So I got two reviews and I have to say I am pretty happy. They were both from guests and one of them told me it was amazing (thank you whoever you are) and another told me it was cool but they asked me when I would be updating. My goal is to update daily. HAPPY READING!
Tobias POV
As I see the flash of blue fall I instantly think Erudite smart ass I hope there is not to much of those. I reach my hand out and ask the usual "Name" he just stands there trembling a bit "Pick carefully you don't get to pick again" I say "James" he responds. I tell him to go over by the wall just as a black and white blur falls to the net. In about 10 minutes everyone is lined up against the wall. We have 9 transfers and 11 dauntless born. The order went:
James - Erudite
Kelly - Candor
Jamie - Candor
Ally - Amity
Kevin - Erudite
Mike - Candor
Matthew - Erudite
Katy - Amity
Jack - Amity
I am not surprised there are no Abnegation, Tris was the last one since me two years earlier. The four of us walk over to the wall and Christina starts talking, " I'm Christina, this is Uriah, Tris, and Four" before she can get another word out Jamie, the Candor smart mouth says, "Four like the number, what happened all the others were taken" Tris chuckles probably remembering Christina last year, Uriah just shakes his head and Christina says, "Careful Candor" I walk toward her and say "Jamie is it" she slowly nods, "Well Jamie if I wanted to put up with Candor smart mouths I would have joined their faction so lesson number 1 keep your fucking mouth shut got it" she nods and I walk back to my spot. Christina continues by saying "Uriah and I will be taking the dauntless born while Four and Tris take the transfers" Tris continues by saying "You will be training separately but you will be ranked together" Uriah quickly bumps in by saying "Before any of you dumb asses open your mouth yes you are ranked and we train in stages. There are three stages and 2 of you will be factionless by the end of each stage." I decide it's my turn to talk so I say "That about does it transfers come with Tris and I Dauntless born go with Uriah and Christina I will assume you don't need a tour." The Dauntless born leave and we start the tour.
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Tris POV
I never thought what was supposed to be a 10 minute tour would be a living hell. I am glad that we decided it was lunch right after the tour and the rest of the day is free. I hate how every girl initiate has their eyes on Tobias and all the guys have their eyes on me. It's disturbing. I am sitting at the tables when I notice Mike get up and make his way towards us. GREATTT is all think. He taps on my shoulder and whispers in my ear "Tris you are really hot and I just want to say we should fuck like now" then he slaps as much of my butt as he can (considering I am sitting). I grab his arm, pin him to the ground and punch him a couple of times, then I say "What the fuck makes you think you can talk to your instructer that way? Better yet touch me!" apparently Tobias heard that last part and practically jumped up from his seat, he motioned me off Mike and picked him up by the collar of his shirt and threw him against the wall "WHAT PIECE OF YOUR FUCKING MIND MAKES YOU THINK YOU CAN TOUCH MY GIRLFRIEND!" Mike is now shaking with fear and he is covered in blood "girlfriend" he says very soft and shaky. Before Tobias can respond I run to him and he drops Mike and puts his arms around me. Next thing you know we are kissing. I pull back and yell "IF SOMEONE WANTS TO TAKE HIM TO THE INFIRMARY YOU CAN BUT IF YOU DONT WANT TO YOU DONT HAVE TO" Tobias chuckles and not to my surprise no one gets up and they just continue eating. "Well" Tobias says "this is going to be a LONG initiation."
