I tried to get this chapter done and IM EXCITED I DID WHOOOOO (runs around screaming like)

I DONT OWN IZ! AND AT!


"PB! PB! PB! Finn was running through the candy kingdom with the unconches boy in his arms. Jake was beside him with the maybe dead dog in his arms

people were shock to see Finn with a unmoving boy in his arms and some followed Finn and Jake. Finn saw Princess Bubblegum watering her plants

"PB!"

Princes Bubblegum look from her plants and saw Finn and Jake running to her with a kid and dog in there arms "FINN!" she drop her thing of water and ran up to them "what happened!?"

Jake was talking real fast "WE WERE PLAYING TAG AND THEN SNOW AND ICE AND BOY AND DOG!"

"WOO woo calm down, so these two were in ice?"

they both nodded

"I NEED A MEDIC FAST!"

2 beds were being push out by 2 ice cream nurses

Finn layed the boy on 1 and Jake layed the dog on the other

People of the candy kingdom watch the Princes, Finn, and Jake follow the beds

moments later Finn was watching the boy shiver. Bubblegum felt his head

"he has a fever and the cut on his side looks bad Finn" the cut was bandage up but 1 thing confused the Princess "Finn one thing I don't understand is he had dried green stuff on the wound but no blood"

Jake was looking at the dog when he saw the zipper on it, he slowly unzip it and what he saw shock him "dude this is not a dog its a robot!"

Finn and Bubblegum walk over to it and saw it was a robot

Jake took the dog outfit off and look at the little robot on the bed

Bubblegum pick it up and look at it "hmmm" she saw its chest was a little open so she open it all the way to see wires, and 1 was broken "Finn Im going to take this robot into my lab and fix him but not yet, because why would this boy have a robot

"dont forget green skin and no ears" Jake pointed out

"that to" she grab a needle and put it in the boys arm and what made everybody go wide eye was insted of red blood it was green "im going to analize this. and Finn"

"ya"

"watch him" she pointed to the boy

"kk peebles"

she grab the robot in one hand and needle in other and left

Finn and Jake look at the boy who was shakeing, Jake covered him up but stop when he saw the boys hand

"hey Finn look at his fingers"

Finn look at them "he only has three fingers"

Jake was holding the boys arm and started taking off his glove. he now saw 3 claws "Finn I dont think this boy is human"

Jake then felt the arm get free from his hold and got scratch across the face by the claws in the progress

"OW!"

the boy slowly open his eyes

Finn and Jake look at the boy closer now

the boy was looking around then he saw the 2 stareing at him. he screamed

Finn and Jake step away from him

the boy jump up to his feet "WHO ARE YOU!"

"were"

"WHO ARE YOU"

were Fi..."

"WHO ARE YOU TELL MEEEEEEE!

"were Finn and Jake" Finn said

"who are you?" Jake ask

"THATS NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS YOU MEAT SACK!

Jake raised a eyebrow at him

"THE ALMIGHTY ZIM IS NOT GOING TO BE TRAP IN THIS SMELLY PLACE" the boy jump off the table and ran out the door

Finn and Jake chased after him

"hey Finn" Jake said panting " I think his name is Zim and why is he acting like this?"

"maybe his fever is doing this. HEY ZIM STOP!" Finn yelled

NEVEEEEEEEER! ZIM DOSE NOT STOP FOR NO... he bump into a Big waffer

the waffer turned around angry "watch where your going"

"YOU DONT TELL ZIM WHAT TO DO YOU SMELLY ummmm THING!"

Finn and Jake saw Zim get punch in the face by the waffer and it walk away. they stop when they saw Zim holding his eye

Jake use his powers and grab Zim with his now huge hands wraping up the boy to where he could not run again. he made another hand appear and grab Zims arms and put them down but when he did they both saw Zim had a black eye and what was freaker his eye was pink


tell me what ya think so far should I contue hmm