I fixed the second chapter
a bit of it
Later in the year,
They was a family going to a city, in the car their was a baby girl who was sleeping peaceful. "Lisa it's going to be safe for your child?" said Ain "Ain stop worrying about her and yes she would just be fine" said Lisa. As their got to the city side it was dark looking like a dumb, with pore people on the side walks. Soon they got to the house "We are Here" said Lisa with a smile on her face. The father was worry about Roselina, as Lisa got her and walk in the house, with his eyes of fear for Rose. He unpack the car as Lisa was setting up for Roselina in her room as she was still sleeping. Roselina was up when her father come in and kiss her on the forehead then giving her a real rose.
Later in the even,
the family was settle in the old house as Lisa was setting up dinner as Ain was working on thing with the little baby sleeping with her rose that was next to her. Soon it was dinner as the eat with the baby in bed. They clean up and talk about having other child and what to call it, witch it would be smart about it. As they think about their was a call on the phone. Lisa went to the phone, she had a look on hear face signing it was a stranger on the phone as it said "Hello Lisa how's Roselina going?" She was scary off and didn't say a word to him. Ain was annoy with the guy so he hung up the phone, but they was a knock on the door. Lisa went to the door with a scream for outside soon he heard he run to her to see her hurt with a knife and gun by her neck. Ain look to the man and ask him what he wanting? With that he had a smiled at him and point to Rose room. He shock his head, then the moon come out form the dark clouds with light coming in. Ain look at him and smile at him with Ain he went dark purple and light was gone so you couldn't see. The only thing you could hear was howls and screams coming though the city.
Two years later,
"Rose, honey came down here fore dinner" Lisa call. As Rose was in hands of her father, with big smiles on they face as Lisa just smile at them. They had tea then clean up with Rose helping her mother with the dish as the father went to work on something. Soon Roselina went to bed as her mother read a story to her with the end she kiss her on the forehead then left. Lisa went to Ain and ask "When are we going to have a other child?" he reply "Maybe in a few mouths" hoping on her with a smirk on his face. She giggles then kiss him with him on the bed in their room as the night went on with love in the air. Next day Lisa was hoping she was their was other baby inside of her as Ain was downstairs wending for the answer. As Roselina was eating, with her father next to her with a cheeky smile, that she giggle at. Ain look at her with a smile then tickling her under till Lisa came down with a sad look on her face. He went to her and ask "What wrong?" she just said "I am..I mean we are having a other child, as Rose pin up and smile.
Six mouths other,
"Roselina it time to go" said Lisa as she puts on a top and bottoms on. Ain was in the car for a while, for the girls to come out. The family was going to the hospital for her mother to give birth, again. They waited for a long time with Roselina sleeping on the chair, with her toy it was a teddy bear that was golden brown with a rose in one paw as it has a bow around the neck. She got it for her last birthday, as she never let go of it same with the rose. The lady come out and said "You can come in" with a smile. They went in and saw a brown cat (it kinder looks like blaze) their went in, Lisa only smile. It was a cute little boy, so they and call him Jasper. When his eyes open, their saw red jades. "Welcome to your family Jasper" with big smiles.
So.. like the story please be nice for my second try
it long, but I can do better if you want it loner please tell me so
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