Review Responding Time!
ThorbringstheThunder- Good chapter, not a lot to report in terms of strategy. Are you going to write non-elimination chapters? Also, if you've removed the canon winners rule, I expect a Brick vs Sky finale.
Me- Thanks!, Yeah not a lot of strategy you can unveil in the first episode.
Yeah I will be doing the non elimination chapters.
Good prediction...
keyblademasteravenger- Dawn is crafty kinda in her own sweet way. Loved how she politely asked Lightning to move before she pressure pointed the boy.
Sam? He either have plot or an early boot. He's the character that varies. He does have potential though and who doesn't love an underdog?
Even though I despise cannon TDA I believe this can turn out much better. Good luck writing!
Me- I agree with what your saying about Sam... but we'll have to see.
I don't really despise TDA that much, don't get me wrong it's not my favorite season but I never really found it terrible. My least favorite season probably is Pahkitew Island... but with Daycare coming up it may steal that title from Pahkitew.
Crow38- Looks good so far.
Are the hosts for the Aftermath gonna be a TD Couple from Action or Island?
Me- Can't say as of right now, but you'll see soon.
AnonReviewer- Glad the sequel to "Total Drama What If? Island" is now up and this first chapter was fun to read! Of course Sugar of all people would eat all the fake food. Very fitting for her. Like Brick, I don't really understand Scott and Amy's relationship myself; is each having a rotten inside perhaps what they like about each other?
On another note, whether canon finalists now have a chance of going to the finale here or not, I definitely didn't expect Scott or Jasmine (even if she was competing in this season) to make the final 2 again when Total Drama basically has an unspoken rule where no contestant ever goes to the finals more than once if at all. It's probably to help avoid repetition as having someone go to the finale more than once would get old. The closest we ever got to that in canon was how Owen, Zoey, and Heather each got third place in one season and reached the finals in another.
Excited for the next chapter, and I like how those from last season who didn't qualify will get to make cameos in the game! That should be fun to see.
Me- It's not 100% confirmed a canon finalist will win but it is a possibility
Thanks! Glad your enjoying the cameos!
" Last time on TOTAL DRAMA IS- I mean ACTION! Fourteen teenagers, one engaging host, an dilapidated film lot, and a whole lot of COIN. Oh and did I mention, a remote control MONSTER? I love this show.. Some fared betters than others" Chris said
"Shows clip of Lightning avoiding the monster"
" Lightning ran for his life but didn't make it very far due to his poor sense of direction" Chris said
" Then our gal Sugar chowed down on fake food props and scored the reward. First pick of the cast trailers! Shockingly, Sugar picked the wrong one. The girls hope of victory was crushed. Who will be one step closer to the million bucks? Find out on another shocking episode of TOTAL DRAMA ACTION!" Chris said
~ Craft Services Tent~
The contestants stand in line as Chef gives them moldy eggs and prunes
" How many calories are in these eggs?!, I am on a diet!" Amy said
" Do I look the FDA to you?! I don't know a damn thing about some calories... Just go on and eat ya breakfast!" Chef said
" Um.. NO! I am not leaving until I get some proper service around here" Amy said
" Hey Scott, I'm kinda in a hurry today. Can you tell your girlfriend to chill out?" Shawn asked
" I can't control her... If anything she controls ME." Scott said sadly
CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT
" I don't mind being controlled"
" I just told the zombie kid that to earn some pity votes"
" Something's telling me the first elimination is coming soon"
"And as my status as a master strategist and a WINNER... I'll have a huge target on my back"
END CONFESSIONAL
Shawn prepares to leave the craft services tent but is stopped by Sky and Dave
" Hey Shawn!, If you don't have anywhere to sit, you can always sit with us" Sky said
" ... Okay?" Shawn said
CONFESSIONAL: SHAWN
" Dangit, I should've said no!"
" I just hope me being nice doesn't come back to bite me in the butt"
" But I did do a thorough search last season and I don't think anyone here is a zombie"
"Except maybe Dawn..."
