Chapter 2

(still only own the story and Nolten Alexander...)

Me: Hi everyone and welcome back to the pre-story commentary!

Shadow: Good thing we took the banana away from Silver

Silver: oooh... banana...

Sonic: Hi everyone who fell for that Nolten could be evil thing

Nolten: oh yah I'm evil... or maybe not... hehehe

Amy: Hi, still not allowed to chase Sonic during the commentary... but after he's MINE!

Blaze: Hi I missed the last commentary due to a little cannon misshapen

Eggman: so do I replace Silver now?

Me: No... not till the people vote... VOTE DAMMIT!

Sonic: so I'm in this story... right?

Me: um... yah you're in it, you and Shadow will have a rivalry over Amy-

Sonic/Shadow: WHAT!

Me: uh... yah whats wrong with that?

Sonic: um...

Shadow: Um...

Silver: ... oh hi Blaze

Blaze: Hi silver, i'm going to listen to my IPOD 4 ok?... "let's get it started in hear..."

Eggman: So do I get to stay then?

Me: Yes, only because your egg-shaped

Nolten: So... Callix333 I'm evil?

Me: Maybe... maybe not that will be seen later in the story..., but till then your neutral

Nolten: ok... mess with me you will die, friend me and you will prosper... got it?!

Amy: Ok... you look like Shadow are you related?

Me: ok we need to get to the story already-

Shadow: Um... he does...?

Sonic: OH GREAT TWO SHADOW'S!

Silver: Blaze I love you...

Blaze: Huh...


That evening at shadow's house...

-Shadow's POV-

I had brought Nolten to my house to hang till everyone came over, we had started to watch Mythbusters for like 10 minutes wail talking about our selves... he had a lot of the favorite shows as me! Though he didn't have that... me-ness personality, but he was cool: He was 18 too, he knows all the major world leaders of the U.N., he has a love of swords, guns, and electro-plasma wips... or something like that, he was a master of close-corters combat, and is a master engineer of all sorts of stuff.

"knock, knock... were here Shadow" The gang said through the door.

"come in you need to meet this guy" I said as Nolten got a soda to drink. Sonic or Faker, Amy, Knuckles, Rouge, Tails, Silver, and Blaze came into my living room to see who I needed them to meet.

"Hi, I'm Nolten... Nolten Alexander" Nolten got up and shaked the dude's hands and kissed the hands of the girls, hmm apperently a gentlemen of sorts...

"Hi I'm Sonic" Sonic said as Nolten shaked his hand, Sonic wore simple blue shorts and a white tee.

"Hi I'm Knuckles, you look like you could fight good... you and me got to have a round or two together" Knuckles said, Knuckles is my sparing buddy by the way and wore a black tank top and green shorts.

"Hi I'm Miles Prowler but you can call me Tails" Tails said, Tails wore a white tee and brown shorts.

"Hi I'm Silver, I'm from the future" Silver said, Silver wore brown shirt with a picture of a banana tree and black shorts.

"Oh a gentleman are you, I'm Rouge honey" Rouge said as she flirted with him, sorry Nolten...

"Oh thank you, I'm Blaze... I'm a princess from the future" Blaze blushed when he kissed her hand, Silver got a little mad.

"And finally you, your Amy right?" Nolten gave her a kiss on her hand and she blushed, I told Nolten about Amy already.

"Oh how do you know my name Nolten, you're a gentlemen aren't you?" Amy blushed like crazy as he gave her the kiss on her hand.

"Oh I'm just polite... but nice to meet all of you, I moved in next to you Amy and Shadow. Hope to become good friends with all of you, and Knuckles I will be happy to kick your ass in a fight... but not now ok?" Nolten stepped back a foot to say that to everyone, hmm a fight between Knuckles and Nolten... should be interesting!

Sweet, I'll be looking to that!" knuckles did a little boxing punch to show how excited he was.

"So Nolten what's in your pockets?" Tails said as everyone saw the dual handguns he carries around, oh yah I got to ask if he can get me one of those.

"Oh these, there 85 caliber plasma round handguns with a never-ending clip" Nolten said as he took one out to pass around starting with Tails.

"Woa, 85 caliber?! Plasma round?! Never ending clip?" Tails was over excited about it, he passed it to Sonic and so.

"Yup, their home made by me... I'm an engineering wiz of sorts" Nolten said to Tails.

"Me too, we should work on some projects together!" Tails and Nolten shook hands to confirm the partnership, Nolten grinned like crazy.

"Hmm well I met all of you so... how about I get to know you all better, starting with Knuckles... you got a fight to lose" Nolten and Knuckles grinned.

"We'll see Nolten, I'm undefeated" We all went to Knuckles gym to watch this unfold... hmm I'd say its going to be an even fight.

