Okay so first of all thank you to all my reviewers Now after getting some insight from my sister I have decided to go and study the series and take notes in order to write a better story. I don't plan on giving up on this but it will take me some time to get the story going where I want it to be. I will be addressing Zuku and Mai's relationship and what happened and further go into detail how he and Katara ended up. I completely plan on making this a Aang/ other character and although he starts off with feelings for Katara he will eventually start to realize his feelings for Amina. Well I hope to hope to have the revised first chapter by early August and as for a beach scene don't worry I will have one and a lake and/or waterfall one ; )