Okay I'm very excited from the reviews. This is my second poem and I got positive feedback from my first, so here goes nothing….. I will update one poem at a time.
It's hard to love someone who doesn't know you are alive.
It's hard to know that in his eyes you are just another friend, even though for you that is just another lie.
You night as well be invisible for he will never see anything past those lines.
It's hard to think for me he is not just another guy.
It's hard when I look at him and all he does is smile.
He asks, "Why are you looking at me like that?"
It hurts to say no reason at all.
It's hard to realize he is with another girl.
It's hard that at this moment he's sitting right next to me and doesn't have a clue of how I feel.
If only he had a sense of how I feel when I look at him.
When he says my name I feel I am going to melt.
Now as I see him approaching, I realize he will never see how I feel.
Tell me what you think. Everyone's opinion matters. Please review so I can update another tomorrow.
