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kitty13492

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"We are going to a club." Hikaru mumbled, picking up a skin tight black dress. "If we are, I am coordinating my outfit, thank you very much." She snatched the dress away from him, and picked up a short strapless green dress. "Ew." Kaoru threw the dress on top of a growing pile beside her bed. "Oh, I love this top." Hikaru and Kaoru sweatdropped when they saw her hold up a very revealing black top with a giant broken red heart. "It goes great with this skirt." He held out a matching black miniskirt. "And these shoes." Kaoru threw a pair of red flats at her. "GET OUT SO I CAN CHANGE!" She screamed as they high-tailed out of the room.

"AH! I CANNOT FIND MY ROSE BELLY BUTTON RING!" She ran around the room, searching for her prized possesion. Suddenly, something hit her in the head, as she sat on the floor. "It was in the hallway." Chika muttered, having thrown it at her head. "Thanks Chika-Kun." She slipped it in her naval piercing, wincing slightly as she pinch some of the non-pierced skin. "LET'S GO!" She exclaimed.

~At the club!~

"OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS SONG!" Hikaru and Kaoru said at the same time. "I HATE THIS SONG!" Hana laughed. Hana noticed a familar head and smiled. "BE RIGHT BACK YOU GUYS!" She shouted. "Well, Well, Well, Honey-Sempai." Hana laughed as he turned around to her. "Hana-Chan!" He smiled and hugged her. "DAMNIT, WHY IS EVERYBODY TALLER THAN ME NOW? YOU USED TO BE SO TINY!" She whined.

"LET'S DANCE, HANA-CHAN!" Honey shouted. They were dancing to I'm Into You by Jennifer Lopez, when Chika interupted them. "Can I dance with you, Hana?" He had to shout over the music. "OF COURSE!" The song changed into Shut up by DJ Boonie (Originally by Cascada,)

"Can I dance with you, Chika-Kun." A girl Hana remember as Nina, Asked. "Go ahead, Chika, I can dance with Satoshi over there." She pointed to Mori's little brother. "Alright." He didn't seem too happy. "SATOSHI, DANCE WITH ME PLEASE!" Hana grabbed his hand gently, as she pulled him to the dance floor. "This next song is called Hardcore Vibes, The DJ Cammy Remix!" The dj shouted into the mic. Hana and Satoshi started grinding on each other (So ooc for him,) when Chika caught sight of this. He tried to get close to her when another girl started dancing with him.

"I am having a fun time dancing with you!" Hana whispered into Satoshi's ear. He blushed, "ME TOO!" They both laughed as Chika got pulled in by another girl.

"Time for slow songs!" The DJ boomed. "Can I finally dance with you, Hana." Chika breathed in and out heavily. Satoshi walked away as Hana put her arms around his neck. "Of course." The slow version for Everytime We Touch by Cascada came on. "I missed You soo much." She mumbled as she laid her head on his shoulder. "Same, I see you kept the necklace." He pointed to the elephant charm. "Yeah, at first I was a bit ticked that you got me something to remind me of the name my sister gave me, But It was so beautiful." "How did your sister even come up with Zo, as your nickname?" He asked quietly.

"My mom was going to originally name me Zoey, and Zo does mean elephant, but my dad told her no, Then he left us." She lifted her head and looked into his eyes. "I have something to tell you." They both said at the same time. "You first." She still looked into his eyes. "I like you more than a friend." He muttered and blushed. She smiled lightly before kissing his cheek. "I like you more than a friend too." "Will you be my girlfriend?" He whispered lightly into her ear. "Yes." They inched closer to each other when, "HANA WE'RE LEAVING!" Hikaru screamed. "Damnit." They both muttered. "See you later, Chika-Kun."

~Next day at the store!~

Hana sighed as she propped her feet on the front desk. It was such a slow day, and she had nothing better to do. "You'll be my baby boy~!" Her phone rang and she quickly picked it up. "Hello?" "Hey, Hana." Chika. "Hi Chika, Is there something you needed? Because Grandpa might see me and get pissed." She was not in the mood for her Grandfather's nagging "Yeah, I realized something."

"Yes continue?" She really did not want the nagging. She thought she saw her grandpa so she dropped the phone, accidently hitting the speaker button. "I love you." Everyone turned their gaze onto the blushing woman as she picked up her phone. "I love you too, Chika. Kinda dropped my phone and the speaker came on so everybody in the store heard." She was so embarresed. Not because Chika said he loved her, because everyone heard it.

"Oh..BYE!" He hung up the phone quickly.


AWWWWW! SO EMBARRASING YET TOTALLY ADORABLE! I THINK I WILL MAKE A VOTE ON IF SHE ACTUALLY STAYS WITH CHIKA OR REALIZES SHE LOVES SOMEBODY ELSE! YOU DECIDE!

HOPEFULLY MORE PEOPLE WILL READ MY STORIES, CAUSE IT WOULD BE AWESOME. SO YOU KNOW THE DRILL, REVIEW IF I NEED WORK! CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM IS NOT TAKING LIGHTLY, I CONSIDER ALL THE ADVICE I NEED SO DO NOT HOLD BACK ON ME NEEDING IMPROVEMENTS!