I'm sorry about that intro. I was going to launch into the whole back story, but I didn't think my faithful readers would really want a total recap. So, I did the next best thing. Either way, all of you faithful Baby Crazy readers lost, so to make up for it, here's the first actual chapter. I hope you like it!

Max's POV:

2 more weeks of maternity leave left before going back to work. The girls are 5 months old already, and I'm not ready to give up watching them age quite yet. That's right, 5 months. There were the 2 months of maternity leave before the girls were born, the 3 additional months of pregnancy that I skipped, and 2 months after that. Not to mention my 2 weeks of vacation time that I had saved up. Perfect time to use it, right? I thought so too.

Those 2 weeks came in handy the day that a mysterious guest showed up at my door…

No good ever comes from mysterious guests. Do we have to recall the whole David incident? Although Noah is so cute now at 13 months. (He was cute from birth, what am I talking about?)

Let's see… on that particular day; Fang was at work, and I was playing with the girls in the living room. Normal. A knock on the door startled me, but there was no reason to be on edge. But I was.

"Who is it?" For all I know it could be someone who wants to experiment on my precious little angels.

There was no answer, just a hand (I assumed) turning the knob on the door. I placed Sky next to Star in their play pen thing, and cautiously made my way toward the door. I peered out the peep hole, only to look down the barrel of a gun.

"Hello, Max." A female voice said, "You know what the wise decision is. Open the door." Guess what I did? I opened the door. Why? Because I had gone into protective mother bear mode. As soon as I had a clear view, I launched myself at her. Brigid; the one who served time for helping Mr. Chu. She was at my door with a fully loaded gun, ready to fire. But she didn't. As I launched myself at her, she clocked me with the barrel and said,

"I'm not here for you."

"Really?" My voice was thick with sarcasm.

"I'm not here for Sky or Star either. This is merely a personal visit." She snarled. I was still on the ground from the force of being hit in the head. She grabbed my arm and commanded me on my feet. I really had no other choice, so I did as instructed. She then pushed me roughly onto the couch. Closing and locking the door, she began to rant.

"You see Maximum; I've never really liked you. You were the only one smart enough to see what was going on between me and Fang, as well as me and Mr. Chu." I must of looked shocked, because she laughed.

"Maybe you weren't smart enough to figure it out. God, I over estimated you." She took my face in her free hand, and continued.

"What Fang and I had was special. He was just stupid enough to appreciate the lies I fed him about my work. I loved the boy. Together, we had the potential to rule the world. Clique, I know. But then, you had to get in the way. You had to ruin every chance I had to rule the world." She pulled her hand away violently.

"It's not me. It's what I am. Good always beats evil, and you got what was coming." I countered, which earned me a hard slap across the face.

"Shut up! I didn't ask for your opinion. Now what do I have to live for? Don't answer that!" She shouted, "I failed at ruling the world, I failed to keep evil on my side. You-" She pointed, "You saved the world. You married the man of your dreams and had flawless twin girls. You have the perfect life."

"Perfect?" I spat, "I grew up in a cage! I was experimented on and tormented until the age of 12. I was on the run for my life and the lives of 5 other people. And Total!"

"Yeah, well your life is pretty perfect now. And do you know what's stopping me from shooting you, or your precious twins? I have one bullet. That one bullet is going to be used for one thing, and only one thing. I just thought that you might enjoy watching." My first thought was Fang, who was now watching helplessly. That's right. Fang came in about half way through her speech without being noticed. How? He can walk through walls. Did I forget to mention that he mutated after the girls were born? Obviously.

Brigid, who still seemed to be unaware of Fang, placed the gun to her temple. She pulled the trigger just as Fang cried out,

"Brigid!" He didn't move to scoop up her lifeless body. He stood in shock, starring at where both girls sat crying from the noise and despair. I slowly stood, grabbing the phone and calling 911. After the call was made, I dialed another number. Fang, who had finally moved to calm the girls, looked at me questionably.

"Who are you calling?"

"Work," He was confused, so I went on, "I'm giving them my two weeks notice. There is no way I'm leaving these girls with anyone but the flock and mom after that!" He nodded knowingly, and kissed my forehead. And so ended another tragic adventure in the life of Maximum Ride. Hope you enjoyed the show.

Wow, I think that turned out really good. But, what did you guys think? Review and tell me, come on. I know you have an opinion!

You guys are really great,

~Faxisthegreatest123~