[Hayes' Farm]

Tamara helped Thomas finish their work on the farm very quickly. They had to bring out feed for the horses, slop for the hogs, plenty to eat for the goats and then they would saddle a few horses and lead the cows out to graze on the grass for a few hours. Thomas' family owned one of the largest farms in the state of Virginia. Nearly two thousand acres of land with rich soil perfect for their crops. The Hayes family made a great deal of money by growing corn, potatoes, wheat and grain which they would harvest during the summer once it was time as they did every year. They also raised their own cattle, horses, goats, alpacas, pigs, chickens, ducks, geese and turkeys which meant they could sell lots of fine farm raised meat, eggs, cheese and milk sold in stores statewide.

Once the cattle were led out to graze, Thomas and Tamara would return to the house for something cold to drink and a small snack before they'd resume work. They both helped Pa and the girls out with brushing the horses. The Hayes had nearly two dozen horses and it was important to brush them regularly to keep their coats clean and to clean out under their hooves too. Thomas and Pa would then move onto shoveling shit out of the stables while Tamara helped Francis and Diana with all the chickens, ducks, geese and turkeys. They had to add plenty of feed to their bins and some clean water too while they collected eggs from their coops. Once all that was done, Thomas would meet back up with Tamara and the both of them would saddle horses and ride out to the fields again.

Herding the cattle was tricky. You had to keep them moving or they would simply stop and start grazing again but if you just rode into them they could start scattering and then you'd have to waste time trying to round them up and get the heard moving again. Plus the Hayes had over six dozen cows and they were both the only two riding out there at that moment so it could make things challenging when trying to keep the herd moving as a whole. But they managed and soon, all the cattle were led to stalls where one by one, they were hooked up to the milking machines and given some more feed to keep them where they were at. Pa offered to handle it from here so they were both free to go to the city if they wanted but he wanted them back home in time for dinner.

The both of them headed up to their rooms to freshen up before heading back down to the truck. Thomas had two prized vehicles he got. He owned a Dodge Pickup Truck and a Harley Davidson Motorcycle. Thomas worked on both of them constantly, doing his own tuneups and oil changes. One of the things he wanted to do when he graduated was to work as a mechanic part time while he remained on the farm helping out his family. He figured that he'd be able to bring in a little extra money to help out if he was able to open up his own shop and work on people's cars and trucks. Once the both of them were ready, Thomas opened the passenger seat door and let Tamara in first before he walked around to the other side and got into the driver's seat and started his truck.

"So where are we going today Master?" Tamara asked smiling excitedly as she buckled her seat belt.

"There's a really sweet outdoor mall in Richmond I enjoy going to from time to time." he replied as he was checking his mirrors. "They have a very nice selection of restaurants and shops that I think you might like." he said with a grin.

"Alright!" she cheered. "Let's go to the big city and go on our date!" she beamed.

Thomas kept backing up but his eye twitched when he heard that. "This isn't a date Tammy Darlin. It's a Social Studies Field Trip." he replied.

"But we're going out together right?' she asked smiling.

"Yeah." he answered.

"Just you and me right?" she asked as well.

"...Yeah." he answered seeing where she was going with this.

"And we're going to a shopping mall to check out various stores, get something to eat and have fun right?" she asked smiling with her tail wagging behind her.

Thomas realized there was no winning this. "That's the plan." he told her.

"It's a date!" she cheered.

Thomas hung his head in defeat but figured it wouldn't be so bad if she called it a date. It's not like they were doing anything illegal. "Okay Tammy Darlin, it's a date." he said with a smile.

"Let's go!" she urged and pointed forward towards the driveway.

Thomas drove forward up the driveway towards the road and along the way, he was about to pass his sisters. He started rolling down his window because it looked like Francis wanted to say something.

"Yeah?' he asked her.

"You two headed to the capital?" she asked.

"That's the plan." he replied.

"Have fun then." said Diana.

