Listen, I'm getting really bugged because I'm getting comments that say 'Oh your spelling and grammer isn't good work on it.' I only come to fanfiction to read and write, not to be judged on how good my spelling or grammer is. I've read PLENTY of stories here with mistakes! I'm getting sick and tired of these comments! I may as well stop writing! I've told people 'please don't nag me' but they don't really listen. So please if your a new reader cut me some slack!
Many cats lay dead, very bloody, or half alive. The survivors of the attack huddled together and began to discuss what to do next. "We must leave the our home. ShadedClan has to be broken up." A brindle tom sighed. "No Dawnstar! ShadedClan is not that desperate!" A tan-yellow she-cat mewed urgently.
"Daisyfrost…we must give up ShadedClan is too little now." Sighed the cat called Dawnstar. Daisyfrost's eyes flashed. "Besides I'm old, I have lost my last life and is going to StarClan." Dawnstar coughed. "No! Dawnstar don't go!" Daisyfrost's mew was desperate.
Dawnstar's eyes began to glaze. "Dawnstar!" Daisyfrost yowled. "The one with the fur like that of coal shall let the shade live again." Dawnstar's eyes were full glazed now. Daisyfrost was sure that was a sign from StarClan and she pushed her nose into Dawnstar's fur.
"Good bye." Daisyfrost mewed softly. Something touched Daisyfrost's shoulder which made her jump. She turned to see Thunderpatch, Hawksight, Icespot, and Littlepelt. "Come on Hawksight and I will bury him." Thunderpatch offered.
After the surviving cats sat vigil for there leader they bid there farewells the next day. Daisyfrost turned away and slowly padded back to what was there camp. After the ambush nothing was left only a couple of dens. Daisyfrost padded up to the tree that was the leaders den. "If that ambush didn't kill us all out this would've been my den." Daisyfrost padded into the den sat in the leaders nest and fell asleep muttering the prophecy.
"The one with the fur like that of coal shall let the shade live again."
