Akame ga biju
Thank you all for the support, I am overwhelmed with how much you liked the first chapter to be honest. Now to answer you questions...
Mas2009: I am a bit confused with your review, I don't even know how you think I underpowered him, kind of the opposite is what I am aiming for.
Eniox27: hope no more, it is going to be a running gag
Ryner510: Naruto will be godlike but a laid back type of godlike character
Krizthegreat: here is the harem list:
Leone
Najenda
Akame
Sheele
The maid
Sayo
Esdeath
Dorothea
Suzuka
I may add Kaguya if people want but no one else, just because I don't want everyone who meets him to fall in love with him.
Naruto had turned to the appearance of Esdeath and had gulped, taking a step back. In his mind he felt something off about her, it wasn't her power that made him gulp, and facing Kaguya was a lot more terrifying then the woman in front of him. It was her smile, the look she gave him, everyone powerful Naruto had faced had always been emotionless or had frowns. The predatory look she gave him, licking her lips like a starving beast, Naruto wasn't going to admit it but that look scared him.
"You are strong aren't you, to kill so many in such a little time" Esdeath now had frost surrounding her. "I hope you don't disappoint me, if you are good enough, I may be able to give you a warrior's death".
"Sorry but I don't plan on dying here" Naruto pointed his sword towards her. "And I don't plan on staying here long but if you decide to keep harming these people I guess I will have to stop you first".
Esdeath laughed "Let's enjoy this fight to the fullest". She rushed forward as Naruto mimicked her actions both meeting at the centre, swords clashing. Jumping back Esdeath created and sent multiple ice swords at him, Naruto hid behind his sword using the width of it to defend himself. Unfortunately he didn't see Esdeath run up and kick the side of his sword, breaking it easily and sent him flying back. "It seems I overestimated you, such a shame... huh"
Naruto stood up the executioner's blade reforming after landing on his bloody body. 'She is strong, I can't keep letting my guard down around her' Naruto took a deep breath. 'I can do this, even if I have no chakra, can't I?' Naruto smirked 'I won't forget you bushy brows'. "I. Will. Not. Lose." Naruto ran forward ignoring the pain from his injuries, he swung his sword to the right, and Esdeath blocked it with her own sword. "Leaf hurricane" Naruto called out trying to imitate Lee but the kick was blocked by ice.
"You are a strange fighter I will give you that, but it is not enough" Esdeath made another sword out of ice and held it in her left hand. She charged forward at her greatest speed swinging her swords too fast for regular people to see. Naruto managed to hold his ground but was unable to go on the offense.
Naruto jumped back as did Esdeath but she created a meteor out of ice, Naruto ran with wide eyes. 'If I just had chakra' he remembered the pervy sage saying jutsu would not work if he had no chakra left and it may kill him 'I have to chance it'. Creating a clone using the ice as cover, luckily it seemed to work, Naruto just having enough chakra.
As his clone ran to stall Esdeath as Naruto closed his eyes and remained still to collect nature energy. A minute later and he received to memories of his clone 'Crap maybe it has to do with everything being destroyed and on fire but I can't seem to get much nature energy here'. Naruto dug underground to under Esdeath.
"Think you can hide from me" Esdeath was about to stab the ground with her rapier but four clones came into existence kicking her up. The real Naruto bursts out of the ground punching her stomach making her go higher.
The clones kicked her back down to the ground "Uzumaki barrage". Esdeath landed on the ground with a thud "and now rasengan barrage" Esdeath widened her eyes as Naruto came down with the spiralling ball.
'An imperial arms?' she created a dome of ice to protect her but it did nothing as the rasengan easily broke through the defence and drilled into her stomach.
Naruto panted feeling the nature energy disappear "It's over". He stated seeing the rasengan had ripped the clothing where it hit and the damage it had caused her. Shouts from the soldiers echoed through the ice walls "there is not many of them left" he sighed. Naruto raised an eye brow when Esdeath stood up stubbornly.
Esdeath looked at him straight in the eye "I am not weak; I am strong so I will not be the one to lose here". She narrowed her eyes "I have decided you will be my pet" she took a step forward then fell forward as blood ran down from her lips.