END CONFESSIONAL
Sky, Dave, and Shawn sit together
" So what do you guys think the first challenge will be?" Sky asked
" I'm hoping for a zombie movie challenge, It'll help me get prepared for the real thing" Shawn said
" I don't care what the challenge is as long as it isn't incredibly nasty" Dave said
CONFESSIONAL: DAVE
" I mostly hang out with Sky and Shawn a lot because I consider them the sanest person here"
" I know Shawn is a stretch when it comes to being sane"
" But it's either him or a dirt farmer, two nerds, some army guy and the dude who says "sha-bam" all the time"
END CONFESSIONAL
Lightning and Brick watch in disgust as Sugar puts ketchup on her pancakes
" Um Sugar,... I'm afraid to inform that is ketchup not syrup" Brick said
" I know it's ketchup, silly! But ketchup goes with everything!" Sugar said
Sugar then gobbled down the pancakes in ketchup
"... That ain't right" Lightning said
CONFESSIONAL: LIGHTNING
" That was a sha-travesty!"
" Ketchup is supposed to go on something nice and meaty like chicken tenders!"
" But pancakes?!.. I'm lucky I didn't sha-hurl"
END CONFESSIONAL
Cameron attempts to sit by Dawn and Staci
" Um.. would you two mind if I sit here?" Cameron asked
" No it is fine, Cameron" Dawn said
Cameron sat down at their table
" So back to my story.. I was watching TV this one time and I saw the craziest thing. It was like this thing that looked like something I saw out of a dream. Not just any dream the dream I had the night before!" Staci said
" Um... does she do this regularly?" Cameron asked
" Yes but you get used to it" Dawn said
CONFESSIONAL: CAMERON
" Without Rodney, Mike or Zoey here..."
" I realized I haven't talked to anyone here that much.."
"So I'm trying to expand my horizons, I'm hoping I can make some potential allies.."
" Dawn and Staci seemed like a good place to start since all three of us are outsiders"
END CONFESSIONAL
Sammy decides to sit down at a table with Sam and Scarlett
Sam is playing a video game and Scarlett is reading a book
" Hey! My name is-" Sammy said before interrupted
"Shh..." Scarlett/Sam said
" Oh...okay." Sammy said
CONFESSIONAL: SAMMY
" As an early out, I don't know much of the people here that well..."
"I at least want to make one friend before the competition is over!"
END CONFESSIONAL
Chris enters the craft services tent, he's wearing a red beret matching with a red scarf
"Welcome to day two of TOTAL DRAMA ACTION!" Chris said
Chris then took out a clapperboard and clapped it
"Are you going to be doing that every time there's a challenge?" Scarlett asked
"Yes, Yes I will" Chris said
"Today's movie genre is all about ALIENS! Our unpaid interns have been hard at work to figure what makes an alien movie successful, Chef?" Chris asked
The camera turned to Chef who was stirring a pot
" You got three basic rules, aliens want to take over the world and start making lots of baby aliens. People fight back and then the military gets involved" Chef said
Chef flicked some green goop that was inside the pot, it landed on Scott
" Yo Chris... Where's my paycheck at?!" Chef asked angrily
" I-It's in the mail..." Chris stuttered
Chef growled
" Your challenge is to find an alien egg and return to home base before mama alien finds YOU" Chris said
" First two there get to pick teams for this season" Chris said
" I got this is in the bag! Behind zombies, I'm also prepared for when aliens try and take over our minds" Shawn said
" We get it your a weirdo... Can we move on with the challenge?" Amy asked
CONFESSIONAL: SHAWN
" She won't be coming up with any snarky comments when a zombies is chewing on her BRAINS"
" Scratch that, I doubt someone like Amy even has a brain.."
END CONFESSIONAL
" Yo Chris! You got some sort of monster playing mama alien?" Lightning asked
" Not quite... Coming in right from last season, it's today's cameo... Rodney!" Chris said
Rodney entered the craft services tent wearing an alien suit
"Hey guys!" Rodney said
" Ugh... anyone but HIM" Amy said
" You call that an alien? Makeup! We need some more slime.." Chris said
Slime was then poured on Rodney
"Eugh... What is this stuff?" Rodney asked
" Alien goop, helps make it more authentic" Chris said
" Here are your GPS devices, complete with maps of the film lot. Find the alien eggs but be careful cuz today your on Rodney's menu!" Chris said
Chris tossed GPS devices to the contestants
CONFESSIONAL: RODNEY
" When Chris asked me to cameo, I didn't expect me to wear some octopus suit"
" Man, I don't really want to hunt for them... There my friends!"
