Hey everyone, I'm the Untouchable Queen here to bring you my first ever fanfiction. Wow, super nervous! Um, I've never written an intro before so I'm going to keep it short and sweet. I own nothing, the majority of these characters belong to Masashi Kishimoto of Naruto and Dall-Young Lim of Freezing. This isn't a crossover I just like these two characters from Freezing. So with that being said enjoy!

"Talking"

[inner thoughts]

Chapter 1

Rana…Rana where are you?, called an exasperated mother named Lana. Rana its's time to go we have to keep moving. [Honestly where is that girl?]

Lana Linchen one of the members assigned to gather water and supplies was exhausted, not from foraging, but from looking for her way word daughter.

Honestly how does someone that small have that much energy? Haha you truly are my daughter.

With that thought sadness moved across her face, at only 28 Lana had seen what the world was capable of. She unlike her daughter knew what the harsh world was capable of and she did not want that for her daughter. Shaking her head

No I will not let what happened to me happen to her. Her eyes harden like a war vet, an ominous aura radiated around her.

Meanwhile deep in the forest, a little girl with a fur covered collar jacket and fur covered boots was tracking through the forest with a look of determination in her eyes

[Today I'll find a panda lily before we leave, mama will be so impressed that she will let me go hunting like the other adults], she nodded her side braid pony tai bouncing around as she ran.

Running through the snow covered forest she followed the stream just like her mother and the elder's of the tribe told the youngest to do, if they ever got lost. Running faster then most children her age, Rana honed in on the river knowing that Panda lilies like to grow in the cracks of rocks near water. After running for about an hour Rana spotted her treasure, 4 lilies were sticking out of a boulder near the river. Its black spots almost obscured by the falling snow.

There-you-are, she breathed heavily.

Making sure the coast was clear, Rana climbed the boulder, but unfortunately the buildup of snow and ice made it difficult to climb.

Ahhh come on! What is wrong with you, you stupid rock? I just want the flowers why do you have to make it so hard?, the tiny 5 year old yelled

After a good bit of yelling, Rana stood tall, staring her opponent square in its gray face.

[Breath in, breath out. Remember what you saw those superheroes do Rana].

Relaxing her body Rana made strange signs with her hands, just as she had seen those flying people do.

[Focus Rana look within and pull out]

A strange force of energy released itself from Rana into her hands and feet making her giggle with at the tingly sensation. Opening her eyes Rana climbed the boulder with ease, slipping every once in awhile but finally making it to the top.

Yessss! I'm the best, that's right me!, she shouted throwing her hands up in victory.

Rana Linchen what in the world are you doing?!, yelled a very angry woman who was the exact copy of the dancing toddler.

Uh oh…Hi mom. Look what I found, aren't I great.

But there was no amusement in her mother's face.

Get…down…now! She yelled

Seeing the anger and killing intent in her mother Rana started to climb down. No longer having control of her energy, Rana slipped off the rock!

Rana!

Into the icy river, Rana fell Mama, cough, cough, Mama, help me!

Rana I'm coming keep your head up.

Jumping into the ice river after her Lana swam as fast as one can in deathly cold water. Seeing the panda lilies tight in her daughters hand, Lana tried to get to Rana only to be blocked by the rushing current of ice and snow

Mama…Mama!, she cried making her way down the river over a waterfall.

With one last ounce of strength, Lana tried to reach for her only to see her fall down the edge of the waterfall.

Ranaaaaaaaaaa!

Lana could only watch in anguish as her daughter disappeared before her eyes.

Well what do you guys think, please be gentle this is my first time. Blushing I know my grammar and over use of commons sucks ass, so helpful spell check is always nice. But remember I only responded to HELPFUL CRITISIM!

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