This story has two disclaimers.
Number One: I've asked for the permission of FelesMagica for the chance to rewrite her story of Dark and Light Veelas.
Number Two: I don't own this. JK does. I just wrote this because I'm bored and like to write for FF.
Warnings: This story will contain a Female Harry (Rose) and may contain sexual scenes with Magical Creatures. That's why it's rated M
Couple: Fem HP/ Draco. The Rest is unknown.
Chapter One: Transformation of the dominant and the Submissive.
It's was five minutes to go before the clock struck midnight. Draco Malfoy was being prepared to go through the most important night of his life. It was the night of his sixteen's birthday and he was about to go through the ritual that would turn him into a fully blood Dark Veela. Draco was confined to his bedroom, surrounded by his parents Lucius and Narcissa Malfoy, his godfather and Uncle Severus Snape, who tried to calm his parents and the boy in front of him. It was a well known fact to everybody of the wizarding world, that this process would hurt a lot.
"Do you want to tell me what the hell I can expect?" Draco snarled in annoyance.
His father looked very tired all of the sudden. "If you'd give me the opportunity." He ran well-manicured hands through his long bangs, pushing them off his forehead and sighed. "There are three parts to the Transition. The first is called the 'Manifestation,' where the Veela alters your magical aura to match that of your future mate, so you'll be magical equals. You'll gain some abilities and lose others. The second is the 'Emergence,' where the Veela chemistry alters your body. You're remade inside and out. You'll be physically tougher, you'll have greater endurance, your cell growth will slow so you won't age at the normal rate, and your immune system will be stronger. This is so you'll be able to protect your mate against all threats during your lives together. However if you can find your mate within seventy two hours and providing you are the dominant part of your bond, you can change parts of her appearance to your satisfaction. You'll also have control of your scent glands so you can mark your mate once you find her. The third is the 'Presentation,' where the Veela half will give you a vision of your Bond Mate. This is called 'opening your Third Eye.' With your enhanced senses, and a firm fix on what she looks like, you'll be able to find your ideal mate anywhere in the world, by passing any type of magic. You'll use your physical, pheromonal and magically enhanced attributes to bind her to you once you have her." His lips twisted in a mocking smirk. "Basically, the quicker you get her into bed, the stronger the bond is. He or she has to be a willing partner though."
"Sounds like fun." said Draco dryly joked, a bitter frown on his lips.
His father shrugged. "The third part's not so bad." He looked at him sharply through narrowed eyes. "I'm not going to lie to you, though, son. The Transition is a very personal experience. Every Veela male undergoes it differently. During the first and second stages, it was very, very painful for me. It was like shards of glass were being shoved directly into my nerves at first, then like I was being torn in two. I begged for death." He shuddered and shook his head in disgust. "My father's experience was entirely different, however. He explained it as feeling like being hooked on powerful potions for drug inhibition and acceleration – like he was flying and falling at the same time and couldn't make the sensation stop until it was over. I'm sure he vomited his guts out after and despised feeling so weak and out of control. And his father, Abraxas, was extremely violent and angry. His room was trashed by the time the third stage took him."
Snape then stepped forward, "That's why I'm here. I'd brought several potions that will help you. One of them is a pain reliever so you won't be in as much pain as you would normally be during the transformation. The other is a Blood replenishing. It could be that through your transformation you will lose a bit of blood, especially when your wings will appear. The next bottle will make your soul broadcast itself to your mate. So you can, with a bit of luck, find your mate through the connection you share. It should allow you to make contact by the time you awake. You would appear in your mate's dreams and thoughts, to be able to recognize him or her. Finally, the last bottle will put you asleep. You will sleep through your whole transformation. When you awake the next time, you will be fully transformed into a male Veela, your magic will be stable to use and you will share the unique connection with your new mate."
As Draco drowned the last bottle, his eyes rolled back and fell into a peaceful sleep as the clock struck midnight. Narcissa then spoke, "now all we can do is wait and hope."
Rose Potter moaned in pain. Uncle Vernon wasn't as dumb as he looked. He understood that if Rose was in danger of being killed by a mass murderer, Rose staying at his family's home would mean that they would be in danger, too. He screamed, cursed, yelled and finally beat her up like he had never done it before in her whole life. It made the child abuse from her earlier life seem like a small thing.
Her door was locked several times and she hadn't gotten anything to eat. Her body hurt like hell and she was sure, that several of her bones were broken, as she couldn't move her legs and her right arm properly. She had cuts and bruises all over her body and her head hurt like it was going to explode. Furthermore she felt like throwing up und felt a little bit lightheaded because of the blood she had lost and the lack of food and water. She glanced at her clock on the window still before coughing up a mouthful of blood. The clock read 11:59:45pm. Rose sighed because tomorrow would be her sixteenth birthday. Fifteen seconds left.
Fourteen seconds.
Thirteen seconds.
Rose turned over and stared at her roof, imaging her friends staying at Grimmauld Place, her godfather's home.
Twelve seconds.
A tear leaked to her eye as she remembered her godfather. He died because of her stupid actions.
Eleven.
"Sirius. I'm so sorry." Whispered Rose.
Ten.
"I need you Padfoot."
Nine.
"I need you to tell me that my parents would love me for what I am."
Eight.
"It's not fair"
Seven.
"I want to join you Sirius. Join you and my parents."
Six
"You were the only one who cared for me like a daughter."
Five
"You are the only one who cared for me because.."
Four
"...I was Rose Potter."
Three
"Not the girl who lived."
Two
"I love you."
One
At that moment it happen, a spasm shot through her body and she started to convulse. She felt like her chest was on fire. She couldn't breath and her vision began to blur. The convulsion got worse. She had to bite her tongue until it bled to stop herself from crying out loud. Suddenly a sharp pain erupted in her heart. Her body felt like being burned alive and her room started to shake. The pain got so intense, she couldn't help herself. Finally a scream full of pain and agony erupted from her lips and then everything got black. She then heard the words in the words of her late godfather.
"Happy Birthday kiddo."
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