" Well except for Scarlett and Amy man... they're mean"
Chris entered the confessional
" Cameo's CANNOT use the confessional" Chris said
" Oh my bad!"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Alien Movie Set~
The fourteen contestants walk in a straight line
" If you wanna live, you should stick by me!" Shawn said
"You do realize that's it's just Rodney and not a real alien, right?" Dave asked
"Duh but this is always good training is case the REAL aliens come.." Shawn said
" While there is evidence that there's beings beyond our planet, none of it has been confirmed. So I suggest you keep your theories to yourself" Scarlett said
"Um... How did you get into our group?" Sam asked
" There are no groups yet and there is only one way to go at the moment" Scarlett said
Dawn stopped and looked at the door
"What's wrong?" Cameron asked
" I am sensing the tiniest soul, Whoever is in that room has little to no human emotions" Dawn said
~ Editing Room~
Chris sat in the editing room with a smile on his face
"Aww... Thanks" Chris said
" Now take that!" Chris said
Chris pressed a button releasing some fog
~ Alien Movie Set~
The contestants stop when they hear some weird noise
"Shh..." Shawn said
Sugar then farted
She then pointed towards Sam
" It was him..." Sugar whispered
The weird noise gets louder
"What is that?" Brick asked
Everyone looked at Sam
" What? It's not my video game... I turned that off before the challenge started" Sam said
" Chris, are you doing this?" Dawn asked
~Editing Room~
" I get blamed for everything" Chris said
~Alien Movie Set~
" So... anyone wanna go see what that sound is?" Dave asked
" I'll do it!" Brick said
Sugar then pushed Brick aside
" Naw I wanna do it! There's gotta be an alien stopping trophy I could get for this..." Sugar said
Sugar then walked and turned the corner to see...
...
...
Rodney eating a pb an j sandwich
" It's cool guys, Rodney's just eating a sandwich!" Sugar said
Everyone then came to see the sight
"That was you?" Scott asked
"W-Wuh? I wuh ju eting a sambich" Rodney mumbled still eating the sandwich
" Ew... were you raised in a barn?" Amy asked
" Yeah." Rodney said
" Wait aren't you supposed to be capturing us?" Sammy asked
" Chris told me to wait for the signal.." Rodney said
Everyone's GPS devices went off and an alarm screaming "DANGER" went off.
" That's the one!" Rodney said
Rodney got out his alien paintball gun and everyone ran in different directions
~Groups~
Group 1: Scott and Amy
Group 2: Lightning, Sky, Dave, and Brick
Group 3: Shawn
Group 4: Sugar, Staci, Dawn, and Cameron
Group 5: Sammy, Sam, and Scarlett
CONFESSIONAL: SHAWN
" If I had to put my money on who get's captured first"
" It'd probably be Scott and Amy, couples always die in movies like these"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Group 5~
" Focus up, everyone! I must win this challenge!" Scarlett ordered
" Um... could you maybe go somewhere else?" Sammy asked
" Yeah your not the most positive person to be around" Sam said
Scarlett stopped and walked up to the two
" I do not care if you like me or not, but in order to win this challenge we must work as an unit" Scarlett said
" Does unit imply some sort of alliance?" Sam asked
Rodney slowly appeared behind Sam upside down but stumbled and fell down
Sam put up his hands in self defense
"What was that?!" Sam asked
CONFESSIONAL: SAM
" Heh..."
" I may not be the most buff, or best dressed, or best looking"
" But thanks to gaming, I have sweet hand-eye coordination skills!"
END CONFESSIONAL
Rodney then tapped Sam's shoulder
"Nani?" Sam asked
" Sorry." Rodney said
Rodney then blasted Sam with his green goop gun
Sam flew a few feet and landed on his butt
"Rodney... you were supposed to say "omae wa shinderu" Sam said
Sammy and Scarlett attempted to run away but Rodney hit them both
" Grrr..." Scarlett growled
CONFESSIONAL: SCARLETT
" That was a pathetic performance"
" Not only was I beaten by Rodney of all people..."
