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Tris's POV
Its the day after intitation. I'm dorming with Christina, they need more people, because all the guard positions are full. I'm going to pick my job. I'm going to pick ambassador. It sounds intresting. I might get to see my dad. Oh wait. I'll see him again, if he comes. There's another visiting day. I'm excited and I'll get to show them Tobias. I feel the girl Christina put in me and shut her up. I visit Tobias' room before I go. I walk in and see him laying on the bed. I find a peice of paper, and a pen and write, I'll be gone all day, sorry you didn't see me. -XOXO Tris
I get up and leave to take my place as ambassador.
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Four's POV
I wake up and see the note on my fridge. She's so sweet. I'm probably not going to see her all day. I sigh. I already miss her. The girl I love, is gone for the day. Maybe I'll talk to Zeke that sounds like fun, guys night out. Maybe I can convince him to ask out Shauna. Haha and Lauren will be alone. I shave and is about to walk out the door, when she walks in. Fran. The girl I told Tris I don't know her, but I do. She was one of my friends from childhood. She has always liked me. I never liked her, but everytime I have to shoot her, I know she's not shooting at me because she loves me, and I shoot her anyways, because I have too. And I never liked her. "Oh Tobias you've grown." she said looking me from head to toe. She transferred to Candor. "I haven't seen you in a while. We should catch up." I nod. I have nothing better to do all day. We go the cafeteria and I sit with my friends. They eye me suspicously. I look at Shauna for help, but she just glares at me. Why is everyone mad at me? I look at her, and I don't see the girl I saw 10 years ago. She has curves, and straight brown hair, and her eyes are so dark brown they're borderline black. She sits a little too close to me and I scoot closer to Zeke.
"This is Fran. She's known me since I was little." I say boredy. "She came to visit me for the day."
"I actually can stay as much as I want." she says while eyeing me suspicously.
"Well, hello Fran my man. Hey Four, where's Tris?" I'm glad he brought that up.
"Oh, Tris, my girlfriend," emphasis on the word girlfriend "is taking her job as ambassador. So she'll be training all day." everyone caught my drift except her, so we keep taking a step farther everytime.
"Oh, I'm sorry Four, that the girl you love, is out today." says Shauna looking at Fran. Fran would get murdered at Erudite. She has no common sense, at all.
"Um, Four, you never told me about Tris" she says while bashing her eyelashes.
"Well, I have known you forever. It's not like you're going to pull a move on me." I say. And everyone almsot laughs, because they can feel my hatred for this girl.
Me Fran and Zeke explore the place all day. Zeke finally has to leave and so I'm about to say "ok, til next time Fran." When she does exactly what everyone thought. She wraps her arms around me and kisses me. And when I say kiss, I mean she throws her tongue, down my throat. And I almost throw up, when I see her.
Tris's POV
I was on my way back from the ambassador training day thing, when I see a couple locking lips. I think of me and Tobias, and feel the need to run, to him and kiss him like this girl. But I stop dead in my tracks. His arms are glued to the side and his lips are connected with her, and his dark blue eyes, are looking straight at me. I can't help but scream at the top of my lungs. She breaks the kiss, and I get a good look at her. She's got a top to show off her big boobs and a lowcut skirt. She's wearing white and black. A candor. I scream til my throat gives out. He pulls away and starts to run towards me. I get off my knees and run straight to my dorm. He's normally faster then me, but I bet I'm 6 times faster, when your boyfriends cheated on you. I reach my room and lock the door. Christina is sitting on her bed next to Will. She's sees me covered in tears and leaves Will's side. He immeaditly gets up to help too.
"What's wrong Tris?" what is wrong Tris? I ask myself. Was it the fact that your boyfriend was locked up lips to another girl, or was that you trusted that that, but I can't describe it. Cheater, but those words are to soft and to harsh at the same time.
"He cheated on me. He..." I said with a squek "you were right." they tears fall down my cheeks. I curl into a ball while she embraces me. I cry for a coupe hours. Will sits ther and tries to help, but he's not really good at it. He knows almost everything being from Erudite, except how to help a girl when her boyfriend's cheated on her. They prbably didn't write books about it because there knew an Erudite girl wouldn't be so stupid. As, stupid as I am, as I was. I should have been smart like Christina, and dated a shy, quiet boy, a boy thats not a prodigy, thats not out of my league. I should have gone for a guy like Will. He's a true boyfriend.
I hear a knock on the door. "Tris, I need to talk to you." says a quiet voice, that sounds like he's crying too.
"Really? Are you sure you don't want to talk to your Candor girlfriend? She's a lot better then me, the girl, that you were going to use later." I say spitting it through my teeth.
"Tris... I promise I" he starts to say.
"You promise that I'm in a simulation right now? Because that's the only way, I'll ever want to see your kicked puppy face again." I yell at the door.
"Tris..." he says I can actually hear him sobbing.
"Just leave, Tobias..." I say quietly. I'm done. I'm done with the boy full of lies.
