Wow guys, I'm really sorry about the wait. I fully expected to get this done earlier, but the chapter kind of took off, and I didn't foresee it being so hard to write. Probably due to all the negative emotions that needed to be expressed for the plot to advance. Still though, SO. MUCH. FEELS. But hopefully the longest chapter I've written yet will (somewhat) pacify you all (nearly 3x longer than the first chapter!).

Okay, I get to shut up, you get to read! After these though:

Disclaimer: I don't own Pokemon period, let alone X or Y.

WARNING: Crude and explicit language ahead, both in English and French, in case you're opposed to such language.


"Whatever you do, you need courage. Whatever course you decide upon, there is always someone to tell you that you are wrong. There are always difficulties arising that tempt you to believe your critics are right. To map out a course of action and follow it to an end requires some of the same courage that a soldier needs. Peace has its victories, but it takes brave men and women to win them." -Ralph Waldo Emerson


Chapter 2: So Where Does This Leave Us?

It had been a crazy day.

Was it really just yesterday that Calem had been in Dendemille Town, getting ready to cross Route 17? Apparently after he arrived in Anistar City, defeated Serena, and went to sleep, everything had gone to hell.

First he was woken up by a Holo Caster call from Gurkinn way too early in the morning. The old man had completely ignored Calem's frazzled question of how he had gotten ahold of him, frantically shouting that Korrina had disappeared. Barely awake, Calem had done his best to reassure him that he would be on the lookout for her before hanging up and rolling over to get as much sleep as he could salvage.

After he had woken up, he had called his friends and Professor Sycamore, informing them of Korrina's absence. Strangely, Serena hadn't picked up; Calem wondered if she was upset with him for some reason. Lucario, perhaps sensing something was wrong with his former Trainer, had been restless and shifty all day. He had challenged the Anistar City Gym and Olympia, the Gym Leader, where he won the Psychic Badge after a rather... eye-opening battle.

Pretty much right after he had stepped out of the Gym, Lysandre had appeared on everyone's Holo Caster, declaring to everyone that they were going to die in order to "return the world to a beautiful, natural state." Naturally, there had been a bit of a panic around the region, and Calem knew he had to do something to stop his mad plan.

So he had flown back to Lysandre Cafe, since it was basically the only lead he had, only to discover an entire Team Flare lab hidden beneath it. He had defeated Lysandre himself and explored the entire effing lab, running into Sina and Dexio (seriously, who did they think they were fooling in those masks?), defeated all the Scientists in his hunt for the Elevator Key, encountered a 3000 year old king who just let Lysandre take the key to the ultimate weapon from his neck, heard his backstory, and followed Lysandre to command center for the activation of the ultimate weapon. Lysandre left, giving him the chance to stop Team Flare's ambitions right then and there- as soon as he beat the last Scientist, Xerosic. Given the choice of two buttons, one red, one blue, one that would activate the ultimate weapon and one that would disable it, Calem deduced that the blue button would disable the weapon since Team Flare was all about red. He pressed it and was proven right, disabling the weapon and saving the world once and for all against Lysandre and Team Flare's evil ambitions.

Honestly, Calem would've been more than happy to end the day right there.

But the weirdly pale and strangely red-haired fucker had decided to doom the world (again), activating the ultimate weapon with a remote, completely disregarding his boss's promise, and, as if he wasn't crazy enough already, claiming it was a victory for science. Honestly, if Calem hadn't been so pressed for time to get to Geosenge Town to stop Team Flare again, he probably would've had Charizard eat him.

Remembering where the Team Flare Grunt had just disappeared during his last visit to the town, Calem had rushed inside the secret headquarters, where Lysandre had apologized to him for Xerosic but gave him another shpeal about how humanity was dooming the world and he must reset it. After defeating the Team Flare Boss for the second time, Lysandre had told him he was too late, inviting him, with an odd glint in his eye, down to the basement where a strange giant dark cocoon was being kept. But even then the man had lied, sending teams of Admins and accompanying Grunts to stop him.