" But now I can't even pick the teams!"
" What a waste"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Group 3~
Rodney walked around the movie set looking for potential victims
Shawn jumps down from the pipes
" Prepare to die, alien!" Shawn said
Shawn then took out his own alien gun
" My name is Rodney, Shawn... and where did you get that?!" Rodney asked
" I know your Rodney, dude. I'm just getting into character. And as for this baby I snagged it early in the morning while everyone was asleep" Shawn said
" So, we doing this?" Shawn said
"Sure I guess." Rodney asked
Rodney fired shots at Shawn, Shawn dodged most of them but one shot hit him
He fell down
" Shawn... Are you okay?" Rodney asked
Shawn then jumped up much to Rodney's surprise
" Shawn?! I thought you were dead!" Rodney said
" Nah, I was just using the possum technique. See if the aliens think your dead they won't want to dissect your brains" Shawn said
~Editing Room~
"What was that? Where's the guts, the gore. No worries... I'll fix it" Chris said with a smirk
Chris then put on a camo hat
" I really should wear camo more"
~ Group 4~
Sugar, Dawn, Cameron and Staci walk into a suspicious room the door closes behind them'
"Does like anyone know how we got here?" Staci asked
" If we knew, we wouldn't be lost." Cameron said
" Something smells fishy and not like the actual fish kind like something's about to go down!" Sugar said
" Sugar is right, we must get out of here" Dawn said
~ Alien Movie Set~
Rodney took a hose and attached to a pipe, he then turned on the pipe which sucked the green goo upwards
" I hope this is the right room" Rodney said
~ Group 4~
Sugar, Cameron, Dawn, and Staci were all banging on the door
" Wait a minute... Dawn can't you just teleport us out of here?" Staci asked
But before Dawn could answer green goo sprayed all over the four contestants
...
Sugar then licked the green goo
"Yummy! Tastes just like juggy chunks!" Sugar said
CONFESSIONAL: DAWN
" I would of teleported me and my friends out of there.."
" But whoever wins gets to pick teams and I unfortunately say I don't think I would be up to the task"
" Sure I could lead a whole team of animals... But people?... That's a completely different story"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Group 1~
Scott and Amy run around searching for the egg
Scott trips and falls down
"Ow! Stupid fake props!" Scott said
" Hurry up! I am not losing this challenge be-" Amy said before interrupted
Before Amy could finish her sentence she trips on the same prop and lands on Scott
The two end up kissing
"... Skip the challenge?" Scott asked
"Definitely" Amy said
The two did not bother to get up and resumed making out
Rodney then walked in on them
" Would it be awkward if I shot you two?" Rodney asked
" Yes! Now go away, I'm busy!" Amy said before resuming to make out with Scott
Rodney glared at Amy and Scott and then shot them both
"EEEEEEEWWWW! I have green goop in my hair!" Amy said before running off
"Amy wait!... Thanks for the ruining the mood ya doofus" Scott said
Scott ran after Amy leaving Rodney with a confused look on his face
" Man am I glad she's not my girlfriend" Rodney said
~ Group 2: Boiler Room~
Lightning, Sky, Dave, and Brick arrive at the boiler room
" Whoa it looks so real..." Brick said
" Sha-yeah! WE WON!" Lightning said
" Not really, we still have to get the eggs back to home base" Dave said
" Quick! Lower me down!" Sky said
Lightning and Brick pulled Sky down to where the eggs were. She grabs four eggs
She hands one to each person
The door begins to open, Rodney quickly enters and shoots Dave and Sky
Lightning and Brick take the chance to run away
Rodney chases after the two
" AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH THERE"S SLIME EVERYWHERE! HAND SANITIZER, I NEED HAND SANITIZER!" Dave screamed
Sky then took Dave by the shoulders and looked him in the eyes
" Hey, Deep breaths... Your okay" Sky said calmly
Dave slowly began to calm down
Sky and Dave look at each other and smile
CONFESSIONAL: DAVE
"Strange.. I'd usually freak out more than that"
"Sky has a surprisingly calm effect on me..."