"It's over, I have won" Naruto stated as the ice walls surrounding them broke thanks to Esdeath being unable to fight. He looked around then closed his eyes, sensing all the people left in the village were the soldiers around him. Naruto smiled 'the villagers have escaped, time to go' Naruto jumped over the soldiers rushing towards him. He sighed easily getting away until a sword of ice pierced the back of his shoulder making him fall, but the sword didn't have enough power to cut deep. He ended up falling down a cliff "why is it always me?"
Esdeath punched the ground, the first time she felt so weak "he could of killed me, yet he let me live". She seethed in anger "did he just take pity on me".
"General Esdeath, are you ok?" she was picked up and helped to stand by a short silver haired woman wearing the same as Esdeath except undamaged.
"I don't need your help Najenda" Esdeath stated stubbornly
Najenda sighed "If you don't mind me saying, you really are an idiot" Esdeath just laughed at this. Esdeath had a look of a hunter at the moment wanting to make Naruto her loyal servant meanwhile Najenda was thinking the opposite 'if someone like that fought with the rebellion I might join myself after all it's not like I have anything to lose except my head'.
(In Naruto's mindscape)
"Well that was anticlimactic" Naruto blinked, lying on his back
"Very true Naruto" a cold voice echoed, Naruto sat up to see Kaguya eating a carrot.
"Why are you just eating a raw carrot" Naruto pointed out dramatically
"I am a rabbit goddess so of course I will eat carrots" she ate the carrot at a scary speed. "Better than your obsession of eating ramen because carrots are healthy"
Naruto gained a tic mark on his forehead "ramen is the food of the gods".
Kaguya laughed "no it's not and that is why I changed you". He looked at her with a confused face "I made you hate ramen". Hair overshadowed Naruto's eyes "I also got rid of your crappy habits and replaced with some of my wonderful habits".
"No one... takes... my... RAMEN" Naruto dived at her, taking both of them to the ground. He pulled her hair making her flinch.
"Eat carrot ramen freak" a carrot appeared and she started slapping him in the face with it before shoving it in his mouth. "So how does the taste of victory taste like? Isn't good?" Naruto forced the carrot out of his mouth.
"How about you taste it instead" he turned the carrot then pushed it towards her.
"S-stop" Kaguya squirmed trying to stay away from the carrot. "It's been in your mouth already, don't you dare put it in..." she was cut off when the carrot was forced into her mouth.
"So tell me how does the taste of victory, taste like?" Naruto mocked before he was kicked in the balls. "Why the balls, you should never hit a guy in the balls" he rolled on the ground in pain
Kaguya placed a foot on his chest "well you shouldn't try to deep throat a girl with a carrot, should you".
"Aw you two are so cute together but could you start getting to the physical part of your relationship" a few giggles sounded just after. The two of them looked to where the noise came from only to see the biju staring at them with their usual grins. However they seemed to be a bit different, their size was the problem, now they were all the size of the average house pet.
"Come on kit, what are you playing at, a true fox outsmarts the female and mates with her" Kurama lectured. Naruto got up as Kaguya standing on him and he recovered from the kick, both stared at the now normal sized fox with nine tails. "Give us a show"
Matatabi had a little nosebleed "Rip off her clothes and make kittens"
Before any of the others could speak a word both Matatabi and Kurama were assaulted by the two white haired godlike beings. "If anyone else wants to say anything, go ahead" both spoke simultaneously while cracking their knuckles. All the biju shook their heads except Shukaku "I bet you will want to squeeze her melons like I want to crush someone in my sand". Shukaku was then added to the assaulted pile.
(Outside Naruto's mindscape)
Naruto opened his eyes to see a pair of red eyes staring down at him "he is awake". He blinked as he sat up, looking around he saw two girls and a man.
The first girl had the pair of red eyes, long black hair that went down to her knees. She wore a sleeveless black mini dress with a red tie and white collar. She also had a red belt, high knee black socks, black boots, and red bracers with black gloves. She also held a katana in a black sheath.
