THWAK

Oh everyone here is some tips:

Flashbacks, (only Ichigo can have these and If you don't know this you're an idiot), thoughts

(1),(2),(3),(4),(5) etc. see end for details on this word

Yelling/Screaming/Etc. Etc. (all in caps)

The evil line of torture, Beware of this line, Beware (ok now that's a little creepy don't ya agree?).

Well that's all the tips stay tuned 4 more later on. (Sora will pop to annoy you later on i other chapters (that's the problem with living next door to her.)I'll warn you so you can skip it)

(This is at time where Rukia, our favorite character (not mine), is being pursued by Renji and Byakuya.)

I am the line of torture… I mean the line of scene change, yah that's it that's the name I need then no one will know I'm here to torture them, they'll never know, MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHA, nice to meet you. Oops.

THWAK!

"Ouch, that's going to leave a mark." A teenager with orange hair said as he landed face first into the hard concrete sidewalk. "Thank God for my regeneration ability, that would have caused a few broken bones.

-don't mind me I'm just here to annoy you, and separate the story-

"Rukia, give up you can't escape. You went missing and you got a gigi, but how is it your powers are missing? I know why! A HUMAN STOLE THEM!" A man with long red hair yelled.

"W-What? Renji don't be ridicules, my powers weren't stolen, and I don't even know why my powers are gone. Anyway when I came here to kill a hollow, I still had my powers but the next thing I know my powers are gone, and the hollow was gone!" A girl with strange black hair or 'Rukia' said.

"Yah sure, like captain Yamamoto will believe that." Renji said rolling his eyes at his childhood friend. Yah, they were good friends and he wanted to believe her but come on, who would believe a story like that? "Rukia I'm sorry but under orders of Head Captain Yamamoto and Captain Byakuya, I must arrest you. Now you can come quietly or I will have to take you by force." He said with a stern look on this face.

"THEN TAKE ME BY FORCE! I'm not going back to the soul society to be prosecuted for something I didn't commit. And I would rather die than leave the friends I had made." Rukia stated quite mad at what he had just said.

"You see, you have gained human feelings. There was a human that took your powers, just admit it and you won't have a sever punishment." Renji said, well not really said he more or less, whispered but Rukia heard him.

"WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU RENJI!? I'M TELLING YOU NO HUMAN STOLE MY POWERS. I STATED THAT LESS THAN A MINUTE AGO!" Rukia yelled looking up at Renji (A/N: well come on, you think I'd make her taller? Yah right it's too funny for her to be a midget).

"RUKIA WAKE UP AND SMELL THE ROSES! YOU CAN'T WIN HERE IF YOU TRY AND RUN CAPTAIN YAMAMOTO WITH KILL YOU!" Renji yelled back. "Fine if you won't come back on your own then I have no choice, ROAR ZABIMARU(1)(I hate this damn baboon, It has a fucking snake for a tail!), then I'll have to take you by force."

Rukia gasped "R-R-Renji, you wouldn't use your sword against a defenseless person would you?" Rukia was panicking now, never has see seen a soul reaper draw there swords or someone defenseless, NEVER has she had to fight one in a gigi, NEVER has she had to fight Renji of all people without a sword and in a gigi!

"If it's under orders, then yes." Renji said. "ROAR ZABIMARU!" the sword went straight for Rukia as it extended.

CLANG

Metal hit metal, making Zabimaru get pinned to a wall

Renji and Rukia looked at the sword that had stopped Zabimaru. It was a butcher-like blade with no hint. It was huge and there was a ribbon or bandage at the end, but it didn't stop, if you followed it lead into the darkness of the trees where the light post couldn't illuminate.

"WHO'S THERE? SHOW YOURSELF!" Renji yelled into the darkness

I'M BACK TO TORCURE YOU. OH CRAP CURSE IS CUTTING ME OFF DRAT.