" She should consider becoming a therapist"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: SKY
" I think Dave likes me a little bit"
" But after my lackluster performance last season, my main focus is to win"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Western Movie Set~
Lightning and Brick exit the alien movie set and enter the western movie set
Rodney also exits the movie set and points his alien gun at the two
There they see Chris on his helicopter
" Attention civilians the military is here to protect you, unfortunately we can't allow you to leave with the alien eggs." Chris said through the megaphone
" But Commander Chris! You gave us a direct order to capture the eggs and bring them back to home base" Brick said
" I did..." Chris said with a chuckle
Chris then dropped two alien goo nukes
" Incoming!" Brick yelled
Brick, Rodney, and Lightning ducked for cover
Alien goop covers the entire western movie set
" Glad I don't have to clean it up" Chris said
Brick and Lightning look at each other for alien goo, they were both clean
" We did it dude!" Lightning said
" Yeah!" Brick said
Brick and Lightning high fived
Meanwhile Rodney was trying to get up but was having trouble due to all the alien goo
" Guys... A little help" Rodney said
" Nuh uh, Mr. Alien. Lightning don't want you tickling my brain or whatever you aliens do" Lightning said
"Uh... Maybe we could help him. I know it's a challenge but even aliens need assistance" Brick said
"Were going to home base soldier and that's an order!" Lightning yelled
"Sir yes sir!" Brick said
Brick and Lightning ran off
CONFESSIONAL: BRICK
" Sure leaving Rodney behind wasn't the most honorable thing to do"
" But now I get to pick my own teams!"
" Leading a squadron has been a dream of mine since cadet school" Brick said wiping a tear from his eye
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: LIGHTNING
" Sha-yeah! Lightning gets to be the leader!"
" Now I can pick the strongest players while Army guy can take the weak ones"
" And with a team of the strong, Lightning can go long, all the way to the finish line. Sha-bam!"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Trailers~
Everyone that was covered in goop waits at the trailers
Lightning and Brick soon arrive
" We have our winners, our ONLY two winners. The rest of you really stink... As our winners Lightning and Brick get to pick their own teams" Chris said
"After you all vote off someone in the most thrilling Gilded Chris Ceremony yet" Chris said
This was met with several gasps
"We haven't even formed teams yet!" Sky said
" I know, that's what'll make it exciting" Chris said
~ Girls Trailer~
The girls discuss who to vote off
" If no else has any better ideas, how about I suggest something?" Scarlett asked
The girls ignore Scarlett and continue to talk to one another
" Hello?... Why are you all avoiding me? Genius talking here" Scarlett said
" Scarlett, after all that crap you pulled last season. No one wants to listen to what you have to say anymore" Sammy said
" Well then.." Scarlett said
Scarlett got up and left the trailer
CONFESSIONAL: SCARLETT
" Why am I being ostracized?"
" Scott won last season, he should be the main target on everyone's radar"
"But if the girls won't listen to me, maybe the guys will have some sense"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Boys Trailer~
Scarlett enters the boys trailer
The boys were discussing who to vote off
"Scott. LEAVE" Scarlett ordered
" So you can tell everyone to vote me off?... Not a chance!" Scott said
"Well then I'll make you leave" Scarlett said while cracking her knuckles
Scarlett threw Scott out of the trailer and then locked it
" Now that the trash has been taken out, How about we talk business?" Scarlett asked
" Not interested.." Shawn said
" LISTEN TO REASON. Scott WON last season and for a good reason at that, if you do not get him out now, you'll never have another chance" Scarlett said
The boys exchanged looks and shrugged
" But didn't you get 3rd place?" Sam asked
" Well yes but I never got to make the finale" Scarlett stated
" Still out of twenty seven contestants, that's pretty impressive" Cameron said
" Ugh... You people are impossible" Scarlett said with a groan
She then left the trailer and slammed the door
Scott then re-entered the trailer
" Lemme guess she tried to convince you guys to vote me off?" Scott asked
" Pretty much" Dave said
CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT
" I knew being targeted for winning was gonna happen"
"Didn't expect it to happen so soon..."
