was there, opened the door to the Dojo. There, my eyes were captivated by a beautiful scene.
There, in the middle of the dojo, was a silent Saber sitting japanese-style. Her silence and tranquility inside the
undisturbed Dojo perfectly Blended together to make quite a scenery. Plus she was in... in... Normal Clothing?
"uhh... um... Saber"
She opens her eyes and looks at me. Urgently she stood up and walked towards me.
"Shirou. Are you alright?"
"Y-yeah, i'm alright now"
"What about your body? Is it alright?"
"Everything's alright, Saber... Actually, everything's not alright. I have something to ask of you"
"What is it Shirou?"
I breathed and "What happened to me last night? I remember having my stomach flying 10 feet away from my body. No way am I supposed to be still alive. What happened?"
"I could answer that"
Another voice came from behind me. I turned and saw Tohsaka leaning on the door.
"Tohsaka... You're alright!" I would've hugged her right now, but I still want to live on till tomorrow so I perfectly restrained myself.
"Yeah. Thanks to you and your brainless head. What were you thinking jumping in right into that fight?! Did you think that you could outmatch a Servant?! And even more, It was BERSERKER!! Even an Idiot could tell from his name that he is strong!!" She screamed furiously.
"But Saber was about to die! You can't expect me to let a girl die right in front of me and do nothing!" I screamed back.
She turned her head away from me "Hmph, still. Even though you used that healing spell on you, you still could've died"
"Healing Spell? What are you talking about?"
"The one that you used to regenerate your body quickly. Even I did not expect that from an unappropriate magi"
"Uhh... Tohsaka? I... do not know any spells. Not even the most basic ones."
She turned her head back to me, face full of questions "What do you mean? Didn't you use some kind of Self-activating Regenerating spell? You were unconscious and we had to bandage your body when Saber noticed something strange. Your body was recovering. A few minutes later, your body went back to normal, like nothing happened. So we carried you back here"
"I don't know how that happened since I only know one magic"
"What's that?"
"Strengthening Magic"
"I see... You are really an idiot Shirou"
"Eh? What?"
Saber suddenly interrupted "Archer's Master is right, Shirou. Revealing information to an opponent was a very stupid and irrational move". Saber actually sounded kinda ticked off.
"Well. We could discuss this after we eat some food. Shirou, you cook something for us"
"Eh? Why should I make food for you?"
"Because of 3 reasons" She said
"One. I brought you safely back here.
Two. I don't like owing people debts. You revealed an information to me, so revealing an information to you will repay the debt.
And Three. Currently this is your house. Isn't it natural to offer your Guests some food?" She said that last remark with a smirk.
"...fine. Let's all go to the Kitchen then" I said As I led them out of the Dojo and closed the door behind me.
"Guh! What the hell, they all forgot about Zoro!"
I bet that's what's goin on in your mind right now. Well, the next chapter is going to be Zoro's so hna gon tight people!
Oh. And reviews are much, much Appreciated
