Dear LoveDeathTheKid,
I may not finish writing the story...but I will post a few more chapters. And, I don't mind otaku's.
Thanks for the review.

Chapter2 Falling Inside the Black

Naito had been at the academy for two weeks, and the hosts were becoming curious about her connection with Kyoya. They almost always seemed to be having an argument. The twins got really curious one day and pulled Haruhi along as they went to ask, figuring she would be able to help. They went to Naito, thinking she wouldn't try to kill them for asking.
They found Naito sitting on a bench in the rose garden, reading a book, and listening to music.
"Why do I have to come again?" Haruhi asked once again.
"We want a witness in case she tries to kill us," Kaoru said.
"And we doubt that she would kill you," Hikaru said, smiling at her.
Haruhi rolled her eyes. "Whatever."
They approached Naito from behind and were about to talk when Naito spoke.
"Idiot 1 and 2, take five steps back. Haruhi, come on over," Naito didn't even look at them when she said that.
The twins looked at each other and took five steps back and gestured for Haruhi to move foreward. Haruhi walked around the bench and sat next to Naito. "What are you reading?" Haruhi asked.
"Dracula by Bram Stoker." She shut her book and looked at Haruhi. "What can I help you with, Haruhi?"
"Well, Hikaru and Kaoru were wondering why you're around Kyoya-sempai so much."
"You're wondering too?"
"A little..."
Naito nodded. "He's my brother."
"I never knew he had a sister."
"There's a reason why I'm specifically not mentioned." Naito sighed. "I'm an illegitimate child."
Haruhi looked surprised.
Naito nodded. "Can you do me a favor?"
"What?"
"Don't tell the twins. I don't really want them to know. I don't want anyone to know, but, even though I don't really know you, I feel like I can trust you."
Haruhi nodded. "Alright."
Naito opened her book once more and Haruhi got up and walked over to the twins.
"What'd she say?" They immediatly demanded.
Haruhi shrugged and walked past them.
The boys gaped at Haruhi then at each other.

Naito laid her head on her arms and closed her eyes while the teacher kept going on and on about things she didn't really care about. She soon fell into the word of her dreams.

Naito was flying through the sky, the clouds were black and white, as usual in her dreams. She drifted through the clouds with her eyes closed, enjoying the feeling of flying, she had missed it for so long. She smiled happily.
Then, suddenly, she was falling, facing at the sky she was falling from, her hands clutched to her chest, as if to pray. She was falling into the black vastness that was beneath her. The clouds parted into cracks that she fell through. Her tears would leave her eyes and just seem to stay there, suspended in the air. Naito opened her mouth and scream for all she was worth.
Can you hear me! Rang through her head as she was falling inside the black that swallowed her up.

Naito woke with a slight start, her eyes flying open as she sucked in a quiet gasp. The bell rang, making her jump even more. She heard snickers from her left and she looked to the source. The red-headed twins. Their laughing inflamed Naito and she was about ready to get up and punch them, but, instead, she stood abruptly, quickly gathered her things, and left the room.

Hikaru and Kaoru raised their brows as Naito swept out of the room.
"Was it something we did?" Kaoru asked sarcastically.
Haruhi rolled her eyes and got up. "You guys shouldn't try treating her like a toy."
"And why not?" Hikaru asked.
"Because she doesn't need you to treat her like that. She's probably already gone through so much of it already." Haruhi turned and walked out of the room, the twins in hot pursuit.
"And how do you know this? She barely talks to anyone," Kaoru pointed out.
"I can just tell."
Hikaru scoffed. "As if that tells anyone a lot."
The group stopped, spotting Naito and Kyoya at the end of the hall, arguing.
"I don't care what he says, Kyoya! He can't control me!" Naito yelled.
"Until you learn to follow orders, you'll never accomplish anything!" Kyoya hissed.
"Are you saying I've yet to accomplish anything yet!"
"Yes!"
"Well, if that's, then how the hell am I here!"
"What do you mean?"
"I wouldn't be here if I had broken my mother's rule of not finding my own father! My family I never knew I had! If I had listened, I would probably be in Germany, France, Spain, Finland, Sweden, or the UK! I don't know where I'd be had I not broken the rules! So, telling me breaking the rules won't get me anyhere, is pointless!"
"Ch-"
"That's not my name!" She turned away from Kyoya and sprinted down the hall and right past Hikaru, Kaoru, and Haruhi.
"Whoa..." Hikaru muttered.
Kaoru nodded.
"Told you she didn't need teasing," Haruhi muttered and walked on.
The twins followed her as they headed to the Host Club. They got inside and Kyoya called for a meeting. Everyone gathered around the Shadow King.
"As you all know, there is a girl that has been her for about two week and has come here a few times." Everyone nodded at this. "I want to put your skills to a test."
"What sort of test?" Haruhi asked skeptically.
"I want to see who can catch her fancy," he seemed to sum up all of the hosts.
"That should be easy," Hikaru said pompously.
"Not as easy as you would think." Kyoya's eyes flashed.
"Why not?" Hunny asked.
"Naito is...untrusting. She has a lock on her heart and she has her preferences, her own ideas for a guy and high standards. She isn't as easy as she appears."
"Then how are we supposed to win her fancy?" Kaoru asked.
"Easy," Haruhi said. "It's a little thing called trying to get to know someone."
"And if someone wins her fancy?" Tamaki asked.
"That will be their own reward in a way." Kyoya smiled ominously.