If I owned Naruto, I would seriously not give ninjas such bright coloured outfits, Naruto orange, Sakura pink I mean they can be so easily spotted wearing that. Oh and I would give Itachi a moustache and a monocle like in Naruto abridged, which I don't own.
Chapter 2
Kakashi landed at the sight of Sasuke and Naruto's battle at the valley of the end. Naruto's body lay badly damaged, most likely no chance of picking it up with out damaging it. Kakashi's shoulders slumped, he had failed his sensei's wishes, protect Naruto and get everyone to see him as a hero… Naruto, the hyperactive knuckle head, he kept all his promises no matter what, and this one had cost him his life. Kakashi would send an eagle a head to tell them about his findings at the sight, hopefully lady Hokage would send someone that could preserves Naruto's body. Kakashi picked up the unconscious Uchiha, turned around glancing back at Narutos body, thinking about how much he hated to just leave him there. With that he leapt away.
1 day later
A fox stumbled to its feet, obviously still half asleep; it took in its surroundings, for any existing threat. It froze as It's eyes caught sight of a blob of sunshine yellow on the floor, it cautiously walked up to it, when it was within sight range, it turned round and ran like the hunt was on its tail. It ran as fast as its four legs could carry it. Its eyes wide with fear, adrenalin, rushing through its veins, pumping it to max speed in its blind run, it ran headlong into a tree. The fox spent a while staring dazed at the sky, it clambered back to all four paw, and seemed to be fully awake now, as it was staring at its paws in clear shock its thoughts were WHAT THE HELL? WHY DO I HAVE PAWS? Or something like that. Oh I bet this is his idea of a joke or some thing, next time I see him, he's going to get neutered! Was the fox's menacing thoughts as it stalked towards a river in hopes the rushing water would help to clear its thoughts.
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The fox plopped itself down on the bank to the river, its eyes followed a herring, that was darting through the water obviously trying to escape being hunted, the fox watched as it swam away, before glancing to the sky almost night the fox thought, its stomach made a peculiar noise, signalling it was empty and it was a good idea to eat. The fox spotted a rather large school of fish swimming down towards it perfect the fox poised into a perfect diving position, when the group of fish came into reach, it dove slashing and biting, taking out 3 fish, which it quickly collected in its jaw and swam back to shore, the fox sneezed as it climbed out of the icy water, dropping the dazed fish onto dry land.
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The fox stared down to were his paws should be, but let out a whoop of joy as he saw hands, he moved his hands to his head, making sure he was fully human now, but froze as his hands came in contact with his ears, to be more specific, his fox ears. Well crud now I'll be even more hated in the leaf He dove over to the river to check his reflection, in case it had changed anything else, he looked normal except for the ears, he had his blonde, spiky hair, his bright blue eyes, even all 6 whisker like birth marks on his cheeks. He caught sight of movement behind him; he quickly turned round to see nothing, except a fox tail oh joy now I have a matching set, of tail and ears he thought dryly. It was definitely a 'him'. As, well…you see, he was wearing nothing at all. He soon realised this fact and dove to his feet looking for clothes, or a way to turn back to fox form, his wish was granted as he shrunk and grew fur. Now it was time to steal clothes for himself. He started the walk to the area from before after eating the fish, raw may I add, and taking the kunai pouch of his…old….body.
Hey people, hope you enjoyed it 'cuz this is actually a rewrite of this story, I wasn't too keen on my first attempt as it seemed gay
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