"Tris... I'm sorry... I'm going to leave I just need to say I love you. I'm sorry." he says as his footsteps and sobs echo. Christina never lets go. I finally stop. I don't need him. I'm selfish. I'm brave. I'm Dauntless.
"I think I' done." I say to Christina. She nods and opens the door for Will. He walks out and waves goodbye to me. I wave one back, and climb to bed. Great first day on the job Tris.
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I awake and think to myself. I get to see Tobias today. And I remeber last night. The worst night of my life. I get up and walk side by side with Christina. I need to eat. We sit at our normal table. Uriah takes a bite of his muffin and says "the guys next to my dorm is so loud. He was crying the entire night." he says while he picks up his head and looks at me. "Holy pansy cake, Tris what happened to you?"
I slam my head on the table and Christina says "I was right about Four. He cheated on her." Uriah just sits there shocked and frozen. And I turn to see Tobias at the corner of my eye. He stare never leaves me, but I need to look back just once. I look back at him and see his face is splotchy and his eyes are red with tears. His eyes look deep into mine, and I'm about to cry when Uriah moves my face gently to look at Lynn, who is attempting to lick her elbow. Lynn is so pretty. If she grew her hair out she'd be beautiful. I envy her. I bet no guy, ever, would want to cheat on her.
"Hey stiff, you came in first yesterday, you shouldn't be crying about a dick face. Seriously, I lost to you, don't cry about your boy problems. It makes me and everyone else look weak." she said.
"Lynn! Don't think selfishly!" Marlene yells. But I'm glad she did it. I came in first, I should act like it.
"Thanks Lynn, I just needed a slap on the face" everyone looks from me to her, trying to find out if I was being sarcastic. Which I was not. And Lynn looks at Marlene like 'yeah she thanked me'. When I get babbied, it makes me feel worse. When someone tells me to move on, I will, and I'm done. The room fall silent and I look towards the floor. Eric walks in, with short hair, and his peircings are all removed. The weirdest part is, he almost looks, attractive almost. But I turn back to my friends. Why would he take everything off? He has black hair, and almost white green eyes. Its scary. He walks to his normal table, and sits down. And I look for Tobias, again. Its a bad habit. I need to get rid of him, like out of my mind. But this place IS him. He taugtht me everything I knew here. And he's a prodigy and I'll never be able to look at numbers again. Ever.
"What a change of events" says Marlene, who smiles a little to flirtatiously at Uriah.
"Yeah." says Uriah looking at her.
Christina scoots next to me and whispers "Peter likes you." My head is spinning. "Yeah. Everyone one of the transfers, know. Its not really a secret, anymore."
"Are you sure Christina?" I'm not so sure. He almost killed me, and I do not need any more boy drama for... the rest of my life. I mean, he killed me. He's my worst fear in a single person, besides Jeanine.
"I'm serious. He almost started crying yesterday. He envies... he used to envy Four. Now I'm sure, you don't want to see another boy for a month, but it might help, if you date him, then dump his sorry ass. You could also make Four feel jealous." She says looking out. The only feelings I felt yesterday was jealousy, and regret. Maybe it's time for some payback. Give Tobias payback? My mind hurts when he says its name. But it's true. I might never, ever want see him again, but it takes a lot. You want him back. whispers a voice in my head. I'm about to punch myself, when I realize the whole table is staring at me.
"Hey, can I talk to you in private?" asks the quiet Shauna, who is the opposite of her sister. I nod and follow her out of the cafeteria. "Ok, Tris, Tris, Tris. Where should I start? Do you want to know who this girl is? Or do you wan to know what happened?" how does she know anything? How can I trust her? But what do I have to lose?
"What happened?" I say quietly.
"Well, it statred when we were at lunch. He ran to us, with her on his back, not literally, but, I'll just lead into her. She's a Candor he grew up with. She's liked him, since they were little, and he never had feelings for her. Well, if you saw her, it would take every ounce of love to stop them. But he, had no problem hating her. We all made sure to mention his love for you" he loves me? I didn't believe him yesterday, but hearing it from someone else is diffrent. "and so him and Zeke showed her around, and thats probably when you showed up. He wouldn't have done that on purpose to you. He loves you." she says. I feel like I believe her. You need to beleive her. But something keeps holding me back.
"Shauna, thanks, I believe you and everything, it's just, I need to hear it from him."
She smiles and understandingly nods "I totally understand that. Oh and I need to tell you, one more thing." she leans in to my ears and says "Eric, um, loves you." I laugh. I laugh so loud that I startled her. I laugh so loud it almost hurts. She gives me a weird look and says "I'm not lying". She HAS to be. Eric? Pl-ease. He doesn't have a heart, if he tried to find one. He doesn't love me. "Atleast, thats what he told Four." I stop being so immature, and look at her scared. Ew. Is all I can say. I wouldn't believe it, if he told anyone else besides Tobias. What a list. Peter, who tried to kill me, Tobias, who killed my heart, and Eric, who will kill me if he finds out I'm divergent.