"But not too much fun Thomas." said Francis with a smirk. "Remember, the laws say no Hanky Panky so behave little mister." she told her older brother.

Thomas' eye twitched again. "I had no intentions to anything of the sort." he protested.

"Oh Franny, a girl can only dream." said Tamara with a dreamy expression.

Both his sisters started laughing when Thomas banged his head against the steering wheel. "We're not having an affair." he protested. "I'm taking her to the mall, we're gonna check out some stores, get something to eat for lunch, probably play some games at the arcade and then come home." he told them.

"Sounds very nice Tommy. Sounds just like the sort of thing you do on a date." Francis said with another smirk.

Thomas let out a sigh and started rolling up his window. His sisters laughed as he drove off, getting onto the road and heading off to Richmond.

"Hey Franny?" Diana asked her sister.

"Yeah?" she asked back.

"Do you reckon Tommy and Tammy will have one baby at a time like most humans do or litters of puppies like dogs after they're married?" she asked.

"I reckon we'll have to wait and see." she replied with another smirk. "Now come on, let's get back to the house and get something cold to drink. It's hot out here.' she told her.

Thomas' family lived about a county away from Richmond so it was probably a good fifteen to twenty minutes before they'd leave behind the farmland and enter more civilized parts of the state. The fields would shortly disappear and they'd be driving through the more suburban territory before they'd reach the city itself. It wouldn't take long at all before traffic got a little heavier and they saw tall buildings like the ones in most American cities. They would pass by landmarks and other sights as they drove and would have to stop at a red light half the time whenever they were coming up to a four way intersection. Richmond wasn't a massive city like New York or Boston, but it was still very impressive to those who came to visit. And it still had that southern charm to it.

The trip was enjoyable. Tamara was telling her host how she wanted him to show her around and visit all their stores, buy some new cloths and souvenirs and try out some more new and "exotic" food with him. When she said that it really helped Thomas put that sort of thing into perspective because Tamara was from another land entirely so America must have seemed like a very strange, foreign and exotic place from her point of view. As they made their way through the city, she was barely able to keep seated and was looking out the window excitedly like a little kid with her tail wagging happily behind her. One thing that caught her attention was a statue of a man on a horse which was positioned high up on a marble pillar for everyone to see. She finally looked to Thomas to ask him about it.

"Is he someone important?" she asked him.

Thomas took a quick glance and smiled before answering. "That's an old monument dedicated to a hero from the Civil War era. That is General Robert E. Lee of the Army of Northern Virginia." he told her.

"Oh, I think I remember you mentioning him once. You said he was one of the greatest of American Generals right?' she asked.

"And one of the greatest Virginians too." he said with a smile. "Just like George Washington, he was one of my favorite historical figures when I was growing up." he explained.

"What kind of man was he?" she asked smiling.

"The model of a true American hero. A Patriot, a Soldier and a Gentleman.' he answered.

Thomas found a good spot to park before he and his charge got out. From where they were, the mall was a good ten minute walk from the parking lot. Tamara purposely reached over to grab hold of his arm and she remained clinging to her favorite human. He smiled at her, but really wished she wouldn't treat this like a date. They weren't supposed to be courting each other, he was supposed to help her adjust and integrate into American society. But Tamara was so clingy and often times very horny too. She was constantly trying to gain his attention and his affections that he sometimes wondered if she wasn't really interested in the Iterspecies Exchange Program. He knew she liked the U.S., but she seemed to be more interested in getting him to be her boyfriend.

[Flashback]

Not long after his family agreed to let Tamara stay with them, Miss Victoria sat down and spoke with Thomas in private. "Now my Dear, there are several very important rules for both the host family and the exchange students to follow." she began. "First and foremost is that neither Humans nor Interspecies are permitted to do harm to one another. We've made great strides in bringing the two societies together but we're not quiet there. It's important that both species are able to live their lives freely as fellow citizens of the U.S. to the point of normalcy. That's why one of the most important jobs you'll have my Dear is taking Tamara out on dates-I mean Cultural Exchange Social Studies Field Trips. It's important that she sees what day to day life is like for average Americans and it's the responsibility of the hosts to support and help them as they integrate." she explained.