And Serena still had not appeared.

Calem ran past the defeated figures of the Team Flare admin and his Grunt lackey, his ever-faithful Greninja following him as his Trainer desperately tried to heal his Pokemon while racing down the stairs of the Team Flare Secret Headquarters. That had been the third pair of Flare members that had tried to stop him from getting to the room with the dark cocoon, the power source for the ultimate weapon. Honestly, Calem didn't know why they were trying to stop him; they were clearly outmatched, especially since he had defeated their boss.

"Merde!" Calem swore as he felt around in his bag's medicine compartment, feeling nothing. He barely spoke any French, but Serena had made sure that some of the first words she had taught him were cusses. Needless to say, his mother had not been happy.

But in this situation, the foul language was entirely justified; Calem had just used up the last of his medicinal supplies healing his Pokemon after that third Double Battle. He wished someone (a certain someone, in fact) was with him, able to help him take on the Flare lackeys, but he was alone, and he had nothing left. Once his Pokemon fainted he'd have to restore them in the Pokemon Center. But since he was in the middle of Team Flare's base, he would be completely helpless.

Dammit, I knew I should have picked up more supplies in Anistar City! Calem thought angrily. And in Dendemille Town... and in Laverre City...

Calem flinched in surprise as a computer voice boomed out suddenly. "THE POWER LEVEL FOR THE ULTIMATE WEAPON IS AT 40 PERCENT AND RISING STEADILY. I REPEAT, THE POWER LEVEL FOR THE ULTIMATE WEAPON IS AT 40 PERCENT AND RISING STEADILY."

It must be keeping track of the amount of power it's sucking from that cocoon, the sixteen year-old thought grimly. If it's rising steadily, that means I need to hurry!

He moved even faster down the steps, almost falling once as he rounded the corner. Why the hell are there so many stairs? And where is Serena? She must've seen Lysandre's Holo Caster message; I thought she would be here to help me stop Team Flare!

Eventually they skidded to a stop in front of the end of the line: a giant red door with the orange Team Flare logo on it and an electronic lock. Curiously, the door was already opened wide enough for a person to walk through. Calem felt a chill run down his spine; it felt like it was waiting for him.

"THE POWER LEVEL FOR THE ULTIMATE WEAPON IS AT 45 PERCENT AND RISING STEADILY. I REPEAT, THE POWER LEVEL FOR THE ULTIMATE WEAPON IS AT 45 PERCENT AND RISING STEADILY."

Calem took a deep breath and cautiously stepped through the ominously opened door, followed closely by Greninja. His eyes were immediately drawn to the black and red machine on which perched the dark cocoon. Five strange wires were connected to the machine from the ceiling, pulsating with red light as they transported the stolen energy up into the ultimate weapon. Underneath another Team Flare symbol, a button glowed with blue light; the boy was immediately able to guess what it did.

Actually, this was all in the background for Calem as his eyes zeroed in on a figure standing halfway between him and the machine, back turned to him. A figure with blonde hair in a ponytail that fell down to her back, a black sleeveless shirt, red skirt, and black leggings. A figure that looked a lot like-

"Serena!" Calem called, making her turn around. He noted the new black pendant with a small red stone around her neck before focusing on the task at hand. "I'm pretty sure that blue button will stop it!"

But the girl did nothing but look at him with an unreadable expression, a tiny and mysterious smile creasing her lips.

An icy chill was born in the pit of his stomach and started to crawl upwards. "What're you waiting for?" he demanded. "Push the button!" The girl kept smiling her strange, bittersweet smile at him, eyes beginning to tear up. The icy feeling had reached his chest, but he stubbornly clung to denial. "Serena!" he shouted desperately, trying to breathe past the ice in his lungs as it crawled up to its neck. A tear slid slowly, meticulously down her cheek. Seeing it, he swallowed, feeling the ice in his throat. "Serena..." it came out as a plea. "The button. Please..." His eyes swam with tears as the ice he finally acknowledged as fear reached them.