Christina's POV
Tris walks back, a little paler then before. She sits down next to me and sits there straight with her hand holding her chin up. She's thinking really hard. She always does this when she's thinking. Shauna keeps giving Tris supportive looks. Its not good. And I need to know. NOW. Shit. She has to work today. All the other faction ambassadors is coming today. Seriously I need to talk to her now. It's a best friends job. 1. Make fun of the person. them cry on your shoulder know everything they know. "Tris, tell me." she looks at me and shakes her head. What has the ass done to her now? "Tris. NOW"
"Ok, its um," she whispers into my ear "Eric loves me." I'm about to laugh, but I realize how depressed this girl is. And I decide not to bother her anymore and look for the three muskateers. Four left. Peters at the table next to ours, looking hot. With anger. And I spot Eric, a couble tables away, with all his peircings gone, and his hair short. Like Abnergation style is buzz, his hair looks almost albergnation style. And he looks, hot. Like almost hotter then Four. Man. If I had to pick 3 guys that liked me, it would be, Eric, Four, and Will. I'd pick Will duh. Probably. I smile at Will across the table. I'm glad I'm not a Candor anymore. I'm also happy the Erudite, don't have mind readinf things. I would be in a pretty bad spot. Poor Tris.
Four's POV
I walked into the control room. I wish I could go back to my apartment, and cry. But I'm all cried out. I walk into the control room and say 'hello' to Mark. Mark is the other guy working here. "What brings you down? Four the clown?" he says. He prefers to rhyme.
"Everything." I say quietly.
"Did you hear about that abnegation girl? That came in first? Tree, or something?" he tries when he can.
"Tris." I say a little to sternly. Tris. Her name rings in my ears. Her blonde hair in curls. Her bright blue eyes. And I can't hold back. "Tris. Girl from abnergation. She came in first. I love her. And another girl kissed me. And, I... I just want her back. That's all I want. That's all I've ever wanted." I almost start crying again. I curl up in a ball. I've never been such a mess. I love her I truly do.
"Well get her back." the wisest words ever said. I stand up.
"Thanks." I say as I get up and get my girl.
Marks POV
I stand up and clap when he walks away and gets back to work.
Fran's POV
I get out of my car, and is going to walk in, with pride. I finally kissed Toby. My true love. One day, he'll admit his love for me. I have a sudden flashback. I remember him sitting by himself when were in 9. I walked over to him, and asked him how he was. He's always been hot. And he replied 'ok'. And thats all it took to steal my heart. And I knew then as I know now, Tobias Eaton will be mine. The reason I was great at Candor, was that my deepest secret was always loving him. And I'm not emberaced to say it. I walk in, and go the room, where the ambassadors meet. I'm going to visit him after this. Hopefully we'll have a great reunion.
Tris's POV
Ok. First day on the job. You can do this. You have no boy problems. I walk into the room and see a couple amity, erudite, some abnergation, which none I recognize, some other anynomous dauntless, and a few candor. And the man who trained me yesterday, Kurt.
"Welcome. Everyone. This is Tris, our new ambassador." I wave and take my spot. Everyone tallks about how many nuts amity collected, whats the average score for Erudite, how many people died in Dauntless, and other boring things the candor and abnergation do. It's almost over when Kurt asks "so how does everyone like the dauntless head quarters?"
A candor speaks up. She's wearing a tight white and black dress, and her hair is perfectly straight, like the truth. "It's beautiful here. I also like this boy, here. You have very attractive people here." and I don't know why I didn't recognize her before. I get up and lunge at her. I scratch her face, knowing I'll leave personal damadge, and start punching her. I kick her stomach until I get hauled away, by none other then him, himself. I try to fight it, but I'm held off the ground, I try and brake free like a rabbid animal, but with no sucess. "Tris, I" he starts to say, but I cut it off.
"It's ok. We won't ever have to talk, again, I promise. But seriously, I don't know you. Normally parents would say don't talk to strangers. But I'm an abergantion transfer, so I'm forced to say how are you?" I say trying to catch my breath.
"I'm honestly, horryfing. I cry at random moments, or when someone says your name, or feel any sort of happiness. So I'm a mess. But I'm an abernation transfer so I'm forced to say and you?" he says almost crying again.
I would hate to be Candor. I'd live factionless the rest of my life, when I say "I'm actually, better then ever. I've cooled down, can I go home?".
He puts me down gently. "Yes." and stands there across from me. He stares at me with his dark blue eyes. My stomach twists and turns to hold him, and kiss him again. I will forgive. But that won't be today. This the closest we've been for two days. I start to walk back to my room, when I hear "Tris...". I look back at him, and wait for him. Its so hard. To hold myself back, from throwing my arms around his neck. And we did exactly as we did, for the simulation. The one a lifetime ago. The time I couldn't stop thinking how great he is. But now, I'm trying to find something bad about him. What's he thinking about? We store at each other for way too long. I walk away.
I'm halfway to my room when I hear, Christina say "Tris. Come on. We're going to lose ourselves.". At first I wonder how, but then I realize, I don't care. Anything, to get him off my mind.
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