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Dad tried to lecture me once I got into the car about running away during dinner, I guess. I didn't really pay attenion. I was looking on instagram and I was texting, playing Candy Crush, anything to distract me from listening to him. I hate my dad right now, he didn't have to say those nasty things about me, and it's his freaking fault I ran out of there! I may love him, but I don't think I can forgive and forget right now.
Dad finally pulls into the driveway and I am almost running inside, I get inside and skip p the stairs two at a time. I slam my door loudly. I peel my dress off and grab a towel and wrap it around myself. I go into the bathroom that is connected to my room. I slide the towel off and hop into a steaming shower, I let the hot water relax the muscles in my back, I instantly relax, I no longer feel angry and I suddenly feel better. I let myself think about tonight not the part where my dad and Marcus were being mean to me, I think about how I hang out with Four. And why does he get called Four? I mean I know his real name, Tobias, what's wrong with it. I actually really like it. We really get along I hope my parents and Marcus stay friends so Tobias and I can hang out more often, because that was really fun, and e likes the same music as me. That's a giagantic plus for me, nobody else likes country around here, it's all wrap an pop. I mean yes, I like some pop, but not all of it.
I get out of the shower and go into my room and get dressed, I put on a pair of underwear from pink, a pair of purple spandex, and a black sports bra. I twist the towel on top of my hair so it will help dry my hair. I look at my phone and I see that I have a new text from Christina on my phone.
Hey, what's up with the picture of Four on IG? ~Christina
I quickly text her back quickly.
We were at dinner together...and yeah..~ Tris
She texts me back after a minute or so.
Dinner!? Why were you at dinner with him? Are you dating him!?~Christina.
I am shocked by what she says.
NO! Our parents were out to dinner together!~Tris
She texts back quick! Gosh it was like 20 seconds.
Do you like him ;)~Christina
I don't really know how to respond to that, but I will otherwise she's going to think that I do.
I mean idk really. He's nice and sweet and a good friend and I mean boy he is cute!~Tris
Do you think about him when he isn't around, and when your around him are you all nervous?~Christina
Yeah...~Tris
YOU SOOO LIKE HIM~Christina
Yeah...I gues, I mean yeah I do...~Tris
OMG, yay!~Christina
well I gtg, bye Christina!~Tris
Christina is insane? Why is she so excited? I mean I just like someone why is that a big deal. Well...yeah it is because I haven't liked someone since Robert cheated on me and then dumped me, he didn't like that I wouldn't kiss him. I think we are just a bit young for that, I mean unless you really love someone then it's okay, but otherwise no I can't. I just can't. I think it's gross. I keep going back in forth with Four, I mean can I trust him? Am I good enough for him? Is he going to cheat on me like Robert? Ugh this is so confusing I think I just need to sleep it off.
I brush my hair and climb into my bed, I put my headphones in, I put on Radioactive by Imagine Dragons, I don't know what it is about the song it just helps me fall asleep. I listen to it for a few times, and then I don't remember anything.
LINE BREAK
I wake up and brush my hair out. It doesn't look to good so I throw it up in a high pony. I pack up a bag for my gym clothes I put in a pair of athletic shorts and a t-shirt, at last thought I throw in my running shoes a pair of socks and a sports bra. I put on a pink bandeu (Idk how to spell that, lol) and a black tanktop, that's fairly open in the back, and I put on a pair of green short shorts. I make my eyes look smoky with some darker colors and I ad some red lipstick to the look and I actually look really good. Why'd I try so much today? Not like I would make an impression on him anyway.
Caleb and I hop onto the bus and he sits with one of his Erudite friends, so I end up sitting alone. After a stop or two a boy who looks Dauntless gets on the bus. He sits right next to me, "Hey dollface, I'm Peter, and may I ask what your name is?"
"Can you just leave me alone please." I say quietly and politely.
"Oh baby, you don't want to leave me alone." he gets closer to me. rubbing his arm against me.
"Get off of me!" I try to shove him off, and he laughs evily.
Oooh! What's gonna happen with Peter? What's he gonna do to Tris? What's Tris gonna do? Hehehe I know ;)
Tease for next time: The rest of the bus ride. Tris gets her classes! Tris and Four see each other again! Eeeep!
I know that Tris doesn't like kissing unless your totally in love, I say that because there are litterally 8th graders that make out! One of them is one of my close friends and her boyfriend and I am like dude nasty! They kiss infront of me! Ugh, well they broke up last week, so sorry for ya girl! Anyways enough about me, about the story, youguys like this, and I have never written a cliff hanger before so was this a good cliff hanger was it a bad cliffhanger tell me! Review my lovlies, follows and favorites don't hurt either! Love you guys!