"But isn't that the job of her Coordinator?' he asked with a raised brow.

"Of course not." she lied while waving him off. "Besides, Tamara would probably like you showing her around the State than me anyways." she added. "To the point, if you take her out on these trips, you'll be responsible for her safety and her behavior." she told him before leaning in and glaring into his cyan eyes with her crimson red ones. "And you had better not even think about taking her to a hotel and start lovemaking." she warned.

"I WOULDN'T!" he shouted with a crimson red blush.

"You say that now, but healthy young teenagers get into all sorts of troubles when you leave them alone and bear in mind that those girls can be very frisky." she smirked. "In the meantime, you two have fun and stay safe." she then said with her trademark grin.

[End Flashback]

Tamara's eyes lit up when she and her host entered the grounds. "Wow! Master this place looks amazing!" she beamed looking left and right. "There are so many neat shops here, I don't know where to start!" she told him.

"Well we're gonna be here for at least a few hours, let's walk around for a bit and if we see a store that looks interesting we'll drop on in." he suggested.

"Found one!" she responded. "Look, this Sports Center now has clothes and gear for Interspecies so let's check it out!" she told him as she took him by the arm and was practically dragging him.

"Hey! No need to pull Tammy Darlin!" he tried protesting as they entered the store together.

The both of them were browsing for a good thirty minutes and seeing what was on sale. Thomas was pretty impressed to see a large selection of sporting goods suitable for non human customers. There were items that could be used by both humans and non humans too mind you but there were some items meant specifically for those who's bodies were drastically different from humans. There were training and running clothes for centaurs for instance and there were sports shirts for those who had more than just one pair of arms and some cloths and equipment were so large that you had to be at least ten feet tall to use them. He'd look over from time to time to see Tamara acting like a kid in a candy store. Tamara loved sports, especially any sports that involved balls.

At one point though, she did disappear and he looked around wondering where she went. "Tammy Darlin?" he asked looking left and right.

"Hey Master, what do you think of this?" she asked him from behind. Thomas turned to see her wearing some new clothes. A soccer uniform which was a pair of blue short shorts and a yellow shirt with a green stripe. "Do you like it? I only want to get the outfits you love the most." she said smiling and with a wink.

"I think it actually looks very good on you." he replied smiling which got her tail wagging. "Clearly you know how to match colors that work very nicely." he added.

"Great." she beamed. "Then give a few minutes, I have a few more outfits I wanna try on and show you." she said running into the changing room. "No peaking." she said once the door was closed, although secretly wishing he would trying stealing a quick peak. She came out again this time in a tennis uniform with a blue skirt and white sleeveless top which hugged her body tightly. "How about this one?" she said bringing her hands behind her head and swaying her hips.

Thomas blushed a little at how it hugged her figure very nicely. "um, I think you look great." he said nervously.

"Alright, next outfit." she said before running into the changing room.

'I'll bet she's gonna try finding something even skimpier than that.' he thought as he started browsing again. 'No, give her the BOTD Thomas, she may like you but she's still a very decent young lady.' he thought grinning.

"Master, what about this one?" she asked sounding more sultry. Thomas looked behind again and blushed bright red again. Now she was wearing a one piece swimsuit and it hugged her body very tightly. It was red with white patterns decorating it. She once again struck a sexy pose and winked. "Do you like it?" she asked him. "I just want to wear something you find appealing for when we go swimming together." she told him.

Thomas did his best to remain calm but he did bring a hand up to his face because he started to have a nose bleed. "It, uh, definitely leaves a lot to the imagination Tammy Darlin." he confessed.

"I'll take that as a yes." she said with a smirk. "I got one last thing I need your opinion on." she said before skipping off to the changing room once more. Tammy smirked when she felt his eyes still on her body. She knew he was checking out her ass which was why she was swaying her hips.