" But the Scottmeister has a plan"
END CONFESSIONAL
Scott then fell to his knees and started crying
"Scott?!... Are you okay?!" Brick asked rushing to Scott's side
"No... It's just with all the pressure of me winning last season... I was hoping to use the money to help my parents with the farm" Scott said
The guys gave him a sympathetic look
"I-It's okay dude..." Shawn said awkwardly
CONFESSIONAL: SHAWN
" Out of all the guys here, did not expect Scott to be the first one to cry"
" Who knew he was such a sofite?"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: LIGHTNING
" I get wanting to help his parents and all... but crying?"
"What a sha-wimp!"
"Lightning only cries when his favorite team loses the Super Bowl!"
END CONFESSIONAL
CONFESSIONAL: SCOTT
" Sympathy... It can do wonders for a guy like me"
" Hopefully they all believed my phony backstory I came up with"
" Nice try, Scarlett. But you'll have to try harder to get rid of me"
END CONFESSIONAL
~ Gilded Chris Ceremony~
"Various clips from Total Drama Island begin to play"
There's two sets of bleachers
Scott, Amy, Scarlett, Sam, Cameron, Lightning, and Brick sit near the top of the bleachers
Dave, Shawn, Sky, Sugar, Staci, Dawn, and Sammy sit near the bottom of the bleachers
After the music was done playing Chris walked onto the podium
" It's time to cast your votes, under your seats you'll find your voting devices. Just press the button of the person you want voted off" Chris said
Lightning tried peeking at Scott's voting device. Scott turned around and glared at the jock
" Oh and no peeking or it's... na na. na na na na na hey hey goodbye" Chris said with a chuckle
" The votes have been cast" Chris said
Chef walked into the stage wearing a hot pink dress
The contestants laughed at Chef
" And the gilded Chris' go to... Lightning!" Chris said
"Brick!"
" Sky!"
"Dave!"
"Cameron!"
"Sammy!"
"Staci!"
"Sugar!"
"Dawn!"
"Amy!"
"Shawn!"
"and... Sam!"
Chef threw the gilded Chris' at the teens
" Scarlett, Scott. One of you is about to be the first person voted off. And that person is..." Chris said
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"... Scarlett!"
Chef threw the last gilded Chris towards Scott
" Yes!" Scott cheered
" I should've known you morons wouldn't of listened to my advice" Scarlett said
" But believe me when I say this isn't the last you've seen of me" Scarlett said
Scarlett got up from the bleachers walked across the Walk of Shame and headed into the lamo-sine
GOODBYE SCARLETT
"Who will Lightning and Brick pick for their teams? How long will Scott be able to say in the game? And what's gonna happen with Dave and Sky? Find out all of this and more on TOTAL DRAMA ACTION!" Chris said
~ Bonus Scene~
Scarlett sits in the lamo-sine with a smug look on her face
" This elimination is nothing but an obstacle, I'm going to overcome" Scarlett said
Scarlett then took out the total drama rulebook
" I read up on the rules of this game before the season started. It says here pg.17, article 3. # If a total drama contestant is seriously injured due to a challenge, he or she has the right to sue the production for whatever she pleases" Scarlett stated
" I'll sue this show for everything it's got! Which is the million dollars, I won't even have to play the game! The million will be handed to me!" Scarlett yelled
Scarlett then took deep breaths and calmed down
" Until then... I will wait" Scarlett said with a devilish grin
That was Chapter Two! If you enjoyed it then as always leave a review and favorite
Spoilers Below
Reason for elimination, Scarlett: When deciding an early out, you have to think about whose going to contribute to making this a great season. I unfortunately had nothing planned for Scarlett this season so the choice for me was obvious. But she might make an appearance in the near future... who knows?
Authors Note: Going to be busy Sunday so decided to upload this a day early
Elimination Order:
Scarlett-14th
Votes for Scarlett
Scott-Scarlett
Amy- Scarlett
Shawn- Scarlett
Dave- Scarlett
Brick- Scarlett
Lightning- Scarlett
Sammy- Scarlett
Sugar- Scarlett.
Votes for Scott
Scarlett- Scott
Sky- Scott
Dawn- Scott
Staci- Scott
Sam- Scott
Cameron- Scott