A/N: Here is Chapter 2 of the so-called story "My Immortal" and it makes about as much sense as the last one! Try not to gouge your eyes out or stab your computer!

Disclaimer: Once again I own nothing but my comments and computer

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Chapter 2.

AN: Fangz 2 bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da chapta Use spellcheck and you realize that goths aren't all satanists! BTW preps stop flaming ma story ok! But we don't want to stop *pout* It's just so much fun!

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The next day I woke up in my bedroom Huh. I usually wake up in my T.V.. It was snowing and raining again Sleet. I opened the door of my coffin But Hogwarts has four-posters!and drank some blood from a bottle I had Psh, Cliché. My coffin was black ebony Ebony is a shade of black there for you cannot have black ebony as black is not a shade of ebony and inside it was hot pink velvet Because all goths love pink, don't they? with black lace on the ends. I got out of my coffin and took of my giant MCR t-shirt which I used for pajamas We don't need to know, you Mary-Sue. Instead, I put on a black leather dress, a pentagram necklace, combat boots and black fishnets on Again what happened to the uniform? Won't you get in trouble?. I put on four pairs of earrings in my pierced ears Where else would you put them?, and put my hair in a kind of messy bun I thought there was only one type of messy bun *is honestly confused*.

My friend, Willow (AN: Raven dis is u! I feel bad for this 'Raven' person) woke up then and grinned at me. She flipped her long waist-length raven black hair with pink streaks and opened her forest-green eyes. Whoa, whoa, whoa! She grinned at you without opening her eyes?! And she had just woken up and therefore had no idea where you were?! How?! She put on her Marilyn Manson t-shirt with a black mini, fishnets and pointy high-heeled boots. We put on our makeup (black lipstick white foundation and black eyeliner.) Seriously what happened to the uniform?

"OMFG, I saw you talking to Draco Malfoy yesterday!" she said excitedly. So? It was for five seconds.

"Yeah? So?" I said, blushing. I thought you were a vampire, how do you blush? A vampire by definition has no blood there for making it impossible for them to blush?

"Do you like Draco?" she asked as we went out of the Slytherin common room and into the Great Hall. How did you get that from "Hi" "Hi"? And how did you get to the great hall that fast? It isn't in the dungeons.

"No I so fucking don't!" I shouted. No need to get defensive. Sheesh, calm down girl!

"Yeah right!" she exclaimed. Just then, Draco walked up to me.

"Hi." he said.

"Hi." I replied flirtily. You just contradicted yourself =_=

"Guess what." he said.

"What?" I asked.

"Well, Good Charlotte are having a concert in Hogsmeade." he told me. Wait a second, back it up! Good Charlotte is a muggle band, Hogsmeade is a wizarding village. Do you see what's wrong there?

"Oh. My. Fucking. God!" I screamed. I love GC. They are my favorite band, besides MCR. Seriously they're muggles how do they know about Hogsmeade

"Well…. do you want to go with me?" he asked.

I gasped because I had just realized something. I was a Mary-Sue.

A/N: Okay, two chapters down… 42 more to go. T-T WHY?! Okay, I'm going to try to have this finished as soon as possible because I don't want to have to subject my brain to more torture. Have a good day!

-Pasta-chan