So i would like to know what you guys think of the first 2 chapters and if you got any advice for my writing
Disclaimer: i dont own Barbie girl or anything from disney
Schools out! Awesome is all I can say as Sharpay and I walk to the car. A week in Milan is going to be amazing!
"So we are going to go to the mall first and then to the hotel to freshen up and later on…"
"Later on… what Shar?"
"MORE SHOPPING!"
"How did I totally see that comin?"
"I'm your twin duh who else would know me better than myself? You Duh!"
"True. I'm still making sure I'm not"
"Hey Ry!" Troy had appeared along with Chad in his truck. As he stops right next to us, the truck puts out a huge cloud of smoke and turns off. He seriously needed to upgrade.
"Hi Troy, Chad!" Shar and I say in unison.
"Hey mountain lion"
"What did you just tell me!" Shar yells, staring Chad down.
"Calm down I didn't say anything mountain lion." A smirk forming on his face. Like that Shar knew he was messing around but knowing Shar she was going to have the last word.
"Whatever come on Ry we got a plane to catch. Bye Troy! Bye Scrub!" She walks away, chin held high smiling that she got the last word yet again.
"Hahaha she called you a scrub!"
"Shut up Troy!"
"jejeje fine scrub hahaha" Chad just stares at Troy obviously this was going to last them a while.
"So Troy I think I better get going Shar's waiting."
"Ok oh Ry I was wondering if you would like you know try out for the play? I mean you know um with me?"
"Um are you sure?"
"Um yea why not?" While Troy and I were talking I saw the look Chad gave me and Troy. His eyes went wide, his face was in shock and next thing I know he says,
"Your actually gonna try out for that queer show!" you could practically taste the venom coming from his words.
Troy and I both just stared at Chad, the words still hanging in the air, my mind trying to grab meaning to what he said. I spoke up first.
"What did you say?"
"Shut up faggot I'm not talking to you! Troy are you really gonna try out for THAT play!"
"…Get out." Apperently Chad was not expecting that.
"What !"
"You heard me Chad GET OUT!" As I saw what was going on in front of me, Shar pulls up with her music blasting.
"Im a barbie girl, in a barbie world . Life is plastic, its fantastic! Come on Ry Milan is waiting!"
"Huh?"
"Hurry up!" She yells at me.
"OK I'm going! Wait a sec!" I turn to Troy. I had no idea if anything else was said because now Chad was storming out of the car. He gives me one last look, steam nearly coming out of his ears… He walks away.
"Well um what do you say Ry be my partener?" I give him a nod still dumbstruck from what just occurred. I see a small smile on him but also a sadness in his eyes that I have never seen before.
"RY! " She hits the horn a couple times.
"Well I better go we'll get to practicing after spring break till then, see you."
I don't wait for a respone. I get in Shar's pink convertible, I look at Troy, a tear goes down his face, we drive off. Shar is just singing along to her music, not noticing the rest of the world and I feel Troy just lost his best friend.