Just in case you havent caught on, this is Mellos pov. Its a shorter chapter. I'm so Happy chapter one got seven good review in two days!


Mello

The moment I laid eyes on him I thought he was cute. Definitely better looking than some of the other boys here. His deep red hair was short and straight but straggly, bangs making a good attempt to cover his eyes. Even though he was kneeling I could tell he was tall and thin but muscular. He wasn't bulky but I could tell he could take a punch and give it back twice as hard. I didn't quit understand the goggles over his eyes but I kinda liked them. He looked good.

This was the guy caught doing & dealing? He looks normal. Not at all like the other dealers I've seen. I could tell he was looking me over too. A natural reaction to meeting someone knew so I didn't try to look cool or anything. I just acted natural so he could pick up on my character as much as he could. He looks smart. He has probably already picked up on a lot.

I took in a breath of smoke from my cigarette and let it drop to the ground. Break-the blond that brought him here-knew immediately that it was his job to stomp it out, and did so. I looked the boy over one more time before speaking.

"So . . . You're the new one?"

"Excuse me?" The boy responded, clearly still shaken from the kidnap here. He was confused. How cute.

"You just arrived here . . ."

"Um . . . yeah, who are you?"

I jumped off my tree, my black Oxfords kicking up some dirt on my landing, "Call me Mello."

"Mello?" He asked. I know that expression. That's the 'what the hell kind of name is that' expression.

"Yes," I scoffed taking a cigarette Axis had just lit for himself and clamming it as my own, "And your name is. . . " He parted his lips to speak but I interrupted, "No never mind. Your old name doesn't matter . . ." I looked him over again. What would be a name for him? Something strong but soft . . . M it has to start with an M . . .

I sucked in a breath of smoke and softly blew it out letting it encase my hand and head. It faded quickly. ". . . Your new name . . . is . . . Matt."

"Matt?" He cocked his head at me. Why is he still on his knees?

"Yes, Matt." I walked up to him and offered my cigarette, "Do you hate it?"

He stared at my hand for a moment then turned away, "I-I don't smoke."

I choked on a laugh, "Everyone know what you did, Matt. No one will judge you here."


Once again the next chapter is Matt's thoughts about everything he was just told. The next chapters will have better consistance i swear! Its just a little hard to start!