Author's note – This whole fanfic falls under fair use. Please see first chapter.

Dedication – To the original Suethor. Writing a Mary Sue is part of the learning process of become a good writer. Some are minor Mary Sues, others are major ones. I hold that if done right, most characters can be turned into no longer being a Mary Sue.

Magical Mary
~Lynx Potter~

Fabricating a Lie

If you are someone famous in the Wizarding World, then information about you and who your family is will be easy to find. A girl sat on a bench at the Hogwarts express, awaiting for it to arrive. She wanted desperately to fit in with those around her, to actually be popular at the school that she was going to be going to. She wanted to be friends.

Her family consisted of her mother, a witch, and her father, who was a Muggle. While her family hadn't ever held back in telling her about the world her mother was from, they insisted that she go to a school in the Muggle world, in order to come and understand them, and to form an idea of them that was not the Pureblood biased so many had.

However, she hated it. Truth of the matter was, her hair color was enough to have her be made fun of by her classmates. It was a reddish-brown color, with a blond streak on either side. They teased her constantly about her looks, all of which had started with that hair. She also had an oddity to her, that caused her to be easily ostracized.

She had thus let her bangs grow out to cover her eyes, much like the character in the Japanese Manga, wallflower did. This way, she couldn't see her own eyes, which were a vivid green, indicator of her likely Irish ancestry. It also meant she couldn't see other peoples faces, and compare them to her own. But most of all, it meant that they couldn't see her.

It crossed her mind, as she began to accidentally preform magic without her wand, that she wanted to fit in with those at Hogwarts, the way that she didn't at her old school. Thus, knowing she would receive the letter, began to clip articles of families likely to have important children going to Hogwarts. She closed her mouth, as she glanced through her notebook.

Truth of the matter was, there were only two families that actually stood out to absolutely have children going to school the same year as hers. That was the Potter family, and the Malfoy family. She knew that both had sons in their family that would be going to Hogwarts the same year that she would. Thus, she decided to do more research into the families.

She found James Potter to be ugly, but Lily in fact looked like she could easily be the girls mother. Thus, the girl began to think of this woman as beautiful, to the point of wishing that this woman was her own mother. As for the Malfoy's, she found Narcissa Malfoy's mouth to be twisted into a horrible frown. Lucius' blond hair though, attracted her attention.

Thus, she did some more research. She found out that the Potter parents were actually dead. Lily was also Muggle born, meaning that their son would be half-blood much like this girl was. She also found out that the Malfoy family was rather rich. Having grown up being schooled in the Muggle world, she couldn't help but think of the tabloids.

She thus began to formulate her plan on how to be popular at the school, sure, it would mean that she would have to tell a few lies, but the fact was, these lies would mean she herself was famous, and everyone wanted to be friends with someone who was famous. That was why she had come early, and why her parents hadn't come to bid her good-bye... she said she would be too nervous otherwise.

The train pulled up, and she closed her scrapbook and got up. She had that under her arm, and began to pull her trunk towards the train. A conductor kindly helped get her bag onto the train. She then found a compartment, and slowly let people come in. A few girls sat down near her, rather excited about the whole matter.

"Ahh, hello. My name is Lynx Potter," she stated, a sweet smile on her face. It was a name she had come up with, opening up a dictionary and picking the word that it landed on.

One of the girls gave her a wary eye. "Lynx is a rather odd name."

"Wait... did you say Potter?" the other girl quickly swooned out, just as a blond haired boy suddenly came into the room. The girl continued, her statement causing the boy to give the girl a rather odd look. "You mean, you're related to Harry Potter?

Two big first year boys could be seen standing outside the door. The boy sat down, curious, despite his displeasure with the girl. Lynx spoke up. "Ahh, yes. Harry is actually my twin brother."

The blond haired boy suddenly raised an eyebrow up. "So, you actually know that jerk?"

"Jerk?" Lynx became slightly huffy. "My brother isn't a jerk. Well, I don't believe he is."

"I'll ask again if you've met him," the boy stated. "You look nothing like him. He's got black hair and green eyes."

Lynx pulled back her hair, to reveal green eyes. "I am like our mother." She realized she had caught the boys attention.

"And let me guess, he is like your guys father?" one of the girls asked.

"No. Not really. I mean, he looks like the man everyone believes to be our father, but in fact, James Potter isn't our real father," the girl stated. "Our mother wasn't in love with him, and had an affair."

"I'll bite and ask who this person is," the boy asked.

"Lucius Malfoy," Lynx stated. This caused the boy's eyebrow to suddenly twitch, while the girls suddenly burst out laughing. "What is so funny?"

The two girls got up to leave, and the one who had been skeptical due to her name spoke up. "You are such a liar."

"I am not," the girl stated. She then turned to the boy, who had a rather miffed look on his face. "You believe me, right?"

"Believe you?" the blond haired boy's voice cracked out. "I didn't believe you from the very beginning. Yet I was willing to let you run your mouth without saying anything, until you had the audacity to bring my father into this."

"Then, you are Harry and my half-brother," the girl squeaked out. "I can't believe I though you were rather handsome."

"Bloody hell! The daft girl believes her own lies!" the boy snapped out. "My father never had an affair with whoever Potter's mother was!"

"Well, how do you know!" Lynx snapped back.

"How do I know?" Draco paused for a second. "My father never would do that to my mother. I don't know anything about this... so called mother of yours."

"Lily..." Lynx beamed. "She was Muggle Born."

"Muggle Born?" Draco suddenly stood up. "Well, there you have the proof my father never had an affair with Potter's mother."

"You are just denying the truth," the girl stated, her cheeks puffing out as she hated being called a liar in the matter, even though deep down, she knew she was lying.

"My father is a Pureblood, and believes that we Wizards should keep our blood clean of contamination of Muggle blood," the boy stated, getting up to leave. "You didn't do good enough research."

"Well, just because my mother didn't have an affair with him, didn't mean that someone else didn't!" the girl snapped out.

Draco's head turned towards her, anger in his eyes. "You just made your social life at Hogwarts bloody hell." And with that, he was gone.

Author's note – Lynx Potter happens to be Harry's twin sister, and the daughter of Lucius Malfoy, who just so happens to have her half-brother Draco falling for her. Snape also thinks that she looks promising, yet thinks that Draco or Harry is Lynx Potter.

What can be learned from this Sue.
I would personally avoid giving the OC an animal name... particularly since lynx are not native to Great Britain. It must be understood that Draco's father would never have fallen for the Mudblood Lily. The man is also head over heals in love with Narcissa. You would need a LOT of development in the how. Also, incest is not cute... it is a serious subject and should be treated seriously.