Heres the 2nd chapter...

Thanks for the reviews (even not alot)

Annabelle
Haha im sorry for being too descriptive... i wanted to make it as horrible as possible for naruto so that it will be more things to write as there will be chapter dedicated to opening his heart up as well as healing his psychological wound. it will be less violent from now on ^^ hope u will like it.

demon kitehh
thank you for reviewing eventhough my story was atrocious.. thanks ^^ hope u can help me to improve more!


I do not own any characters from Naruto nor I plan to make money off this fanfic

I do not plan to let Naruto have the kyuubi nor making Haku exist since im afraid that these will affect the relationship between Naruto and Zabuza.

Zabuza X Naruto
Warning... Sadistic Chapter . (even i find myself sick now D:)
No rape,lemon,sex scenes in this chapter.

'thoughts' (italic)
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shouting" (bold)
"speaking" (normal)

-Scene change-


Setting : Still raining, a few hours after chapter one and still dark.


Lightning strikes.. as if its trying to penetrate the darkness in the room, The crashing thunder, imitating the roar of a dragon, woke the young blonde up... Finding to see only darkness in the room, he went back into a ball, still naked and started to weep. His body sweating profusely, as if he just woken up from a bad dream... but it wasn't a dream. He could still feel the mixture of dried up semen and blood in his hole and thigh. His ass was still sore and in pain.

'at least the wound on my body has clot up...'

Naruto said touching the whipped skin on his body, still being able to feel the pain every time his hand came in contact with it. He tried to find a way out in the darkness, only to find both the doors and windows locked. Feeling that all hope to escape was lost, he lay on the floor, below the window, whimpering...

A single sudden lightning stuck and its flashes illuminated the room, at the same time, igniting an idea within him. He faced the window; clenched his teeth; balled up his right fist; preparing to sacrifice it to the window.. With a single strike, his fist came in contact with the window, breaking it into million of pieces.

Blood emerged out of the slits; a flowing red wet trail, betraying the glass shards that has kissed his fist. Crawling out of the window frame, ignoring both the cuts he's getting from the left over glass on the frame and the sharp prickling at his feet, he ran into a nearby forest, hoping to escape as far aways as possible. Blood still oozing out of his raw wounds endlessly and the never ending rain only quickened the amount of blood he's losing.

*Siren*

'shit.. they *pants* found out... must have woken them up... must get *pants* away fast...'

The blonde increased his pace, anxiously trying to get away from the cottage as far as possible, ignoring the shouting and footsteps.

"Quick! After him! Gato-sama wouldn't be pleased it he gets away! Search everywhere! Sensory ninjas hurry do your job!"
Naruto only could run and couldn't hide. If he had hidden, it wouldn't take long before the sensory ninjas find him...


-Back at the Cottage-

"Whats taking you guys so long!"

"Sir! The boy is no where to be seen..."

"Who knew that he still could move. We made sure that we broke him so hard that he wouldn't be able to move for days..."

"The Sensory ninjas couldn't sense him at all. He must have moved out of range.."

"Thats impossible! He shouldn't have gotten that far!"

"We cant let him escape! If we did, Gato-sama will have our heads!"

"Why don't we just kill the boy and cover it with a accident?"

"We can't even find him. How are we going to kill him?"

The thug smirks and took out his lighter and lighted it up.

"Well by burning of course..."

"A forest fire? But our ninjas are still out there. Causalities won't be light!"

"We will just say its an accident. No one could have prevented it. This will cover up for both the boy death as well as the causalities.. So what do you guys say?"


-Forest-

Naruto, still unwilling to stop, was unable to keep on running for any longer, his stamina was drastically dropping and legs was going numb.

'at least the blood flow slowed '

Suddenly, as if all hell broke lose, the primary color "red" filled the sky. The blonde stunned by the sudden change, turned back for a moment and saw reddish-orange flames consuming the trees one by one spreading towards him. Cries of ninjas unknown to him could be heard and animals was seen trying to escape the fire. Fire began to draw nearer and nearer to Naruto. Feeling the extreme heat, he took it as an indicator that he should start running. Trying to find a way out of the fire, only to find that the fire was slowly surrounding him. Thick smoke covered the forest, blocking his vision. His breathing became irregular as the smoke only made it worse when he was already short on breath.

'Must..get *pants* out... of. ...'

Naruto tried looking around for an exit again. This time, he depended on his senses to determine the direction the fire was spreading to. He immediately ran towards that direction hoping that his sense gave him the correct deduction. The fire seemed to stop spreading at that direction. Naruto quickly assumed that the way he was running towards is the exit of the forest and he was right.

'alm..os..t... the...re..'

Naruto reached out his hands as if he was trying to get hold of the exit. With his last of his strength, he pushed his body out of the fire, getting some burn on his face while he was at it. However, Lady Luck wasn't on his side. At the last moment, he tripped over himself and fell down onto the floor. The fire soon caught up onto his legs burning it while it was at it.

"AHHHHHHH!"

Naruto screamed in agony as the flames tormented his legs. The blonde immediately rolled away, escaping from the grips of the infernal flames. He then cursed the flames before facing up in the sky. In that moment, fatigue struck his body, making him oblivious of his surroundings.. he didn't really care anymore. He was alive and that all it mattered to him. Naruto slowly closes his eyes, took a deep breath around him.

And for the first time in his life, he felt that he was free...
he felt that he was
alive...


Now this is much better than before .
Im getting quite a number of hits, views and alerts (only 1 put this as his/her fav. I salute you ^^)
and im actually quite happy about it... BUT WHERES THE REVIEWS T.T
please actually review... this is my first fanfic so having reviews will actually help alot.
Thanks ^^

Hope that this edited version is better than the previous one

And no im not a emo nor sadist. I just love torturing ^^