Here is my second entry. Hope you like it. Flowerheart.

Disclaimer: Erin Hunter owns warriors, not me


Chapter 1: Discovered

Bluestorm heard Mudpaw's screech of terror. She called to three of her warriors, "Raventail, Rosepelt, Ashclaw. Follow me." She then turned and dashed of into the forest. The three warriors she had called followed her with equal speed.

"Bluestom, what do you think happened?" Ashclaw asked his deputy as they tore through the forest looking for the young apprentice.

"I don't know Ashclaw," Bluestorm admitted, "but Mudpaw sounded terrified so it must be something that could threaten us all."

"Or he might have fallen into the creek," Raventail said, "you have to admit that your apprentice can make a big deal out of almost nothing."

"I know when my apprentice is in trouble, Raventail." Bluestorm snarled at the warrior.

"He went this way!" Rosepelt called from the back of the patrol. Bluestorm had chosen Rosepelt to come because she was the best tracker in the clan. Bluestorm veered off in the direction Rosepelt had indicated and then she stopped dead as an unknown scent hit her.

"What is that stench?' Raventail yoweled.

"It must be what scared Mudpaw," Bluestorm answered, "now be quite and don't make me regret I brought you."

"Bluestorm, over here!" Ashclaw called out from behind an old oak tree. The patrol walked over to where Ashclaw was and gasped. Lying behind the oak tree, was Mudpaw's body, torn and covered in blood.


There's my second installment! Tell me what you think! Flowerheart.