'You've been wrong before Thomas, but it should be over now.' he said turning around and wiping the sweat from his brow. 'But she said she's got one last thing and I seriously doubt she'd try anything more revealing than that.' he said in his mind.

Seconds later, Tamara came up behind him one last time. "Master, I just need your opinion on one last change of clothes. He turned and nearly had a heart attack. She was wearing nothing but a very light blue pair of panties and a sports bra. "What do you think? I want your honest opinion Master." she told him.

"Tammy Darlin! We're in a public space! You can't walk around in nothing but your underwear! It's indecent!" he freaked.

"Indecent? So you don't like it?" she asked with her ears dropping.

"That's not what I said." he replied, trying to get her to put her clothes back on.

"So you do like them?" she asked with a smile and her tail wagging again.

"That's not what I'm saying either!" he protested before she charged in and pressed herself up against him with her tits squeezing up against his chest.

"But Master, I only wanna make you happy and pick out the clothes you like. Why is that such a bad thing?" she asked him hugging him closely to her.

"Tammy Darlin, I have no problem with that at all but there are rules and laws for public behavior and running around in a store in your underwear isn't appropriate." he told her blushing bright red.

"But how will I know if you like them if you can't see them Master?" she asked leaning in closer and closer. "I only wanna please you Master." she said now inches from his face.

"Um excuse me Sir? Miss?" they heard at the same time. Both of them turn to see a human woman and store attendant who looked at the odd couple. "I'm real sorry to interrupt but I think it's important that I remind you that you must remain fully clothed when in the store." she told them.

What was funny was Tamara wasn't embarrassed until after someone else saw her half naked. "Eeeeaaaak!" she shrieked before running back into the changing room.

'That was close.' Thomas thought with blood now leaking from both his nostrils. 'Tammy is very sweat but she needs to learn just a bit of self control.' he thought.

Tamara would buy all the clothes that she got from the store. She also got a brand new baseball bat and ball, a football and a frisbee to try out once they got back home on the farm. Her host promised that they would try them out once they both got back. One of the nice things about living on a farm was all the wide open space for playing. Tamara was a really outdoors kinda girl and wanted to play with Thomas and her family every chance she got. The both of them would walk the streets together for a short while and just look around. Over the years since interspecies people revealed their existence to the world, more and more have been immigrating to the U.S. and other western nations and joining the program by moving in with host families. Thomas saw many of all shapes and sizes while they walked.

"So what do you wanna do now Tammy Darlin?" he asked her.

"Any chances we could get something to eat? I am a little hungry." she she answered.

Thomas knew just the place to take her so they went to a restaurant called "Lucky's" which was a pretty decent burger joint. They entered and grabbed their seats and not long after a waitress came over to take their orders.

"I'd like the classic cheese burger with some onion rings, extra crispy if you will and with a coke." he ordered.

"And I'd like the double bacon burger with extra bacon, some of those curly fries and a pepsi." she requested after her host. Tamara loved bacon a lot and thought that bacon on steaks or cheese burgers was the best idea in the world.

Their waitress finished writing everything down and said she'd be back shortly before leaving Thomas alone with his charge once again. "So, do you like it here or what?" he asked her.

"Are you kidding me? I love it here." she said smiling with her tail wagging behind her like it did whenever she was really happy. "I've only been to Richmond a few times before and it's simply amazing. I could wonder the streets and visit all the shops and I don't think I'd even see a tenth of the city. So many new and exciting sights and smells." she commented.

"I'm glad you like it." he smiled. "And I hope you've been adjusting well with everyone back home." he told her.

"Absolutely." she replied. "When I first moved in, I was really nervous at first. I've met very few humans before coming to the United States. But everyone's been very welcoming and polite and I love your family Master. I feel like I've got a new family with them." she told him happily.

"I'm glad to hear it." he told her.

