How Allegiant Should Have Ended

by Kaytie Wat

"No, my dear child, your life is only beginning, but it will be tough at first and there will be many hard times. Remember this Beatrice, when bad things happen good things always come out of it, just be brave" she says as she strokes my hair with her hand. "Goodbye my dear child". This is an Alternate Ending of Allegiant where Tris Miraculously survives.

2. Chapter 2

Tobias

"Tobias, Tobias, Tobias" says Tris. She is right in front of me again, but every time I get close to her she moves again through the dauntless headquarters further away from me. Suddenly she changes to Marcus.

"This is for your own good, Tobias" he says as he unwinds his belt.

Suddenly I wake up. I had the same dream again, I been having the same dream this last week ever since she was shot, but this time it's different. She was calling my name. I must go see Tris.

I see Caleb lift up his head as I open the door to Tris's room. Caleb looks like a wreck; his hair looks like a birds nest, his clothes are crushed and he smells like BO.

"What are you doing here?" I ask

"She's my sister I have every right to be here," he replies.

"It's your fault she's here, you know that don't you".

"I know, I'm so sorry," he looks down at the ground. I started to walk back to my room.

"Wait, Tobias!" Caleb yells as I opened the door.

"What?" I say

"Tris told me to tell you if she didn't survive to tell she didn't want to leave you," he says. I felt tears starting to stir in my eyes again.

"Why did she go instead of you?" I ask

"I think you know the answer to that one," he replies. Of cause I do it's because she loves him.

"How is she then?"

"The doctor says if she survives tonight she will have a 50 percent chance of survival as long as she wakes up from this coma."

I hope she wakes up, no she will wake up. I know she will.