(I'm so annoyed right now i've had this chapter done for like 6 hours but then my internet refused to work so I wasn't able to upload it till now. Thanks for all the reviews i've had 8 on just my first chapter They really help so keep it up!
SSJsilven-Thanks for the reviews and yea I agree when I read stories I like a prologue so I know whats different. Keep reviewing and thanks!
GohanFave-I agree very few good stories are coming out at the moment. I will be updating everyday unless something comes up. Well keep up the reviews even if its just death threats for me to continue ;)
KY111-Thanks man and I agree Videl saiyan stories are hard to do without completely ruining them. But depending on how there pulled off some of my favorites on the site have Videl as a saiyan. Well keep up the reviews man.
ssj 4 pan mystic-Thanks for the review. There will be Pan but thats a LONG way off. Right now there only four. I have a lot of different adventures for them even after Frezia is dead. So sit tight and enjoy.
dcp1992-Thanks, I will try to update daily although everyone in awhile I can't. But I'll try especially if I keep getting this many reviews!
Karmaftw-Well i'll show some of what happens to them now. I'll probably dedicate a chapter later to what they do but they won't even get close to finding them. Although they will return to earth! Though thats a long ways off. Thanks for the review I hope you keep enjoying it.
Guest-Thanks, as for Gohan the warrior its not done i'm just taking a break. I hope you enjoy this story while I get my thoughts together on my other one.
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Wow well that took a bit thanks for all of your guy's reviews please keep reviewing it really help. Well heres the chapter!)
(Ok I don't feel like rewriting the cannon part so just up to when Raditz is kicking Goku's but at Kame house but he wants to torture him some more instead of just taking Gohan like he does in cannon.)
Goku's screams were all Gohan heard. He had tried to run to his side earlier but had been swatted aside like a little body had been inbeeded into Kame house. Now all that filled his head were his fathers screams and his anger was rising. He couldn't take it anymore. He had to stop the man from hurting his daddy! His power exploded to the surface causing a large part of Kame house to explode around him. He came out screaming right in front of Raditz. Most of Kame house fell down now that most of the wall was gone. Raditz looked at Gohan then activated his scouter and was amazed as the boys power was raising over 1,000 and kept raising. As it came close to 1,500 he noticed something.
On the edge of his scouter's range another power level was rising. It wasn't as high as the boy in front of him but it was slightly over 1000. It was going to be something he would investigate after dealing with the problem at hand. He turned his head and watched in shock as Gohan came flying toward him with a head but. He gasped as Gohan collided with his midsection knocking all of the air out of his lungs. He took a few steps into the water before he grinned. He then looked at the kid who had run over to his dad. His power level was still severe l hundred but had dropped off considerably.
Raditz grinned then exclaimed,"now that brat of your Kakorot has the makings of a true saiyan warrior!" With that he walked over and grabbed Gohan who tried to struggle but wasn't able to get free. Raditz hovered severe l feet in the air before calling to Goku,"well brother i've decided instead of taking you I will take your sun. He at least has the makings of a true Saiyan warrior once we can break him of his childish crying." Raditz looked down at the boy who had just shown tremendous power a little bit ago and frowned. He had started to whine telling the "Big meanie to let him go." Raditz shrugged once that habit was broken he would be quite useful now to go check out the other power level With that he blasted off were his scouter had shown the other high power level It to had started to level off but was still exceptionally high.
Goku looked up in horror as Raditz took his son away. He had been able to do anything! After his injures finally caught up to him he fell unconscious Bulma and the others ran over to try to help him. Today was not good at all.
With Videl.
Videl had been walking along happily with her mother and father. They were taking a walk in a park just relaxing. Videl had not had any training yet still considered to young. Her life had been a simple one. Hercules and Selene both worked at a Marshal arts Dojo. Videl would usually just sit and watch all of the students practicing. Although her parents had refused to teach her yet she had made them promise to when she got older.
It was a simple day. Both Hercules and Selene were off today so had decided to go for a walk. Then Videl felt something rise inside of her. Something was wrong she knew it. As she glanced around to figure out what was wrong she began to feel anger. Something bad was happening to.. someone. She wasn't sure what was going on it wasn't good and she wanted to help. Her power began to raise even more causing a light breeze to form. Both Hercules and Selene asked her,"whats wrong honey?" She replied while looking around,"i don't know Mama and Poppa I just feel something wrong." They looked at her strangely but continued to walk.
Around a half an hour later Videl felt something once again. This time it wasn't just that something was wrong but she could tell something was coming and it was evil. She looked up and saw Raditz flying down to the ground. Her and her parents looked at him in shock. Raditz looked at them strangely for a moment then touched the device on his face. His eyes went wide as he noticed two things at once. One the high power level was coming from the small girl and two the girl and what looked to be her mother had tails. Suddenly Hercules yelled out,"what are you doing here?" Raditz looked at the man then laughed,"i came to this mud ball to find Kakorot but it seems a few other Saiyans survived" They looked at him strangely then asked," whats a Saiyan." Raditz face palmed,"i'm done dealing with this you as well must have hit your head like Kakorot!" Then Hercules asked,"whats a Kakorot?" Raditz then slumped and replied,"it doesn't matter like Kakorot you have a low power level but your daughter shows promise so i'll be taking her." With that he snatched up Videl who tried to fight. He noticed Gohan as well was trying to struggle so he gave them each a quick chop to the neck knocking them out. "You monster!" Selene yelled, she jumped toward Raditz trying to attack him but he sent both her and Hercules to the ground with 2 quick kicks.
He snorted,just like Kakorot that female seemed to not know of heritage Both were weak, but the kids they showed promise. The boy had actually cracked his armor when he had gotten angry earlier. The most interesting thing was the fact that the girls power level had shot up just when Gohan's had. He shook his head and flew back to his pod with both Gohan and Videl slung over his shoulders. He smirked once broken of there childish behaviors they showed promise. He loaded himself and the two kids into his pod then blasted off. Heading toward the base he was to meet back up with Vegeta and Nappa. He activated the pods induced sleep system and went into a deep sleep along with the two kids.
(I would have had it out a few hours ago but as I said earlier my internet was messed up. I hope you enjoyed and please review!)
PS-If you guys want i'm excepting ideas about events during there time with Frezia I have some of it planned out but am open to ideas for filler.
