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Chapter One: Dreams and Surprises
He walked through the stables, searching. Not quite sure what he was looking for, so he kept walking on.
He saw a lone lean figure leaning on a stall door, waiting. She sauntered over to Numair and wrapped her arms around him, just before she firmly placed her lips on his. He responded like he knew what was going on, like this was an ordinary thing. He stroked her soft brown curls, before he straightened from his kiss.
Suddenly he realized what he was doing. Those curls, that figure. It was Daine! He knew it was wrong but he couldn't help but lower his head to kiss her back. Before he knew it Daine was pulling him up into the loft on the stable.
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Numair Salamin woke up abruptly, sweating. Swearing as he saw what time it was, he slowly got out of bed.
'Oh god not another one,' Numair thought as he recalled the dream. For some strange reason he's been having them for the past few weeks. Not that he minded, they were quite. "lovely" it was just that it was Daine! His student, his friend!
"I need to talk to her," Numair said to himself while finishing his last preparations of getting ready.
Leaving his suite and heading towards Daine's room, Numair's hope began to grow. 'What is she feels the same was as I do?' he thought silently, 'What if she's struggling at this very moment.'
Turning the last corner, Numair thought, 'What if.'
His thoughts were interrupted though at the sight before him. There was Daine right outside her door where anyone could see her kissing someone else! Too shocked to do anything but run, Numair swiftly rushed away, but before the couple was out of site Numair glanced back to see who Daine's courter was.
Perin.
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You like it? Please give me you opinions! Thanks so much!!!!!!!!!!!!
Chapter One: Dreams and Surprises
He walked through the stables, searching. Not quite sure what he was looking for, so he kept walking on.
He saw a lone lean figure leaning on a stall door, waiting. She sauntered over to Numair and wrapped her arms around him, just before she firmly placed her lips on his. He responded like he knew what was going on, like this was an ordinary thing. He stroked her soft brown curls, before he straightened from his kiss.
Suddenly he realized what he was doing. Those curls, that figure. It was Daine! He knew it was wrong but he couldn't help but lower his head to kiss her back. Before he knew it Daine was pulling him up into the loft on the stable.
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Numair Salamin woke up abruptly, sweating. Swearing as he saw what time it was, he slowly got out of bed.
'Oh god not another one,' Numair thought as he recalled the dream. For some strange reason he's been having them for the past few weeks. Not that he minded, they were quite. "lovely" it was just that it was Daine! His student, his friend!
"I need to talk to her," Numair said to himself while finishing his last preparations of getting ready.
Leaving his suite and heading towards Daine's room, Numair's hope began to grow. 'What is she feels the same was as I do?' he thought silently, 'What if she's struggling at this very moment.'
Turning the last corner, Numair thought, 'What if.'
His thoughts were interrupted though at the sight before him. There was Daine right outside her door where anyone could see her kissing someone else! Too shocked to do anything but run, Numair swiftly rushed away, but before the couple was out of site Numair glanced back to see who Daine's courter was.
Perin.
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You like it? Please give me you opinions! Thanks so much!!!!!!!!!!!!
