I will try to add a new chapter every other day! I know they are short right now but as I go I'll make them longer. I'd really like to have your reviews! Tell me what you think will happen!

Loren finally reaches the coffee shop and sees Mel inside waiting for her.

Loren runs into Mel

Loren: Hey Mel, I'm sorry Im kind of late but I was at home writing a new song.

Melissa: Are you sure you weren't with Eddie?

Loren: No I was at home. Eddie probably has better things to do than to hang out with some high school, song writing contest winner.

Melissa: Don't say that, you're not just some high school, song writing contest winner! You're much more and if he doesn't realize that than he doesn't deserve you!

Loren: Thanks Mel but your sympathy isn't gonna make me feel better.

Melissa: Fine!

Loren: Okay so why'd you want to meet with me?

Melissa: I HAVE to talk to you about this boy!

Loren: Ooooo! What boy is this that we speak of?

Melissa: Just a guy, you don't know him

Loren: So? Tell me anyways!

Melissa: I'll tell you that afterwards, but for now I need advice!

Loren: Alright, with what exactly?

Melissa: Well we were in his apartment and…

Loren: Interrupting Mel WAIT WAIT WAIT! You were in his apartment? Does this mean he's an older guy? ;) Loren laughs

Melissa: Yea he's graduated but anyways we were in his apartment making out when he pushed me onto the couch and well you know where it would have led to.

Loren: So you slept with him?

Melissa: No, but he wanted me too. Would I be a bad person if I decided too?

Loren: Of course not, as long as you really like him!

Melissa: Duh! Of course I really like him!

Loren: Than go for it!

Melissa: Okay, thanks Lo. I will

Melissa gets up and leaves. Leaving Loren sitting alone. A few minutes pass and finally Loren decides to go home.