One of the really nice things about "Lucky's" was you didn't have to wait very long for your food. Within just a few minutes, their waitress returned with some trays that had their plates of food on em. Thomas took a bite of his cheese burger and was satisfied with how nice and hot it was. Tamara was glowing from the rick flavor of the bacon and beef patties of her burger.

"Applewood smoked bacon, my favorite." she said after swallowing her first bite. "I swear humans make some of the best food ever." she told him with a grin.

"Well just you wait for when Pa and I kill one of the hogs." he said before taking a sip of his coke. "You taste some of that bacon and it'll take your taste buds on a journey." he told her.

Once the both of them finished their meals and Thomas covered the bill, they took to the streets again and Tamara clung to his arm again like she did before. "So, are there any parks we can go to? I really wanna try out some of my new balls with you Master." she told him.

"I think we got some time to kill and there is a park close by so sure, let's toss around the old pigskin." he told her.

Thomas led her to a nice park and Tamara instantly fell in love with it. It was really nice and wide with plenty of room to go on long walks along the trails and wide open spaces to play sports. She was distracted at one point when she saw a human couple with their son on one of the playgrounds and for a fraction of a moment, her mind changed the scene she saw. Tamara saw an older and more mature version of Thomas, probably with a little facial hair and she saw herself with him looking older and more ladylike too. She saw them both playing with what she imagined what one of their sons looked like if they ever got together and he gave her the pups she wanted so badly. A little boy with the same hair and fur all over like her but his handsome father's cyan green eyes.

"Tammy Darlin, are you alright?" she heard which snapped her back into reality.

"Oh yes Master, I'm fine." she replied, thinking she really couldn't wait for the day she could have the family she dreamed of with her beloved human.

The both of them were about to start tossing around her new football when they noticed something going on not far off. A large crowd of people have gathered and from the sounds they heard the people looked angry.

"Master?" Tamara asked.

"Seems like something's going on." he told her and they both came in to investigate.

As they got closer to the scene, they noticed some of the people were holding picket signs and many of them looked really pissed off. Once they got close enough though, Thomas instantly knew what was going on. Standing on a platform in the middle of the park were thirty men and women in formation. They all wore black military uniforms and had their eyes hiding behind a pair of shades. Each of them wore a swastika armband on their left upper arms and a few of them carried crimson red flags with the swastika on it as well. It was even more insulting to see some of them carry the Star Spangled Banner too. As if they were both equal or something. The leader of this group wore an officer's hat and a cape draped over his shoulders. He shouted into a megaphone for everyone to hear.

"We are the National Socialist American Worker's Party!" he shouted into the megaphone. "We represent White America! The true America!" he shouted. "And today, we're here to protest against the Federal Government allowing Interspecies to immigrate to our proud nation!" he said loudly.

"Master, who are these guys?" asked Tamara looking a little disgusted in them.

"They're a Neo Nazi movement in the United States." he answered. "A racist hate group who believe in Ethno Nationalism and White Supremacy. There are several organizations like them in the U.S. but they're one of the loudest." he told her.

"I don't like them." she replied.

"Neither do I or any of the people here to protest them." he told her.

The Neo Nazis had over a hundred riot police surrounding them, preventing the counter protesters from getting any closer than what was permitted. It didn't take long at all before another group of counter protesters arrived. There were about a hundred guys clad in black with red bandana's covering their faces and shades concealing their eyes.

"Master, is that what I think it is?" Tamara asked as she saw them approaching.

They carried a flag that made Thomas even angrier than seeing the Nazi War Flag. It looked like a corrupted and perverted version of the Star Spangled Banner. Instead of the thirteen red and white stripes, it was thirteen red and black stripes. Red meaning Socialism and black meaning Totalitarianism. Instead of the blue in the upper corner it was yellow gold and instead of fifty white stars which stands for the fifty states, there was just one really large red star. In the middle of the star was a yellow gold Hammer and Sickle which symbolizes the Dictatorship of the Proletariat. These men were part of a neo socialist movement called the United Socialists of America. They referred to themselves as anti fascists which is highly ironic because they've proven to be more dangerous than the Nazis.