"THE POWER LEVEL FOR THE ULTIMATE WEAPON IS AT 50 PERCENT AND RISING STEADILY. I REPEAT, THE POWER LEVEL FOR THE ULTIMATE WEAPON IS AT 50 PERCENT AND RISING STEADILY."

The girl sniffed quietly, blinking away the rest of her tears. "No, Calem," she said, her voice quiet yet resolute.

"Why...?" he whispered, not entirely sure if he wanted to know the answer as denial melting away to confusion and despair. "Why would you do this? How could you do this! How could you do this to the world? How could you do this to us, your friends?" He lowered his head, hiding his face, and his next words were nearly inaudible. "How could you do this to me?"

"You don't understand," Serena answered just as quietly, her heart paining her as she looked at him.

Calem looked back up at her, tears trickling down his face. "Then help me understand," he begged. "Please."

Nobody spoke for a short time as Calem wiped away his tears and Serena desperately tried not to cry.

"I just want what all people want," she finally answered softly with a heartbreaking smile. "I want people to stop meaningless fights. I want people to be able to share. I want to get rid of rage, hatred, spite, revenge, sadness, envy, and jealousy in people. I want to save people from themselves." She hesitated for a split second before admitting quietly, "I want to save you, Calem."

Calem's mind reeled from her stunning yet heartfelt proclamation. She wanted to save... him? Mind detached from reality, he heard himself say, "Save me? I... still don't understand..."

"Calem... you and I suffer from all those negative emotions too," Serena admitted hesitantly. "That's the reason why..." She looked away and the boy realized instantly what she was trying to say.

"That's why you joined Team Flare," he breathed. Serena shifted uncomfortably, refusing to meet his eyes. "So you could... save me?" As he spoke, another stroke of insight hit him. "I was the one to drive you to this, wasn't I?" he asked, feeling his heart crack. Greninja made a pacifying noise behind him, but Calem was too focused on Serena to hear it. "How?" he whispered.

She finally looked back up with tears in her eyes. "I was so jealous," she said, her voice just above a whisper. "When you won the Mega Ring, all I could think about for a while after was how I deserved that Ring since it had been my dream since I had been a little girl. How I had been assured that I would get the Ring." Her voice turned scornful as her tears escaped their prison once more. "I was so ashamed I lost to a newbie Trainer who had never heard of Mega Evolution before and had only been in the region for a few months! It had to be a fluke, that it was a mistake." She locked eyes with him. "I hated you," she stated shamefully. "But then I realized that I was being so unfair to you; you had won fair and square, and entirely deserved the Ring. I just... you had the strength and the bonds with your Pokemon to beat me, and I understood that you deserved the Ring more than I did."

Calem tensed at her compliments and self-defeating words; he could just feel the storm that was about to be unleashed. Beside him, Greninja's eyes narrowed.

"It wasn't exactly easy to ignore my jealousy," Serena continued. "I just remembered how you treat your Pokemon and your strength and values. But I never forgot my childhood dream and my envy never really left."

Her voice hardened. "But I couldn't repress my jealousy the next time you battled me. Remember? In Coumarine City?" He nodded, unable to talk past the icy lump in his throat. "You annihilated my entire party with your Mega Lucario." Her words had turned ice-cold, much like the fear in his body. "After I left, all I could think about was the Mega Ring's power and how I was this close to obtaining its power." Her eyes had started to look almost crazy before she blinked. "The I realized how stupid I was acting, and I cried for an hour over my selfishness." She looked at him. "Congratulations Calem," she said sadly. "You're the only guy to ever make me cry."

Calem wanted to throw up; that was one of the last things he ever wanted to hear her say. And he had only made it worse in their subsequent battles without realizing it. "Serena-"

"THE POWER LEVEL FOR THE ULTIMATE WEAPON IS AT 55 PERCENT AND RISING STEADILY. I REPEAT, THE POWER LEVEL FOR THE ULTIMATE WEAPON IS AT 55 PERCENT AND RISING STEADILY."

