Thank you guys so much for all the awesome feedback! As for those who said that it might be taken down, don't worry, I'm aware, but still thank you for telling me.

A lot of you had a lot to say about my post and while I know it isn't an actual story, I'm thinking about changing it and turning it into a ranting story for DP characters, though I'm not sure if that'll work or not. Anyways, again thank you guys.

Also, some of you have asked how to make your character a good OC character. I wish I could tell you, but I honestly can't. What I think is a good OC might be different from what you think is a good OC. Personally, any OC has potential just as long as you give them a personality and a reason to be in your story then by all means-WRITE IT!

A lot of OCs I've read usually don't have a point in the story other than to be a copy and paste character. Nothing stands out about them and for some reason we have to acknowledge their existence. Even the romance between copy and paste characters is a little strange, it's like watching an unsalted cracker propose to a sheet of sandpaper, nothing stands out and for some reason we have to think their romance is legit, even though it's pretty forced. Like how Danny instantly falls for this girl he just met not five seconds ago and thinks they're meant to be.

By like I said in the last chapter, not all OCs are bad, but a lot of them definitely need more characteristics other than their beauty/handsomeness. Give the OC chemistry with the main character. Give them reason to fall in love aside from physical appearances, would you fall in love with some complete stranger just by looking at him or her? No. You don't know who they are if they're some kind of psycho.

My advice to everyone who asked me about what a good OCs is: If you want your OC to have good qualities give them a personality and chemistry especially if they're going to hook up with one of the main characters. Again, this is my personal opinion and therefore shouldn't be taken too seriously.

I hope this helps and if not then I'm sorry. I'll see about turning this into a rant story for the DP characters that way this won't be taken down XP. Love you guys and I hope you have an awesome weekend!