The second girl looked very similar to the first girl except she had shorter hair in twin tails and had black eyes. She wore a black sailor's outfit with a red belt, black tights and also wore black gloves with red bracers. She also had a katana in a black sheath.
The male of the group had short blond hair and blue eyes. He wore a white zip up jacket with several pouches and a belt along with normal black pants and boots. He also wore a white trench coat and carried a large spear.
"Was it really a good idea to help this person, we don't know who is a rebel and who isn't" the short haired girls spoke arguing with the male. "We don't have time to help everyone; we have a mission to complete Natala".
"But we do have time to help this person Kurome" Natala stated. "At least you can say you are better than some of the other soldiers and can go home with a clear conscious". He looked to the other girl "so Akame who do you agree with".
"Everyone deserves a chance to prove themselves" Akame raised her sword in front of her "anyone who gets in my way will be eliminated". Her stomach growled "unless they have some meat".
Natala nodded "see Akame agrees with me".
"She agrees with her stomach not you idiot" Kurome's stomach growled as well
Naruto raised an eyebrow in confusion 'Very strange'
'Your one to talk' all the biju and Kaguya shouted at him, making Naruto flinch at how loud the noise was.
Naruto shook his head, getting up of the floor then stretched. Noticing Naruto standing up Natala placed a hand on Naruto's shoulder, making him turn his head to the blond man. "Hi there miss, we were the ones who rescued you, are you ok" he patted where some of the injuries were to see if they closed properly.
Natala was then kicked by both girls, his head going in a tree. "Don't just touch a girl in those places pervert, you want to die"
"I will chop you up if you touch another girl like that again"
Naruto's hair overshadowed most of his face before exploding in anger "what the hell, can't you see that I am a guy". The three of them gave doubtful looks "don't look at me like that". They continued to give him that look "fine if you don't believe me, take a look for yourselves". Without even thinking Naruto dropped his clothes until he was naked from the waist down "See".
Natala just looked away sighing, Kurome giggle childishly, covering her mouth with her hand while wiping a little blood from her nose. Akame went bright red and coughed into her hand "well sorry for the mistake but do you mind?"
Naruto looked down before pulling his clothes up in a rush then hitting himself in the head. "Why did I do that" he spoke with a blush, before he was met with a sword pointing to his face.
Kurome was the one holding the sword "tell me who do you serve the empire or the rebellion?" She brought it closer to his neck. "Choose wrong and you will die, don't answer you will die anyway"
"I serve no one; I don't actually know where the empire is? And I can't say I have heard of a rebellion" Naruto answered.
Kurome withdrew her sword "So you are a fighter for higher then, you can't be anything else with a body like that". Naruto nodded to try and stop the questions "Liar" she raised her sword again. "A fighter for higher would naturally go to the empire to seek jobs, everywhere else has no money to pay a fighter like you".
Naruto sighed 'I don't know how long I was out for but I have regained most of my chakra, I should be able to deal with them or get out of here'. Naruto's eye glowed and he appeared ten ft away behind them "Look I don't want to fight you"
"It's too late for that" Kurome charged at him.
"Wait Kurome don't rush in like that" Akame shouted but she didn't listen continuing to run ahead.
Naruto sighed a rasengan forming in one hand 'when did I get such good control'. He shook his head of such thoughts before teleporting right in front of Kurome slamming the rasengan into her gut sending her flying back. Seeing this Natala and Akame drew their weapons "Sorry but I can't stay around here". Naruto teleported away from the three.
"Damn it I let my guard down" Kurome stood up then coughed up a small bit of blood "He is strong".
"You are an idiot Kurome, he could of killed you, you have to be more careful" Natala put her arm around his shoulder for support. "Don't risk your life like that again, you might not live after it next time". Akame remained silent staring in a random direction which was where Naruto was. 'He is not a target, I will not have to follow and eliminate him'
Chapter end
Review, follow and favourite. I hoped everyone enjoyed the chapter; feel free to give me your suggestions. Before someone flames me about Naruto being weak, it was in the challenge to make the fight between Esdeath and Naruto a draw however that will not always be the case.
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