Ichigo had cloaked his spiritual pressure, and was wearing his scary, terrifying, chill-giving hollow mask, He also held onto Zangetsu(2)'s ribbon

Back to the story, I've been told by my bosses (Curse and Sora) to stop torturing you. WAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH

A figure dressed in a black shihakushô(3) walked into the light, a hollows mask on his face and the ribbon of the sword that had pinned Zabimaru, in his hand, Orange hair blowing in the slight breeze that had picked up.

"Renji let me fight him; we don't know how powerful he is." Byakuya said appearing next to Renji.

"Yes Captain." Renji said bowing his head but still looking at the mysterious figure. But in a fluid-like movement the sword released Zabimaru and was in his hands and then to his back with the ribbon wrapped around the sword.

"Who are you? And what are you doing interfering?" Byakuya said to the figure in the shihakushô.

"…" Ichigo, or our mysterious figure, kept silent

"HEY CHAPTAIN BYAKUYA IS TALKING TO YOU SHOW SOME RESPECT AND ANSWER HIM!!" Renji yelled

Ichigo turned to Renji and said "You don't know who I am so I wouldn't be shouting like a moron. And to make it worse on your self you are talking to someone far more powerful than you."

"!!" Renji and Byakuya were surprised to hear such a dark, empty, wicked voice.

"Ha, yah right, you don't have that much spiritual pressure. You can't defeat me." Renji challenged (A/N: you know he would do this. He fought the people in own company to achieve Bankai(5))

"HEHEHE are you sure?" Ichigo asked trying to hide as much laughter as he could.

"Hell yah I am, I'm not assistant captain of 6th company for nothing." Renji shot at Ichigo after he laughed at him.

"Then let's see who the superior being is. You make the first move." Ichigo said

"Ha, I'll make you regret giving me the first shot. And the fucking mask won't protect you either." Renji said as he lunged at Ichigo who stood there like as if Renji hadn't even moved.

"HAHAHAHAHA let's see how strong you really are Renji" Ichigo said as Zangetsu's bandages unwrapped themselves showing the deadly butcher like blade.

MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, my other names is CLIFFHANGER WAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Curse: I regret making him have a personality.

Sora: Why Line is cool he's nice to talk to. Though he never answers a question…

Curse: So that's who you were talking to when I was making a sandwich for lunch.

Sora: Hey at least I talk! you half the time only shake your head or ignore people.

Curse: Huh? I wasn't paying attention to you troublesome and mindless nagging. I was doing something important.

Sora: and what was that?

Curse: I was reading my BLEACH books, TRYING to finish Zaraki Kenpachi and Ichigo's fight. But you made me put it down.

Sora: Meany

Curse: Your point?

Sora: You like to make me suffer don't you? –Cries-

Curse: in a twisted sort of was yes.

Sora: you jerk; you always did have a twisted sense of humor. And you laughed at me when I fell of my bike and was bleeding.

Curse: you had fainted at the sight of your own blood; I had to carry you back home.

Sora: You said you wouldn't tell anyone. O.o

Curse: to the definitions before Sora starts yelling a me.

-Definitions-

Zabimaru- Renji's sword spirit; a baboon with a snake for a tail; I think the Bankai is something Baboon King (the first word I forgot)

Zangetsu- Ichigo's sword spirit; he's the only humanoid spirit, his name means Slashing moon; Bankai is Tensa Zangetsu or in English: Chains of heaven – Slashing Moon

Shihakushô- A soul Reapers uniform. Ichigo's alter ego wore a white one. But (I may spoil this if you haven't read it yet) during the inner battle to game his mask Ichigo is nearly killed by him. But he remembers his fight with Kenpachi and regains control. What he touches he alter ego's sword that has been stabbed into his stomach, and is being pulled out by his alter self, it turns black and travels up the sword. It touches his alter self and makes his hand turn human. In the end Ichigo is able to gain his mask, but not without showing the Vizards his hollow form. A large lizard that stands on two legs, holding a black sword like in Tensa Zangetsu. It also has the black substance flowing off the blade. He was about to use a cero, or doom blast, before Ichigo gained control, the blast would of killed Love (a Vizard) if he wouldn't put his mask on.

Bankai- final release state of sword. Only the most powerful soul reapers can perform it/ or know it.