"Then later at Route 14, I was so ready to face you," she continued after the computer interrupted him, her eyes fixed on a point over his head. She knew that if she looked at him, met his eyes, she would completely break down right then and there. "We'd never trained so intently before, and I was confident we would finally be able to match you in a battle." Her eyes lowered to the ground once again. "At least Chesnaught was able to defeat Mega Lucario. But Gardevoir..." She looked back up at him, tears swimming in her eyes. "You're something else, you know that?" she whispered. "You're a prodigy Trainer. The kind that... that I had hoped to be."

If possible, Calem felt even worse.

Calem opened his mouth to say something, anything, but once again, the girl rushed on before he could make a sound. "For the first time, I didn't just feel envious. I felt... despair. Like nothing I could do could ever match what you did. That you would always be better than me, so why do I even try?" She bit her lip and closed her eyes to keep the tears from escaping. "I felt... worthless."

Calem's eyes widened incredulously. As long as he had known her, Serena had always felt that she was destined for greatness, and refused to be beaten down by any flak she received for it. If she was feeling worthless, that meant she had hit rock bottom. He had put her there. For him to make her feel that bad, low enough for her to question that... he wasn't sure if he deserved to be her friend anymore. But he'd be damned if he didn't try some damage control. "Serena-"

"THE POWER LEVEL FOR THE ULTIMATE WEAPON IS AT 60 PERCENT AND RISING STEADILY. I REPEAT, THE POWER LEVEL FOR THE ULTIMATE WEAPON IS AT 60 PERCENT AND RISING STEADILY."

Calem would happily kill the computer voice if given the opportunity.

"Of course, I managed to bounce back," she continued with a ghost of a smile. She wanted to tell him everything, explain how she had ended up opposing him before he started to protest and shred her meager defenses. It was funny how her walls had only one flaw, and that flaw stood before her, challenging her dream once more. Maybe that was their fate.

If so, fate was une salope.

"We trained twice as hard as last time; we knew that you would be pushing yourself and your Pokemon to your limits, so we did the same. I was so desperate to catch up to you, to prove that I was worthy of being your rival, I fell asleep in the middle of a training session a few times," she admitted.

"I was so confident in our ability to keep up with you... I felt sure that this battle wouldn't turn out like all the others, that even if you had evolved Lucario, or even Charizard, we would've stood a chance." She hung her head, hiding her face from him yet again. "So then, when we lost so bad..." Her shoulders shook with her tears despite the effort she was making to not cry. "I thought," she gasped out, "that maybe you... you would never feel the same way. That... I... I would be nothing... nothing more than your next-door neighbor... who would never amount to nothing to you!"

She looked back up at him, surprising him with the anger flashing through her watery eyes. "And the worst part is that you kept doing it! Not only did you take my childhood dream from me and keep beating me, you did all with Mega Evolution! That's the only reason you won so handily! Do you know how much it hurt to keep being destroyed by Mega Evolution, and only Mega Evolution?! No you don't! You don't have to face anyone who can Mega Evolve!" Her gaze sharpened to the point where he could almost feel it cutting through him despite the water in her eyes she was desperately trying to stop from falling. "But that's not even the worst part. The worst part is that you would do it every time we battled! It was as if..." she swallowed hard before continuing, her voice slightly weaker than before, "... as if you wanted to show off your victory for the Mega Ring and rub it in my face that I lost! That you were mocking me for taking my dream! What goes through your head when we battle? 'Oh look, it's Serena. I'll battle her and Mega Evolve to shove it in her face!' Putain!" At this point her attempts to keep from crying had failed and the tears dripped unrestrained down her face. She turned away slightly, giving a small sniffle.

Calem just looked at her, face pale, mouth opened slightly, tears falling slowly from his eyes. He had no idea she had felt all this and bottled it all up inside. He would have moved towards her if he could; hell, if he could he would've embraced her, reassured her that she was the best Trainer he had ever encountered, begged for her forgiveness.