Now Tamara didn't know as much about the Nazis as she probably should have, but she was well aware of what the Communists were. When she was very little, her grandfather used to tell her stories about how he and their tribe led a secret resistance against the Bolsheviks and the Red Army. He told her how they would infiltrate the Gulags in the Soviet Union and described the horrors he witnessed there. Seeing the hammer and sickle made her feel really uneasy.

"We're here today to tell those freaks that they're not welcome here!" the Nazi commander continued as he shouted through his megaphone. "America is for humans only! You demihuman freaks are not welcome here! You will leave! We expect it! We demand it! SIEG HEIL!" he shouted before throwing his hand up in a Nazi salute.

His underlings then responded by all throwing their hands up too and started chanting "SIEG HEIL! SIEG HEIL! SIEG HEIL!" over and over.

"Hey! Who are they to say I have to leave!" Tamara shouted angrily as she started growling and marching forward.

"Tammy Darlin wait!" Thomas shouted as he stepped in quickly and putting himself between her and the Nazis. "What do you think you're doing?" he asked trying to hold her back.

"I'm heading up there to give that asshole a piece of my mind." she replied without really looking at him.

"Tammy Darlin you can't." he protested.

"Why not?" she asked looking at him, wondering why he would defend these jerks.

Just then, some whistles were blowing and a scuffle broke out between the police and the group of communists. When things settled down, three of the communists were cuffed and being taken away to police cars with their comrades chanting "Let them go! Let them go! Let them go!" but to no avail.

"I don't like them any more than you do Tammy Darlin, but we can't just go around assaulting people we don't like. I don't want you being deported because of those assholes." he told her. He thought back for a second to another conversation he had with Miss Victoria.

[Flashback]

"Remember my Dear, it is against the law for humans to harm interspecies students under any circumstances. Conversely, interspecies aren't permitted to harm humans either. If Tamara were to bring any bodily harm to any human, she would have to be deported immediately. Too bad, so sad but that's how it is." she smirked at him. "You keep her out of trouble now my Dear." she chimed.

[End Flashback]

Tamara just stood there while Thomas talked some more. "Look, I understand why you're angry and I'm sorry you have to put up with their bigotry, but if you were to go up there and hurt any of them, you will be deported." he told her.

She started shaking and even sniffled a bit. "That's not fair! What right do they have to say that I can't come here? I've spent a whole year learning English and worked really hard to be approved for the ICEP. They can't say those things to me, they don't have the right!" she shouted.

"I hate to say this Tammy Darlin, but they actually do." he replied which surprised her. "Whether they're Nazis or Communists, everyone has equal protection under the law and constitution. And freedom of speech in America is a protected right." he said before turning back to the Nazis. "No matter how boneheaded their opinions are." he said bitterly. He then looked back to see she was upset now. "Hey come on, let's go home and put this all behind us." he suggested before they headed back to his truck.

[On The Road]

Thomas was driving his charge home now and he noticed that Tamara was very quiet. He guessed that she was still very bothered by what happened with the Neo Nazis back in the park. He thought for a moment and decided that he should try to make her feel better.

"They're wrong you know?' he asked getting her to look up at him. "They can't decide who's allowed to immigrate to the U.S. the government does and they've given you permission to come here and become an American." he told her.

"But Master, they said-" she started before he cut her off.

"Who cares what they said?" he asked. "They're Nazis so who gives a shit? You saw the number of people who came to counter protest right?" he asked her to which she nodded. "That's because everyone hates them. They're the human shaped skid marks on the underpants of American society. White Supremacy and Ethno Nationalism are the least popular ideas in America and they'll never get anything accomplished. And I promise they can't make you leave Tammy Darlin, I won't let them." he told her.

