First shot, I tried to focus more on the humor than on the good writing, such as details and emotions and other things like that. If you want to see my real, good writing visit my other stories…
Chris POV
Seriously? I should've guessed those two idiots were up to something. But no I had to act the dumbest possible. Anyways, Con and Trav were just gaining the Cabin's confidence back from the last shock (literally, they maybe me shock myself, long story), but than… "Catchan!" They spoiled everything.
"Shoo! Shoo!" Clarisse told me, claiming my bed.
"Clarisse?" I asked, "Hmm… what exactly are you doing?"
"I'm catching butterflies!" She said sarcastically.
"You didn't have to act mean!" I said.
"Baby, I am mean… Now shoo off, so I can sleep." She said and I was the one who was destined to sleep on the cold floor that night. After all, Clarisse was no piece of cake in arguing. She always won!
"Sleep? Did someone say sleep?" Silena Beauregard skipped around in her short pajamas, of course, I'm a man, I had the urge to look. Yeah, Clarisse noticed and: "Slap!" On my face.
I knew something bad was going to happen, seriously. Ares and Aphrodite together? Suddenly, all the Aphrodite chicks stood on our bunks and started to dance and pillow fight, with each other.
"Gods bless my eyes! This is awe-some!" George enthused just gazing at them.
Everyone laughed.
"Guys! Let's play truth or dare! Yeah!" All the Aphrodite girls insisted. All the lonely Hermes brothers and even some guys from Ares fell to their feet.
"No!" The Ares girls (and me) blared.
"Okay, so, we'll continue partying and no sleep for anyone! The whole night!" Drew threatened, trying to grab my pillow. I pulled it with force to my side.
"No!" The Ares girls (and me) blared once more.
"Okay, the choice is yours anyways! George! Turn on the radio!" Silena commanded and believe me or not: fluffy Justin Bieber started playing.
"Your cabin should be called Hell!" Clarisse fumed, hitting her head desperately on the pillow.
"NOOOO! We'll do it! We'll all play Truth or Dare with you!" I gave up, after all, none of my ears were maybe from iron, nor were they that resistant.
"Great!" All of them screamed.
"We will?" Clarisse asked me sarcastically. I shook my head and she hit me hard with the pillow until I fell off the bed and everyone laughed their heads off.
Pollux POV
The fire warming my cold body and I could even feel the delicious flames burning the wood. The Hephaestus girls were spinning my head right round and only Hades knows were the Demeter Cabin stuck themselves. I felt fuzzy and snuggly inside, all that was missing were marshmallows… *wake up, dream ends* for them! Those crazy Hephaestus guys decided they'd do a fire and see how much time it would take to burn all of my clothes. So they hung me horizontally by an iron cord and just like a fat pig, they started spinning me. Normally, I'd prefer to stay on the front of the fire place. But this was better than nothing.
Well that's what I thought, until I saw my jacket start setting fire!
"Get me out of here!" I yelled and they continued to laugh hysterically.
"We can't the experiment isn't done yet!"
And then, rip open the door, the Demeter Cabin came in.
"Hey, what'd you guys doing? Are you crazy?" Katie exclaimed as if she just saw a ghost.
"Katie, glad you came… Where were you?" I asked.
"Collecting flowers with my cabin so we can decorate our new home!" She enthused, not even minding the fact, that hey were trying to cook me as a pig in a camp.
"No, no. No flowers in my cabin!" I resisted. First the pig story, than trying to make me look gay? A gay pig?
"We are doing an experiment, want to join us?" Charles Beckendorf invited.
"Well… let us think for a minute!"
"Please, guys, I need help. Their frying me!"
"They can't fry you without using a pan!" Katie insisted. I yanked my burning jacket off and held tight to the stick that was holding me.
"Sure, we'll join you!" The cabin skipped happily.
I think this chapter was pretty funny, next chapter coming soon…very soon.