Parental Problems

OK guys here's the second chapter im actually going to say i need at least ten reveiws before i continue

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Parental Problems

Caspian led the two girls back to lucy's room. sitting on her bed was a small lioness. She sat up as they came in and bowed. She resembled aslan as she had a old and wizened air about her. She was much smaller than the great lion and her neck was bare of a mane. around it instead she had a line of dark amber fur like a necklace or choker.

"Hello Queen Lucy, Queen Susan" The lioness said jumping down from the bed. She was definitely a woman and her voice was the final peice of information they needed, this was not Aslan. Lucy nodded to the young cat while Susan stood stock still afraid of the reason the cat had come... and brought Caspian.

"You may have assumed why I have come Lucy, if it is your siblings choice I will let you all return to Narnia. You and Edmund will still be transported to the various times and places that need your help by Aslan. His power is weaker here and it was hurting him a great deal to keep you in Narnia. I do not mind for I originate more from your world and so hold more power here than Narnia. I will be able to transport you back but if you except you will be finally completely narnian and transporting you will hurt me like it has Aslan" the lioness finished. she glanced sideways and her eyes narrowed

"Oh shut up!" the lioness exclaimed her voice getting suddenly high pitched and child like. Caspian who had been laughing silently started laughing and it seemed that he couldn't breath. Susan swatted at his head and he straightened up doing his best to stop laughing.

"Look i was trying my best and do you know how hard it is to come up with stuff like that I have no idea how he does it" the lion exclaimed

"Your not a wise old lion at all! you are really young actually aren't you?" Lucy exclaimed with an enquiring look on her face. the lion looked grave

"Yes I am young but I can do all that I say" the lion said

"Asia I do not think they fully understand yet" Caspian said pointing at Susan behind her back. Asia walked up to Susan

"Susan would you like to go back to Narnia, forever?" She implored. Susan wasn't moving and Caspian stepped forward only to have her whirl around and look at him for the longest time. He withered slightly under her gaze

"I get to stay with you forever? and I do not have to come back and put up with this world, England, all the immature boys? and stupid school and snobby girls?" She said in wonder and awe. Caspian nodded and Susan flung herself at him which was followed by the most passionate kiss either had ever experienced. Lucy and Asia shared a look and stepped back a pace. Caspian and Susan were so wrapped up in eachother they did not here the front door or peter and Ed coming up the stairs.

"Hey who do you think you are.." peter never got to finish his sentence because Caspian turned around and grinned at him

"I'm actually not quite sure about that anymore" he said grinning. Peter seemed in a bit of shock but Ed stepped forward

"Caspian what are you doing here besides that" he said nodding subtley toward his siter who blushed.

"And who is that?" Peter asked pointing at Asia.

"This is Asia and she is the reason I am here. she asked me to escort her here while she asked if you would like to come stay in Narnia" Both the boys nodded readily yes of course.

"But first we have to deal with your mother" Asia said setting the children to stone. why oh why?