But the ice had spread throughout his entire body and he couldn't blink, let alone move. His mouth was dry, but he couldn't swallow. He longed to comfort her, to tell her she was far more to him than just his rival, but her words, her shocking and unexpected words, had fried his brain.

How could he have put her through all this? She had channeled her previous dream, the one he had stolen, into challenging him, mistakenly thinking that he didn't see her as a worthy rival, an equal. And he had destroyed her each time, only for her to jump back with a smile on her face. He hadn't even thought about how she might feel when he Mega Evolved, but he never imagined she would feel this bad. He had underestimated the depths of her feelings when she appeared to shake off the loss of opportunity for the Mega Ring with a smile, but when he thought back on it now, he noticed her smile had been very, very strained. When they battled, he had always felt the odd twinge of guilt when he defeated her, but now that he knew it was just a facade to mask her conflicting emotions and despair, he felt like the worst scum on the face of the earth.

He knew it was serious when he was calling himself worse than Team Flare. At least Lysandre hadn't continuously destroyed his best friend's dreams. Relentlessly over and over again.

Greninja put a reassuring hand on his shoulder, giving him the strength to pull himself together enough to speak. Finally finding his voice, he rasped past the ice in his throat, "Serena-"

"THE POWER LEVEL FOR THE ULTIMATE WEAPON IS AT 65 PERCENT AND RISING STEADILY. I REPEAT, THE POWER LEVEL FOR THE ULTIMATE WEAPON IS AT 65 PERCENT AND RISING STEADILY."

If Calem didn't know better he would swear the computer was doing this on purpose.

Serena wasn't trying to hide the tears running down her cheeks anymore. "It hurt, Calem," she whispered pathetically. "It still hurts. Every time I look at or even think of you, I'm reminded how much you hurt me- how much you're still hurting me. I never... I never thought you would hurt me like this! I never though my..." she trailed off. "I didn't think that-" she cut herself off again as she burst out into sobs, hiding her face in her hands. Not only had he crushed or stolen her dreams, seemingly mocked her for her tainted dreams, made her question her self-worth, and cry, now she was full-blown sobbing. All because of him. Honestly, he didn't know which of those things he had done to her was the worst.

Summoning all his will, he took a step forward. "Serena," he began in a cracked voice, pausing for an instant to check if the computer would cut him off for the fourth time. She reluctantly looked at him through crying eyes and the the cracks of her fingers, drawn by the bitterness, pain, and self-deprecation in that one word. His heart ached at the sight.

The traitorous part of Serena's mind ruled by her feelings noticed that he had never sounded so terrible, not even when he had caught strep throat at home and could barely speak.

"I... I didn't know," he whispered desperately. "I never knew how you felt... not about the Ring or our battles." He lowered his head in shame. "I... I never noticed. What kind of friend doesn't notice when he's hurting his best friend?" He took a long, shaky breath. "I'm sorry Serena," he whispered solemnly. "I'm so, so, so sorry that I hurt you, that I was tormenting you, that I never noticed you were being hurt." He closed his eyes, squeezing them shut in a futile attempt to stop crying. "I can't forgive myself for... for hurting you like this. I'm not... I can't ask for your forgiveness, but just know... I never wanted any of this to happen. I never would've used Mega Evolution against you if I had just known about all the pain you were struggling with."

"THE POWER LEVEL FOR THE ULTIMATE WEAPON IS AT 70 PERCENT AND RISING STEADILY. I REPEAT, THE POWER LEVEL FOR THE ULTIMATE WEAPON IS AT 70 PERCENT AND RISING STEADILY."

He managed to stand up straight, taking a deep breath to steady his nerves and resolve before opening his eyes determinedly. "But if you insist on standing in front of that machine and keeping me from preventing mass genocide, then you're no better than Lysandre, a man who wishes to rule a lie and is more than willing to kill the vast majority of the world's population!"

