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Meeting the Commanders- Percy POV
Today was the second I was here at Chaos' army. Today was the day I would meet my fellow Commanders. I was nervous. It wasn't everyday on Earth that you would meet someone who was a hundred times stronger than you, well for me it was never like this. Charlie had told me more about Chaos' Army last night. He had told me that the Army was still pretty new only about 200-300 years old. He had also told me that Chaos had started it because he felt like something bad would happen in a few centuries.
From what else he told was pretty interesting. Like that there were only 4 Commanders now because the other 4 had been moved to an Elite group. So Chaos was looking for more Commanders now. But Charlie thought that Chaos wasn't telling him something about moving the others to the Elite Team because some of them weren't the brightest out of all 8 Commanders at the time. He soon dismissed it saying that Chaos must know what he was doing. The Army only consisted of people who had had a bad life when they were young. So everyone was around 13-20 years old. There were only a select few who were younger or older when they joined. Of course they could change their age once you became full immortal but if you were too young you would have to grow up a bit first.
Me and Charlie now walked to a room that had a table with 9 chairs around. When we entered there were 3 people already in seats. Three girls.
One had Bleach-blonde hair with shocking electric blue eyes, who put Zeus' to shame.
The one sat in the middle had pointed ears. She had enchanting purple-blue eyes. She looked like one of the mythical creatures in the faerie stories.
The girl who sat to the right of the pointed ears girl had snowy-white, long hair. Her silvery-ice eyes were somewhat warm when they looked at me.
"Hey girls, we have a new Commander." Charlie motioned to me.
I just smiled awkwardly.
"Which sector?" The bleached -blonde asked.
"Sector 1." Charlie said grinning.
She then muttered "Interesting."
All eyes were on me. I was wearing the hood again. They couldn't see my face but it felt like they could see right through it.
"Well this is Omega." Charlie told the girls who still watched me.
"Omega this is..."
"Imara." He pointed the bright blue eyed girl.
"This is Ashley." He gestured to the elf.
"And this is Crystal." He motioned to the white haired girl.
"Nice to meet you." Was the first thing I ever said to them.
Well that's the short chapter for now in our story. Hope you liked.
It might take longer for me to write this because I am focusing on my main story which I think had about 7 more chapters until it's finished. (I'm guessing)
Anyway here is the next chapter of Percy's life in the Army. (Sorry about it being a bit boring)
Tell me what you think.
Beth~