So everyone followed Knuckles and Nolten to Knuckles gym to see who would win, but they would never have noticed the pair of eyes watching their every move...

-unknown POV-

Hmm, so their falling for the plan just as he said... hehehe soon, oh so soon Sonic and co your all going to be... EGG'ED!

-Nolten's POV-

We walked into town to have our little fight, Knuckles gym was named: The Emerald GYM

It was a large building with three boxing/martial arts rings, a group of punching bags, various workout equipment, and a small group of gymnasts that were working out till we entered and they realized that there was going to be a fight.

We entered the ring and got ready to fight.

"So we're not using boxing gloves?" I asked.

"Nope, bare handed martial arts fighting..." We shook hands and went to our fighting stance's: Knuckles was in a boxer type stance wail I had a sparing stance.

"Good" He threw a left hook but I blocked it and did a upper cut to his face, he got hit hard so I gave him a second to recover.

"Good hit Nolten, you got so serious advanced training don't you?" Knuckles threw a jab and I douged it, he threw a quick right hook and I ducked to do a sweeping kick. He fell and I helped him up before we continued.

"Nice... sweeping kick, your good" He threw three jabs and a upper cut, I douged the jabs and gabbed ahold of his upper cut to lift my self over hihead so I could do a flying kick to his face. he got hit so hard but grabbed leg after the hit and tried swinging me into the ground but failed, I broke the grip and spin attacked his face... he got KO. I helped him to his corner to see if he was seriously injured, he was ok and woke up.

"*spit blood* ok... I under estamated you, your a worth oppenite... lets continue" We walked to the center on the ring to start round two, He tried a sweeping kick but I jumbed over it and kicked him in the chest knocking him back. He threw a few jabs and hooks but missed with most of them only connecting with my jacket, I threw a hook to his face but he blocked it.

"Your good too Kunckles, just not good enoff" I ht him with a upper cut and a right hook then a left hook then a power kick to the chest, he was KO again.

"Ok no more playing around then!" Knuckles and I went to the center of the ring to start round three, he waited for my hook and grbbed it! He went for a punch to my gut but I kicked his hand and ran up him to jumb over him and do a spin attack to his face again! he douged my spin attack and tried a left hook then a right hook and a upper cut all to no hits, I sweep kicked him and he jumbed over the kick as I douged his mid air round house.

"Ok, time to end this!" I said as he did a straight punch to my face, i douged and grabbed his arm as I jumbed and summersult kicked him followed by a spin attack followed by me grabbing his shoulders and power kicking him as I jumbed off to sweep attack him then upper cut him into the air... he hit the ground with a lot of force and passed out for the last time in the fight. I got some water to wake him up, he woke up and couft up some blood... he was badly bruised and a little bloody but ok.

"*spit blood* You... win, ... you... got ...to teach... me that" Knuckles laid down and shut his eye's to rest, everyone behind me had a massive shocked face!

"Ok everyone pay up, Nolten won and you all own me 25 rings" Shadow took the bet money he won from beting on me... he bet on me?

"Hey everyone?" I asked.

"Yah?" They all said.

"Who's next?" I said with an evil grin... They all had wide eye's... hehehe...


Me: Well how was that, Nolten kicked your ass Knuck's!

Knuckles: So... he's really good, he still is going to teach me how to do all that... right?

Nolten: Uh...

Shadow: Wow, I'm never going to fight you man... you didn't even use your weapons!

Sonic: So I'm not next... right?!

Silver: Please don't fight me Nolten!

Rouge: Mmm... a man who can dish it out too, Knuck's honey looks like you got compatision now!

Nolten/Knuckles: WHAT!

Blaze: He's such a gentleman, ...

Amy: Wow,... that was impressive Nolten

Tails: Good thing were going to be friends... right?!

Me: ok, so now I have to come up with the next chapter... so who is going to hang with Nolten next?

Silver: Nolten do you like banana's?

Tails: oh can I be next, I could use the help with my next project

Rouge: Mmm he should hang with me next, your viewers would love that... action!

Everyone: ... uh... Um... Uh...

Blaze: I'm free, I could hang with him...

Amy: Well i would but Sonic and me have a date-

Sonic: WHAT!? Since when?!

Amy: Since now...

Nolten: Shouldn't I chose who's next?

Me: Nah, I'll let the reviewer's pick!

Nolten: Oh shit...

Me: Ok readers you got to chose who Nolten get's to hang with next... NOW REVIEW DAMMIT!

Silver: ...

Blaze: i'm going to listen to my IPOD 4 again

Silver: I LOVE YOU BLAZE!

Blaze: huh...

Silver: Ooooh *sigh*...