Her eyes widened. "Calem, please!" she pleaded. "Just think! We would live in a utopia, no negative emotions to rule or destroy us!"

"You can't seriously expect me to believe that the 'sacrifice' of most of the world would be for the greater good!" he fired back. "C'est des conneries! And what about Pokemon? They'll be wiped out almost to extinction too!" His eyes, suddenly blazing with fire, bore into her. "Your corruption is blinding you! I don't get is how the strongest person I know can be twisted into believing Team Flare's shit! That 'clean slate' you're working towards? It won't be clean, cause you'll have all the blood of the people that were murdered to get this 'utopia' on your hands!"

"Ta Gueule!" Serena latched onto a vein of fury and exploded back at him, momentarily reverting back to French in her anger. "You don't know anything! I'm corrupted? You want to know why I accepted his offer and agreed to safeguard his dream? It was for you, you moron! So that I could save you from your destructive emotions! You'd given me plenty of reasons to think you'd fallen to them and frankly, I'm surprised at your blindness to see it yourself!"

Her words rattled him worse than anything she had previously said, but he was able to keep his composure (sort of; they both had tears sliding down their faces). "I'm not blind! Don't you remember just a few minutes ago when you told me and I felt like a giant ass? At least I was able to see it in time! But you, not only do you not see what's twisting you, you refuse to see! You blindly follow a complete lunatic like one of his red-wearing Grunt buffoons!"

"He gave me a promise!" she shouted back.

"He's lied to me at least twice today and who-knows how many other times to other people!" he countered, focusing completely on his frustration and anger. He wasn't sure if he would be able to keep himself from falling apart if he didn't. "But I'm sure he'll definitely honor a promise he made to you!"

"He agreed to spare you!" she shrieked at him. "That was my one condition, that he would spare you and Shauna and Trevor and Tierno and our families!"

"THE POWER LEVEL FOR THE ULTIMATE WEAPON IS AT 75 PERCENT AND RISING STEADILY. I REPEAT, THE POWER LEVEL FOR THE ULTIMATE WEAPON IS AT 75 PERCENT AND RISING STEADILY."

He sucked in a breath, refusing to be rattled by her admission about saving him. "That's not it Serena! You really expect me to believe you would you join a crime syndicate hellbent on world domination so you could keep us alive? I know you! I know you have an ulterior goal, so what the fuck could be so important to you that would make you go to such extremes?"

"Because of that!" she yelled, pointing to his wrist.

Calem glanced down, face paling as he realized what she meant. "You don't mean..."

"That's right," Serena answered as both their tear ducts refused to dry. "The Mega Ring. Such an innocent power, capable of the worst kind of longing in people, yet able to be abused so easily by the people who wield it."

"Serena..." Once again, she had completely stunned him. "You would hand over the world for Mega Evolution?!"

"So it could be shared!" Serena defended. "So that nobody would have to feel the despair and pain that I've felt, that I'm feeling right now! So maybe it's a completely selfish wish, and honestly I don't blame you for thinking terribly of me, but at least no one will know my same pain! It can be shared, and the envy it invokes can be pacified!"

Calem just stared at her before shaking his head slowly. "I don't know if I should be more impressed with the extremes you're going to to see this pan out or disgusted by the fact that you're just letting this happen! Serena, you're willing to kill countless people all because you were jealous of the fact I could Mega Evolve?! That's so fucked up! That doesn't justify genocide! Lysandre's twisted your mind; you're not thinking straight!"

"Shut up! You don't understand!" Serena screamed at him, unconsciously slipping into French as tears continued falling from her eyes. "You don't understand what it's like, having these feelings! You don't understand what it feels like to be crushed under the weight of your own inferiority complex because your cr... best friend put you there himself! You don't understand how much it hurts, knowing you, you of all people, was the one that hurt me! You don't know how much I want to hate you for it, which hurts! But I can't, and that hurts too! And you don't know how much I hate myself for going through with this, but it's the best way for people to understand my pain and why it needs to be destroyed!"

