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II

TREEHOUSE 7:49 PM

Marceline comes floating from her house in pajamas toward the Treehouse. "Man, what's all that noise?" She sees the Treehouse in the distance and notices it has a hole on it. She sees Jake holding Finn on the floor. "Oh, no.." Marceline starts to fly fast at Jake. She stops to see a crying dog holding his brother. Marceline puts her hand over her mouth in fear and disgust. Seeing Finn all bloody and dismembered made her gag and cry at the same time.

DEADWORLD

Finn walks in the castle of light to see a massive amount of people in lines. At the beginning of the lines are signs. This room held lines 35-50. Finn could see skeleton people holding some kind of black ticket and giving it to a person at a desk. "Weird. Why do I keep my skin?" Finn is cut off by bird with no feathers.

"Hey, you." Finn turns around to look at the bird.

"Oh, hey."

"Are you... Finn the Human?" The bird says while looking at a white ticket.

"Yeah, I'm Finn." The bird hands him the ticket.

"Here. Looks like you're a special case." the bird leaves and Finn looks at the ticket.

CONGRATULATIONS!

You are chosen to see Death! Go to line number instructed below-

#1

"Hey! I'm number one! Awesome!" Finn runs a couple rooms away from the one where was and ends up in a room with a single sign in it that says "#1". "Hm." Finn approaches the desk and sees a bored skeleton. He jumps once he sees Finn.

"Whoa! You actually got picked for #1? Wow. Nice job."

"Yeah, thanks. Um- I was running here and I noticed that there is, like,.. NO one in lines 2 through like, 20."

"Oh, nowadays suck, man."

"That's... depressing."

"Fo' sho'... So anyway you gonna gimme that ticket?"

"Oh." Finn hands him the ticket. The skeleton points through a door to go through to see Death.

Finn enters a room that resembles a waiting room. A small sign on the wall reads, "Please wait for Death to come at your service. Thank You." Finn sighs and sits down in one of the chairs. Seconds later a voice on an intercom calls for Finn. "Whoa, fast." Finn walks through one more door to see a room completely painted white, the walls, floor, and even the table and two chairs in the middle of the room. Finn sees a door appear in a bright light in the far wall in front. A skeleton in a sort of tan colored outfit walks through it. It was Death. He sits down and gestures for Finn to sit. Once Finn sits, Death smiles and talks.

"I'm not going to lie, you surprised me. We haven't gotten someone like you in a while. Got any questions before we head on your way?" Finn did have questions to ask.

"Oh, yeah, what's goin' on with people nowadays?! Nobody is on a high-nummed line.." Death takes out a packet of cigarettes and puts one in his mouth. He lights it by snapping his finger and making fire come out his thumb.

"Ah, yes. People aren't like they used to be.. Before the War. But then again, there were also more bad people back then." Death takes out an extra cigarette. "You want one?"

"Oh, no thanks. I wanna live long-..." Death stares at him. "Oh, right. Heh.. Never mind. Um.. Sorry Jake.. Okay, I'll try." Death hands him one and lights it. Finn coughs at his first inhale.

"It's like that a first, but you'll get used to it." Death puts the pack away.

"(Cough) Uh-(Cough) So would, like, my brother Jake be in line #1 like me if he died? (Cough)"

"No. Maybe line #16.. around there somewhere." Finn is surprised.

"16!? Why?!"

"Back when he was a thief, he was the reason of the death of a poor woman."

"What!? No, Jake would never kill!"

"He didn't. On purpose at least." Finn relaxed a little. "He stole money from a child and mother in poverty. This child was going to use this money to buy a cure for his mother who had a life-threatening disease. But when your brother snatched the money, the child's mother died a slow and painful death." Finn looked down. He wanted to change the subject to something a little less solemn.

"So... How were you able to call me in so fast from the waiting room?"

"Like I said, we don't get people like you anymore."

"Oh, right.. Well then what's the difference between lines?" Death makes a smoke ring from his mouth. Finn was wondering how he did that with no lips.

"More rights. Better looking Deadworld."

"Look, your brother would be in line #16. So he'd be in the 16th Deadworld, which looks decently nice with no strict laws. And since he passed line #20, he'll have his young body back." Finn gets confused at the 'body' part.

"Body? What?"

"If you to line #20 and up, you get your body back to it's prime. You got your same body because you were in the best shape of your life when you died."

"Oh! I get it."

"Good. Is that all of your questions?" Finn thinks it over.

"Yeah, it is."

"Then let's go to your chosen Deadworld." Death opens a portal and tells Finn to walk through it. Once Finn walks in, he appears in a grassland at about sunset time. Death walks through the portal and throws cigarette on the floor and steps on it. Finn does the same to his. Finn looks at Death.

"This is the 1st Deadworld?"

"The 1st Deadworld is what ever you want it to be. There has never been many cases when somebody gets into the 1st Deadworld." Finn gasps.

"I get my own world!?"

"Yes. And since you have the land of Ooo as your ideal setting, it appears as your first Deadworld."

"Sick." Finn smiles and looks to his left to see his Treehouse.

"This is your new home, Finn the Human." As death is about to leave, Finn asks him one more question.

"Hey, Death? Got any more cigarette packages?"

CHAPTER II

End

CHAPTER III Coming Soon