This is my sis's story that I was talking about… so tell me what you think.
Horror at the park
Sitting with my sister, on the old majestic yellow swings. Back then we were great friends and talked about every thing. It was 7 pm and my friends were going to come and meet us there. The sun was lowering and it seemed like every moment some one disappeared. Suddenly a dark figure was laughing viciously, walking constantly, and glaring towards my sister and me. It was dark now and the streets light were flickering on. Looking around there was only us two, and the dark figure. Staring towards my sister she had a pale almost white look on her face. Glancing at the figure I thought it was one of my friends Llora. Saying her name, I got NO response! Holding a gun the figure got closer and closer. Closing my eyes in fear, I awaited for my fate. "Bam!" there was a gunshot! Opening my eyes, I almost fell off my swing in astonishment I saw my lifeless sister lying on the cold, red grass as the figure walked away.