"I don't understand French!" Calem shouted back. Despite the language barrier though, he could easily pick out her pain and, surprisingly, her self-loathing in her tone. Greninja looked at them worriedly.

For a while, the only sound was the teenagers' sniffles as Serena desperately dashed the tears from her eyes and stifled the sobs that kept rising in her throat and Calem wiped his eyes. Eventually Serena spoke. "It doesn't matter," she said sadly in English, her voice slightly choked. "If you insist on destroying the machine, then I must oppose you. I can't let you impede my goal! If you wish to crush my dream once more and stop the ultimate weapon, you must get past me, la dernière ligne de défense pour le rêve de Lysandre!" She pulled out a Pokeball, waiting for his response.

"Still don't understand French!" Calem called as he waved Greninja forward. He gritted his teeth, determined to get his Serena back. Because this wasn't his Serena, not really. His Serena was strong and independent, with an indomitable will and refusing to be beaten into submission by anyone. The person in front of him was a crushed shell of her, broken by him and corrupted by Lysandre for his own ends. He had to undo the damage he caused, otherwise he had no right to call her his friend. He had no choice; he needed to defeat her in yet another Pokemon battle, despite the fact that the last one they'd had had caused her to side with a pack of extremists. But this time it would be different. Calem would make sure of it.

Today was the worst day of Calem's life, and he had a bad feeling it would get even worse, but he would do his damnedest to make sure that the next one was better. For himself, Serena, and the world, even if he had to fight the girl who was his neighbor, best friend, rival, and crush to do it.


French translations:

Merde!= Shit!

une salope= a bitch

Putain!= Fuck! *This is an interesting word. According to my research, "putain" means "whore," but can be, and is often, used like "fuck" is in English.*

C'est des conneries!= That's bullshit!

Ta Gueule!= Shut the fuck up!

la dernière ligne de défense pour le rêve de Lysandre!= the last line of defense for Lysandre's dream!

Serena's little rant at the end didn't get translated because I didn't feel like making you read the entire rant in French then have to check here to even understand it. Just making it easier for you all.

I didn't just rely on Google Translate for these translations (you might be surprised how many web sites are dedicated to French swear words), but they may still not be necessarily 100% accurate. It would actually be great if someone who can speak French could be a translator for this story. If anyone sees a translation error or is interested in becoming a translator, please send me a PM.


Hey, you made it to the end of the chapter! Congratulations!

Something I've noticed with the "Rival turns to the dark side" stories I've seen is that it's always Serena who turns. I don't think I've seen a single story where Calem becomes the bad guy. I don't know about you guys, but I find that fascinating.

I may have likened the Mega Ring to another mysterious artifact from another franchise a little much. It wasn't intentional when I first started writing the chapter, I assure you. I also got the idea for the computer telling the power level from another Pokemon game.

So Calem's pissed, Serena appears to have gone off the deep end, they both can't stop crying, emotions are all over the place, and there may be an overdose of angst in this chapter... Yeah, I think I may have overdid it with all the angst. This whole chapter was nothing but a giant angst-fest. Which made it surprisingly hard to write. I think I may have gone off the slippery slope with the angst, but... well, this chapter was pieced together one part at a time, often going back and adding in more angst (as if there wasn't enough already) to earlier places.

I also wasn't originally going to do the quote at the beginning either, but I stumbled across this one and thought, "Yeah, I'll make that a thing now."

Now, my reply to Mahogany Hermit, Chapter 1's singleton anonymous reviewer: Hey, thanks for the support! I must admit, I'd love to know what your idea(s) may be- maybe after the story's finished you could share them?

If you stuck around long enough to be reading this line, Je ne peux pas vous remercier assez (this one's directly from Google Translate). Hopefully I didn't do too badly with this one. I always want to know what you guys think about my writing, and those button that says "Review" will let you do just that! Just leave my family out of it, okay?