Tamara was touched by that. Thomas could tell by the hopeful smile on her face that she was already feeling better. Once they pulled in and he parked his truck he let her out and she tackled him in a loving hug. "thank you Master." she said softly.

Thomas responded by hugging her back before smiling back to her. "We still have an hour or two before dinner. Let's try out some of your new sports gear." he suggested.

It was then Francis and Diana came up to speak with their older brother and his charge. "You two look like you had a good time today.' said Francis.

"Anything interesting happen?' asked Diana.

Both Thomas and Tamara looked at one another for a second and smiled before turning back and smiling to the younger girls. "Went shopping, got some lunch, went to the park and came home again." replied Thomas.

"Is that all?' Francis asked with a smirk. "You didn't try anything romantic or break the rules now did ya?' he asked with a sly smile.

"Nothing happened." Thomas said with a blush.

"Oh I can only dream." replied Tamara as she thought about Thomas again and the future she really wanted with him.

"You know Tommy, you really should just admit your feelings for her. You can't deny it forever." said Diana.

"Girls, please don't encourage her." he said with a small blush which only got them to laugh.

"Hey, Master and I were gonna play a game. I got a new frisbee, wanna play with us?' she asked excitedly with her tail wagging.

"Love to." replied Diana.

"Sure, Ma says dinner will be ready in about an hour so let's kill some time." said Francis.

The four of them would toss the frisbee around for at least an hour before Sally called them in for dinner. Today she made a delicious meal of breaded pork chops with some sweet yellow corn and mashed potatoes. It was right about that time Jim came back in and took his seat at the head of the table and his wife sitting at the opposite end. Both Francis and Diana sat on one side with Thomas and Tamara sitting on the other. Once all the plates and silverware were set up and the food was on the table, everyone was ready to dig in. About thirty minutes into the meal and suddenly Thomas' cellphone begins to ring. He reaches into his pocket to answer which annoys his mother.

"Thomas there are no cellphones at the dinner table, you know that." she said with a calm but stern expression.

"Yeah Ma, I know." he said about to answer.

"We've been over this." she told him. "And over this and over this." she repeated.

"I know, I know, I'm sorry." he replied.

"Go ahead and answer but next time it's mine." she warned him.

Thomas stood back up and walked into the other room before answering. "Hello?' he asked.

"Good evening my Dear." he heard on the other end.

"Miss Victoria?' he replied.

"Glad you remember me." she said in response. "I hope I'm not bothering you or interrupting anything." she told him.

"No everything's fine, we were just sitting down for dinner is all." he replied.

"Glad to hear it. I wanted to call in advance to let you know that I'm stopping by your house in a few days. I have a favor I need to ask of you." she told him.

[Author's Notes] So as you may have noticed I'm rewriting some of my earliest chapters and updating them. There are two reasons I'm doing this. The first is that my earliest chapters seem too short and a bit rushed. Because so, they're riddled with spelling errors and frankly quite inconsistent. I'm doing this to try and correct these errors and make the story flow better but I also wanna be more detailed than before and lengthen the chapters a bit y'know?

Another reason is because I've fallen into one of the biggest traps and have kind of made Thomas a Gary Stu. In my defense, a lot of male protags seem like a Gary Stu whenever they write a harem story so I'm not the only one guilty of this but none the less I wanna rectify this problem. I'm hoping that by updating previous chapters and developing his character better both in previous and future chapters he'll seem less like a Gary Stu and more realistic and believable. If anyone else would like to help me out in this I'm more than happy to listen to some ideas.

I also wanna make more scenes involving interactions with his family, his parents and sisters and such. They're part of his life and therefore part of the story too. I'm also adding some more scenes which involve the girls acting suggestive towards Thomas and lots of more flirting too. They are trying to win him over after all.

Anyways, thank you all so much for reading my stories. Please leave me either a Review or a PM as I love getting them and if you have any ideas you wanna share please lay em on me because I love hearing from my readers.

This is Dragon1990 signing out :-)